Assassins have arrived, everyone take cover!!!

[xXVesperShardXx]

I know the last time I posted anything was under a different name and those sets were rather crappy, I will not divulge whome they are under simply because these are better than anything else I have ever done and I would like for them to be rated for the quality of the art, effects, and overall balance to the set...not because of the sets that were either way OP or too costly to be realistic. Thanks for the rates in advance.

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[richbonner93]

This a cool set. Nice job.
Quite a few OCG errors (capitalization of words).
The set is ok only because they don't revovlve around a specific theme (milling, lockdown, destruction, etc.).
The images could have a little work done. I know its hard to find good images for cards.
Anyway, could get better that's what counts.
P.S.- 1st REPLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
6.5/10

[Stan Alda]

I'd suggest using spoilers to make the set easier to navigate. Aside from that, I agree with richbonner93; could use some work, but it's versatile. 6.4/10

[richbonner93]

[quote name='En Almhjbat Wahd' timestamp='1304036519' post='5174852']
I'd suggest using spoilers to make the set easier to navigate. Aside from that, I agree with richbonner93; could use some work, but it's versatile. 6.4/10
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How do you use spoilers anyway? Never figured it out.

[Stan Alda]

[quote name='richbonner93' timestamp='1304043251' post='5175253']
How do you use spoilers anyway? Never figured it out.
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It's hard to give the formula for a spoiler without actually making one in the process. To avoid that, I inserted a backslash just after the first bracket in the formula, so the code won't recognize it as an actual spoiler. Aside from the backslash, type the formula as shown below:

[[s]/[/s]spoiler=Spoiler name] What you want in the spoiler [/spoiler]

You can make sub-spoilers as well, by making one spoiler and inserting another spoiler in the first, and so on [i]ad infinitum[/i]. I personally make one major spoiler that contains the whole set, a sub-spoiler for each card, then two sub-spoilers of [i]those[/i]: one for the card image itself, and one for the lore. It's [i]incredibly[/i] time-consuming, but it makes the set much easier to navigate, especially when you have a huge set like this.

[HauntedShadow]

hmm
i really like the idea behind the set...but thats it
1.The images of some cards are quite boring -2
2.Some images are blurred -1
3.Some cards are overpowered -1
All in All
6/10

[xXVesperShardXx]

[quote name='En Almhjbat Wahd' timestamp='1304187572' post='5179299']
It's hard to give the formula for a spoiler without actually making one in the process. To avoid that, I inserted a backslash just after the first bracket in the formula, so the code won't recognize it as an actual spoiler. Aside from the backslash, type the formula as shown below:

[[s]/[/s]spoiler=Spoiler name] What you want in the spoiler [/spoiler]

You can make sub-spoilers as well, by making one spoiler and inserting another spoiler in the first, and so on [i]ad infinitum[/i]. I personally make one major spoiler that contains the whole set, a sub-spoiler for each card, then two sub-spoilers of [i]those[/i]: one for the card image itself, and one for the lore. It's [i]incredibly[/i] time-consuming, but it makes the set much easier to navigate, especially when you have a huge set like this.
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Thank you all for your input and I appreciate the constructive criticism, if you have any pointers besides the spoilers bit then I would greatly appreciate it...especially on the OCG part as I try to make the cards as realisitic as possible.

[Lady_Killer]

Interesting set I'll give you that but it lacks a central theme and that is what is holding the deck back.
The pictures could use a little work but i don't judge on that.
One thing I'll say is that i couldn't read some of the card so if you could post the LORE of your cards than that would be greatly appriciated.
Still it is a good set and ill give it a 7/10.

[Hikaru Uchiha]

Great set! I notice one problem though. In the text of Elder Assassin-Kumori, it says that it gains Attack points equal to the number of equip spell cards plus one. That would mean that it could gain a maximum of 6 Attack points. It should say it increases by # times the number of equip cards.

[xXVesperShardXx]

[quote name='Hikaru Uchiha' timestamp='1304987246' post='5199756']
Great set! I notice one problem though. In the text of Elder Assassin-Kumori, it says that it gains Attack points equal to the number of equip spell cards plus one. That would mean that it could gain a maximum of 6 Attack points. It should say it increases by # times the number of equip cards.
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To be honest he was designed to say that he gains one attack per equip spell cards on your side of the field, I have altered that and I appreciate you pointing that out to me...thank you.