War Machines, My first monsters

[N. Naruto]

This is my very first post with my very first monster. It's not much, but I hope to improve with time. I have my reasons for doing this and hope there are enough friendlies willing to lend me a hand. That being said, I'm willing to give credit where credit is due if you can help me find pics for future cards. Just tell me and I'll tell you what I need.

For now, this is the first card and I'll post the second in a bit:

[img]http://img848.imageshack.us/img848/6120/402018.jpg[/img]

I know I should read the faqs, but I'm doing this on a whim and find it easier to learn from experience, but I welcome advice.

PLease tell me what you think.

Second card just so it actually seems like a set in the making.

Tell me what I can do to adjust the effect or if I should overhaul it completely.

[img]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/6120/402018.jpg[/img]

[Mecha Love]

Post the lore, then I can help with OCG errors.

[N. Naruto]

For War Machine Dragon King:

This monster can only be summoned by tributing two monsters, at least one of which must be a "War Machine" monster. If both monsters used to Tribute Summon this monster are "War Machine" monsters, this monster gains 1000 extra attack points. Spell or trap cards cannot be activated when this monster attacks.

Got another new card (I wish I could do how some of the other people on this site manage to put cards side by side):

[img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/6120/402018.jpg[/img]

Lore: This monster can only be summoned on your field face up. This monster cannot be destroyed by your opponent's attacks. This card is sent to the graveyard after 3 attacks involving this card. If this card is sent to the graveyard as the the result of a monster's effect, a spell, or trap, it is returned to your hand during the standby phase of your next turn. If this card is used as for a tribute summon of a War Machine, the suummoned card gains the original attack and defense points of this monster.