gundamcardsftw Posted April 24, 2011 Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 Hello Cardmakers alike! As you can tell, my username has already said that I am presenting Gundam Cards and they are the best Pop Culture Cards ever. Don't be offended. So I think I made a structure deck out of Gundam Cards. Excuse the fact I didn't put any Set IDs or Circulation. That's not the point, now is it. Please enjoy! [spoiler=Monster Cards] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/6357/349984.jpg[/img] [spoiler=RX-78-2 Gundam] This mobile suit is the first effective mobile suit that the Earth Federation has created. It is armed with two powerful beam sabers and a rifle that can beat down any enemy during its time. [/spoiler] [img]http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/6357/349984.jpg[/img] [spoiler=RB-79 Ball] If this card is sent to the graveyard as part of a Synchro Summon, you may draw a card from your deck. If the card is a Gundam type monster, you gain 200 life points. [/spoiler] [img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/2451/349984a.jpg[/img] [spoiler=RX-93 Nu Gundam] This card cannot be Special Summoned. Once per turn, you many remove from play as many Gundam cards from your Graveyard to send the same amount of cards removed on the field to the Graveyard. [/spoiler] [img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/5709/349984e.jpg[/img] [spoiler=RX-78GP03S Gundam Stamen] If during the turn, "RX-78-2 Gundam" is destroyed when this monster is present on the field, draw the spell card "Dendrobium Orchis" from your deck and place it face-down on the field. [/spoiler] [img]http://img576.imageshack.us/img576/6357/349984.jpg[/img] [spoiler=RGM-79 Jim] This is the Earth Federation's main grunt unit. It is a simply downgraded version of the RX-78-2 but because it was mass-produced and its large numbers, it won the One Year War. [/spoiler] [img]http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/6357/349984.jpg[/img] [spoiler=GN-001 Gundam Exia] A mobile suit used by the paramilitary organization Celestial Being, Gundam Exia is known for wielding and brandishing seven swords. [/spoiler] [img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/5851/349984g.jpg[/img] [spoiler=GN-001R1 Gundam Exia Repair I] This card can only be Special Summoned through the use of the spell card "The Return of Celestial Being". [/spoiler] [img]http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/6357/349984.jpg[/img] [spoiler=GN-010 0 Raiser] The 0-Raiser is a support unit that would assist Celestial Being by attaching to Mobile Suits and enhancing their GN Particle output. [/spoiler] [img]http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/6357/349984.jpg[/img] [spoiler=GN-0000+GNR-010 00 Raiser] RX-78-2 Gundam + GN-001RI Gundam Exia Repair I + GNR-010 0 Raiser [/spoiler] [img]http://img594.imageshack.us/img594/6357/349984.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Blackest Knight, Gundam of the Ice Barrier] Once per turn, you may remove from play a Gundam monster or send an Ice Barrier monster that you control to the Graveyard to attack your opponent directly. Halve the attack points of all monsters you control if this effect is used. [/spoiler] [img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/6357/349984.jpg[/img] [spoiler=RX-0 Gundam Unicorn] 1 Tuner + 2 or more non-tuner Gundam monsters When this card is summoned onto the field, you may discard your hand to destroy a spell or trap card. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spell and Trap Cards] [img]http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/6357/349984.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Dendrobium Orchis] This card can only be equipped to "RX-78GP03S Gundam Stamen". When equipped to the referred to monster, increase RX-78GP03S Gundam Stamen's attack points raises 300 points per Gundam monster in the Graveyard. [/spoiler] [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/9462/349984y.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Earth Orbit] All cards that are not Gundam type lose 200 attack points [/spoiler] [img]http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/4783/349984m.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Final Support] Sacrifice a Gundam type monster as well as a 500 life points to increase a Gundam type monster's attack points by 1000. Attack points return to its original amount during the End Phase. [/spoiler] [img]http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/6357/349984.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Gundam Plastic Models] Decrease all Gundam type monsters' attack and defense points to 0 (including ones in your Graveyard, Field, Deck and Hand. You must have at least ten Gundam monsters in your Deck, Field, Hand and Graveyard for this card to be activated). Then, remove from play all monsters on the field. Until this card is destroyed, all cards your opponent sends to the Graveyard is removed from play instead. [/spoiler] [img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/6357/349984.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Anti-Earth Union Group's Last Stand] When this card is activated you may either send a Gundam type monster in your hand to the graveyard to stop a direct attack to your life points or you may sacrifice 1000 life points to prevent a Gundam type monster on the field from being destroyed. [/spoiler] [img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/6357/349984.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Not Yet Begun to Fight] Send "GN-001R1 Gundam Exia Repair I" to the graveyard and place "GN-001 Gundam Exia" onto the field in attack mode. [/spoiler] [img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/6357/349984.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Rebellion of Steel] All Machine or Gundam monsters on the field gain 500 attack points. Once the turn ends, send all monsters affected by this card to the graveyard. [/spoiler] [img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/6357/349984.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Sieg Zeon!] For every Gundam type Monster in your hand, deck, and graveyard, your opponent loses 200 life points. [/spoiler] [img]http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/6357/349984.jpg[/img] [spoiler=The Return of Celestial Being] If the monster "GN-001 Gundam Exia" is destroyed and this card is activated, you may special summon the monster "GN-001RI Gundam Exia Repair I" to the field. [/spoiler] [img]http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/1176/349984j.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Three Laws of Robotics] All Gundam or Machine monsters can only attack other Gundam or Machine monsters. [/spoiler] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/6357/349984.jpg[/img] [spoiler=War Never Ends] Send all cards in your hand to the graveyard. Then select any monster in your opponent's hand or on their side of the field and send it to the graveyard as well. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted April 25, 2011 Report Share Posted April 25, 2011 u kno wat. since u got so cocky over ur cards imma make this critique a lil harsh. 1. many many many OCG errors. Gundam-Type monsters not Gundam monsters. What kind of effect is the 0 raiser? if ur gonna make it a normal text card make it a normal card not an effect monster 2. the monster cards have very bad pictures. exia ignition looks very squished, Jim is GM, nu gundam is a plastic model not a pic, and the others dont even have backgrounds. u put less than lil effort into these. add sum backgrounds not tht hard 3. Capitalize plz. graveyard = Graveyard. special summon = Special Summon spell and trap = Spell or Trap Cards / or Spell & Trap Cards. U need a -Type after every type of monster. life points = Life Points. Many of ur cards need fixed word choice or OCG but im afraid i cant do tht right now. ur a kid who only posts his own topics and doesnt comment on others or give helpful feedback. u obviously have n plz conot seen the other card makers who actually put sum effort. plz consider my advice and fix ur cards. take off the "Best" plz u make me sick wen i see tht Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheKarakuriGuy Posted April 26, 2011 Report Share Posted April 26, 2011 [quote name='sgrug4' timestamp='1303743403' post='5167041'] u kno wat. since u got so cocky over ur cards imma make this critique a lil harsh. 1. many many many OCG errors. Gundam-Type monsters not Gundam monsters. What kind of effect is the 0 raiser? if ur gonna make it a normal text card make it a normal card not an effect monster 2. the monster cards have very bad pictures. exia ignition looks very squished, Jim is GM, nu gundam is a plastic model not a pic, and the others dont even have backgrounds. u put less than lil effort into these. add sum backgrounds not tht hard 3. Capitalize plz. graveyard = Graveyard. special summon = Special Summon spell and trap = Spell or Trap Cards / or Spell & Trap Cards. U need a -Type after every type of monster. life points = Life Points. Many of ur cards need fixed word choice or OCG but im afraid i cant do tht right now. ur a kid who only posts his own topics and doesnt comment on others or give helpful feedback. u obviously have n plz conot seen the other card makers who actually put sum effort. plz consider my advice and fix ur cards. take off the "Best" plz u make me sick wen i see tht [/quote] Dick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BloodBlader Posted April 26, 2011 Report Share Posted April 26, 2011 lol bad sorry but most don’t have backgrounds 3/10 [Spoiler=Ps check mine out] http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/230773-welcome-to-white-base-the-gundam-card-central-comment-and-rate/ [/Spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Expelsword Posted April 28, 2011 Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 Because I like Gundams, I will fix all of your cards free of charge. Click to see their fixed lores. [quote name='gundamcardsftw' timestamp='1303679822' post='5165188'] [spoiler=Monster Cards] [spoiler=RX-78-2 Gundam] This Mobile Suit is the first effective Mobile Suit created by the Earth Federation. It is armed with two powerful beam sabers and a rifle that could beat down any enemy during its time. [/spoiler] [spoiler=RB-79 Ball] If this card is sent to the Graveyard for a Synchro Summon, draw 1 card. If the card is a "Gundam" monster, increase your Life Points by 200.[/spoiler] [spoiler=RX-93 Nu Gundam] This card cannot be Special Summoned. Remove from play from your Graveyard as many "Gundam" monsters as possible to send the same number of cards on the field to the Graveyard. [/spoiler] [spoiler=RX-78GP03S Gundam Stamen] If a "RX-78-2 Gundam" you control is destroyed, Set 1 "Dendrobium Orchis" from your Deck face-down on the field. [/spoiler] [spoiler=RGM-79 Jim] This is the Earth Federation's main grunt unit. It is a simply downgraded version of the RX-78-2 but because it was mass-produced in large numbers, it won the One Year War. [/spoiler] [spoiler=GN-001 Gundam Exia] A Mobile Suit used by the paramilitary organization Celestial Being, Gundam Exia is known for wielding and brandishing seven swords. [/spoiler] [spoiler=GN-001R1 Gundam Exia Repair I] This card can only be Special Summoned the Spell Card "The Return of Celestial Being". [/spoiler] [spoiler=GN-010 0 Raiser] The 0-Raiser is a support unit that would assist Celestial Being by attaching to Mobile Suits and enhancing their GN Particle output. [/spoiler] [spoiler=GN-0000+GNR-010 00 Raiser] RX-78-2 Gundam + GN-001RI Gundam Exia Repair I + GNR-010 0 Raiser [/spoiler] [spoiler=Blackest Knight, Gundam of the Ice Barrier] Once per turn, you can remove from play a "Gundam" monster you control or send an "Ice Barrier" monster you control to the Graveyard to halve the ATK of all monsters you control and make all attacks on your opponent this turn direct attacks. [/spoiler] [spoiler=RX-0 Gundam Unicorn] 1 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner "Gundam" monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can discard all cards in your hand to the Graveyard to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spell and Trap Cards] [spoiler=Dendrobium Orchis] Equip only to "RX-78GP03S Gundam Stamen". The equipped monster gains 300 ATK for every "Gundam" monster in your Graveyard.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Earth Orbit] All face-up monsters on the field, except "Gundam" monsters, lose 200 ATK. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Final Support] Tribute 1 "Gundam" monster and pay 500 Life Points to increase the ATK of 1 face-up "Gundam" monster by 1000 until the End Phase. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Gundam Plastic Models] Activate only if you have 10 or more "Gundam" monsters removed from play or in your Graveyard. Remove from play all monsters on the field. While this card remains face-up on the field, the ATK of all "Gundam" monsters you control is reduced to 0 and all cards your opponent sends to the Graveyard are removed from play instead. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Anti-Earth Union Group's Last Stand] Select and activate one of the following effects: * Send a Gundam type monster in your hand to the Graveyard to negate a direct attack by one of your opponent's monsters. * Pay 1000 Life Points to select a "Gundam" monster you control. The selected monster cannot be destroyed this turn. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Not Yet Begun to Fight] Send 1 "GN-001R1 Gundam Exia Repair I" you control to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "GN-001 Gundam Exia" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard in face-up Attack Position. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Rebellion of Steel] All Machine-type monsters on the field gain 500ATK. During the End Phase, send all monsters to the Graveyard that were affected by this effect.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Sieg Zeon!] Inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent for every "Gundam" monster in your hand or Graveyard.[/spoiler] [spoiler=The Return of Celestial Being] Activate if a "GN-001 Gundam Exia" you control is destroyed. Special Summon 1"GN-001RI Gundam Exia Repair I" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Three Laws of Robotics] Machine-type monsters cannot declare an attack unless the attack target is a Machine-type monster. [/spoiler] [spoiler=War Never Ends] Send all cards in your hand to the Graveyard. Select a monster in your opponent's hand or on their side of the field and send it to the Graveyard.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/quote] Damn, did I really just do all that? 2 things: A lot of your cards are overbalanced, that is, the cost is too high for too weak of an effect. Make all your monsters Machines and make sure all of them contain "Gundam" in their names instead. For non Gundam monsters, you can put "Gundam - " infront of the name. Oh, and [quote]What kind of effect is the 0 raiser? if ur gonna make it a normal text card make it a normal card not an effect monster [/quote] You're a jackass, that's how the cardmaker makes Tuners. ** To fix this problem, set it as a Normal monster and make the type "Machine / Tuner" instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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