Hey There YCM

[♠Decietful King♠]

[center]Okay so just to recap its been over a year since I posted cards on YCM so hopefully my OCG isn't to shady. So now onto my new card. Picture is by a friend on Pixiv. If you would like it just ask I won't bite (too hard). So without further ado I give you, Divine Beast Ragnarok. This beast is the personified example of the end of the gods in Norse Mythology. I hope you like it. This template was made by Judas. Go check it out.
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Lore:
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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 Monsters you control. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all cards on the field, except this card. If this card declares an attack the turn it was Summoned its ATK becomes 1000, during Damage Calculation only. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 card in your Graveyard to destroy 1 Card your opponent controls. If the card was Set your opponent does not activate its effect. [/list][/center]

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 Monsters you control. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all cards on the field, except this card. If this card declares an attack the turn it was Summoned its ATK becomes 1000, during Damage Calculation only. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 card in your Graveyard to destroy 1 Card your opponent controls. If the card was Set your opponent does not activate its effect.

SHOULD BE:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 monsters. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all cards on the field, except this card. If this cards attacks during the turn it was Special Summoned, its ATK becomes 1000, during the Damage Step only. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 card in your Graveyard to destroy 1 card your opponent controls. The selected card's effects cannot be activated in response to this effect's activation.

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Slifer/Uria OCG.

I would like to say: wayyyyy OP'd. So many cards allow you to get 2 monsters, Blackwing Blizzard, Junk Synchro, Phantom Skyblaster, Debris Dragon, etc., and you can nuke the field the turn that you normal summon any of the said cards. For no cost, you can inflict 1000 to your opponent, keep a 2800, and it can destroy cards your opponent controls and prevent their response.

I think it shouldn't be able to activate its effects the turn it is summoned. It can lead to far too many OTKs simply because so many Decks have mass swarm ability, and can get 2 monsters out without a normal summon. 1000 ATK during damage step isn't great enough a drawback.

I would have it say,"During the turn this card was Special Summoned, you cannot declare an attack."
Also, maybe include a cost and a choice for the nuke, because Priority's been changed.

[♠Decietful King♠]

Your OCG fix is pointing out things like Potato Patato. Damage Calculation is actually the correct term so thats wrong on your part. And I do agree its rather easy to Summon. But the cost of the card is in my opinion pretty substantial. But thank your for the post. I'll be plus repping for feed back.