Greek Mythology Set

[peeko]

My first set based off of Greek Mythology

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LORE:1 Water Monster + 1 Non-Dark Monster
Poseidon controls the tides of the water, and all sea animals worship him. When on field, Poseidon cancells out all Field Effects except Umi.

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LORE: 1 Dark Monster + 1 Non-Dark Monster.
This monster is the king of the underworld. This monster can also summon a monster from the Graveyard by sacraficing 250 attack points.

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1 Electric Monster + 1 Non-Water Monster
Zeus can control all weather all across the world. When this monster is summoned all field effects are cancelled out.

Please provide contructive crtisism. More to come, including spells and traps.

[Schrödinger]

Well for starters, why don't you go to your local Target/Walmart/Hobby Shop and buy a starter deck. Read the rule book carefully and examine the cards that come with it. Then you can come back and discuss constructive criticism.

Seriously, it feels like half the posters here are just trolling.

[Kito]

your effect make no sence e.g

[b]Zeus can control all weather all across the world.[/b] this should not be here at all fo any reasion. in a sincro. [b]When this monster is summoned all field effects are cancelled out. [/b] this is wrong as well ocg is off nee dmore like

While this card is face-up on the field, negate all outher effect of face-up Effect Monsters on the field.

[Mecha Love]

You need a lot more work on these.
God is not a type
Nor is electric.
Don't mix a description with an effect. Lord of the underworld is not sn effect.
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