Squirrel Girl Posted May 2, 2011 Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 [center]Well, I wanted to make a card, so here it is [img]http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/1293/133082.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by discarding 3 or more cards. This card gains 200 ATK for each card discarded to Special Summon this card. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to add 1 Level 4 or lower Machine-Type monster from your Deck to your hand. If this card attacks, you can discard 1 card to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card and destroy it. When this card is removed from the field, add all cards that was discarded by this card to the Deck and take 1000 Life Points. What you guys think? Image from Jazin Kay's image archive[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HauntedShadow Posted May 2, 2011 Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 Ok first of all the images is great.I love it! (Is it from Jazin Kay's or TCIAL's Archive?Please PM me.) The effect is very creative (just one or two OCG errors) but a BIT overpowered. All in all i'll rate you 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Breakaway Posted May 2, 2011 Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 [spoiler=OCG corrections]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by discarding 3 or more cards [b]from your hand[/b]. This card gains 200 ATK for each card discarded to Special Summon this card.. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to add 1 Level 4 or lower Machine-Type monster from your [b]d[/b]eck to your hand. If this card [b]declares an[/b] attack, you can discard 1 card to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card and destroy it. When this card is removed from the field, add all cards that was discarded by this card to the Deck and take 1000 [b]points of damage.[/b][/spoiler] To the best of my Knowing that is the best Correcting i can do. This card is Pretty Good. I think his effect could be used better if the cards discarded were removed from play. In a good Machine deck people like to swarm to have more option. an option of swarming is SS from the Graveyard. So just a thought to make this card seem less OP'd. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted May 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 About the OCG, your wrong. Deck should ALWAYS be capitalized. And you dont have points of damage, just "you take 1000 LP". And you dont need to type "...from your hand" after the discarded part. And you can write "If this card attacks, bla bla bla" is correct ocg Anyway, thanks for the comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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