Blue- eyes white dragon777 Posted April 28, 2011 Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 [font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2]This is my first exceed monster, check it out! (My OCG might be a little off...) [spoiler= card][IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/2hz2zqw.jpg[/IMG] [spoiler=lore]2 or more Level 1 Monsters When this card is attacked, you can pay 1000 life points to Special Summon a monster from your graveyard and negate the attack. Then, remove from play an exceed material monster on this card. If this card has no Exceed Material Monsters, destroy this card.[/spoiler][/spoiler] First one!![/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niv-Mizzet Posted April 28, 2011 Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 OCG: I think it's just removing an Exceed Material, not removing from play, also Exceed Material and Graveyard should be capitalized. Cool card. I like the fact that with Exceeds, 1 does not necessarily mean weak. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Feathered Fiend Posted April 28, 2011 Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 that card is awsome just one question how did you make it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeadshotMagnet Posted April 28, 2011 Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 The template is a little bit blurry and low quality...but other then that, GREAT EFFECT...minor capitalization errors, but the effect is great...not to0 OP'ed, not too UP'ed. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted April 28, 2011 Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 The pic is horribly overused, and it needs a better name, but I like the concept. Seems a bit too Hope-ish, no? But still. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue- eyes white dragon777 Posted April 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 Thanks for the comments, I might change the pic if I can find a better one... This template is Zextra's, so check that out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted April 28, 2011 Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 Useful and nice.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted April 28, 2011 Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 Well the template is find but the ATK/DEF and the name seem confused to me, but overall good card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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