thanonyx Posted May 2, 2011 Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 I looked up a list of Japanese sound effects on the internet so I will be making cards for Yuma Tsukumo, main character of Yu-Gi-Oh! Zexal. The meaning of each card's sound effect will be under the card. [img]http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/795/61958.jpg[/img] [i][b]biri[/b] = electricity, energy[/i] [i][b]biri biri[/b] = tearing, as in ripping cloth[/i] [img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/795/61958.jpg[/img] [i][b]burororo[/b] = sound of a loud motor, as of an automobile[/i] [img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/5267/61958a.jpg[/img] [i][b]chu[/b] = kiss[/i] [img]http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/795/61958.jpg[/img] [i][b]fu fu fu[/b] = a strange laugh[/i] [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/619/61958b.jpg[/img] [i][b]goro goro[/b] = purr purr[/i] [img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/795/61958.jpg[/img] [i][b]henshin[/b] = transformation (as from Ryotaro to Kamen Rider Den-O). It has been used at least once as a sound effect. [/i] [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/7056/61958r.jpg[/img] [i][b]hiso hiso[/b] = whisper whisper[/i] [img]http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/795/61958.jpg[/img] [i][b]hoka[/b] = warmth, heat (internal or external)[/i] [img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/795/61958.jpg[/img] [i][b]honobono[/b] = peaceful, harmonious, tranquil [/i] [img]http://img813.imageshack.us/img813/795/61958.jpg[/img] [i][b]jaki [/b]= glint of something sharp[/i] [img]http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/795/61958.jpg[/img] [i][b]pata pata[/b] = flap flap[/i] [img]http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/795/61958.jpg[/img] [i][b]suru[/b]slow movement[/i] [img]http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/795/61958.jpg[/img] [i][b]uzo uzo[/b] = menace. A sound that evil creatures and nasty plants make.[/i] [img]http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/795/61958.jpg[/img] [i][b]wata wata[/b] = flap flap [/i] [img]http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/3259/61958z.jpg[/img] [i][b]shu[/b] = quick movement, fabric rubbing, swish[/i] [i][b]zashu[/b] = lash, slash[/i] I will be making more as I go along so please check back often, and don't for get to comment and rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted May 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2011 New Card [u][i][b]Biribiri Cat[/b][/i][/u] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iaashadow Posted May 3, 2011 Report Share Posted May 3, 2011 biribiri cat has an OCG error, just don't know how to fix it I like watawata bird Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsianGuy1137 Posted May 3, 2011 Report Share Posted May 3, 2011 Confused by Watawata bird's effect. How exactly does a card attack after the damage step? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted May 3, 2011 Report Share Posted May 3, 2011 OCG fix Biribiri Cat If this card is used as an Exceed Material for an Exceed Summon, the Exceed Monster gains 700 ATK, until the end of this turn Watawata Bird If this card attacks, select 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls and return it to its owner's hand at the end of the Damage Step. i added some suggestions for Biribiri Cat since no lore has been made yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted May 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2011 Fixed OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted May 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2011 Added a card [u][i][b]Hokahoka Dragon[/b][/i][/u] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark345678 Posted May 5, 2011 Report Share Posted May 5, 2011 I like the idea of the names meaning something <(*-*)> I think that Hokahoka Dragon should have 1800 ATK instead I don't currently have any more suggestions so far, but Ill continue to watch this topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted May 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 New Card added [u][i][b]Chuchuchu Fish[/b][/i][/u] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iaashadow Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 very good, very good *claps* 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted May 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 Another card added [u][i][b]Burororo Car[/b][/i][/u] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 Again here are my suggestions and OCG fixes Borororo Card If this card attacks, It gains 500 ATK during the Damage Step only. If you do, this card loses 500 ATK until your next Standby Phase. Chuchuchu Fish Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can select 1 monster your opponent controls. As long as this card is face-up on the field, that monster cannot attack. Hokahoka Dragon When this card is Tribute Summoned, you can remove from play 1 monster in your opponent's Graveyard to inflict damage to you opponent equal to the Level or Rank of the removed from play monster x 200. Chuchuchu Fish and Hokahoka Dragon are the card i added some suggestions because both of them are UP'd a little Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted May 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2011 New card added [u][i][b]Uzouzo Flower[/b][/i][/u] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted May 9, 2011 Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 I love the Idea... i just don't really like some of te pictures... I love That the Cat has uses as an Exceed Monster... I can't wait until Konami makes cards like that... Cool Idea, make more and find better pictures... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted May 9, 2011 Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 if it does get to Konami, they'll be the one to find the Pictures cause they make their own pictures so finding a good pictures if you think the idea is Konami friendly is not necessearily but if you want the go on.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted May 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 [quote name='Boss Z' timestamp='1304905727' post='5197765'] I love the Idea... i just don't really like some of te pictures... I love That the Cat has uses as an Exceed Monster... I can't wait until Konami makes cards like that... Cool Idea, make more and find better pictures... [/quote] What pics don't you like? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stoopid1 Posted May 9, 2011 Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 I think this is hilarious, considering the cards that Yuma plays. Gagaga Magician! Gogogo Golem! My style is to constructively criticize cards that don't measure up to the real cards found in the Yugioh TCG, with my pet peeve being the sight of a created card that is exactly the same as, but stronger or weaker than an existing card... But I don't have much to say because these are very well done. Then again, I wanna say that Burororo Car is basically a Steamroid +1, so that's -1 originality points. There is a way to fix that tho. It's effect, "If you do," implies that you had a choice. So perhaps you could change the first part of the effect to "If this card attacks, you can have it gain 500 ATK during the Damage Step only." 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted May 9, 2011 Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 [quote name='Stoopid1' timestamp='1304940571' post='5198406'] But I don't have much to say because these are very well done. Then again, I wanna say that Burororo Car is basically a Steamroid +1, so that's -1 originality points. There is a way to fix that tho. It's effect, "If you do," implies that you had a choice. So perhaps you could change the first part of the effect to "If this card attacks, you can have it gain 500 ATK during the Damage Step only." 9/10 [/quote] dude that OCG you just said looks lol to me but this comment is for you. 1st I agree with you in Steamroid effect but it loses its 500 in its entire turn despite his 1900 beatstick and only if he attacked so you ruined the originality part 2nd Do you play Yu-Gi-Oh! respectively? cause since when did "If you do..." becomes a choice? unless you saw a "you can..." and it didn't and your OCG you just gave, "If this card attacks, you can have it gain 500 ATK during the Damage Step only." is absolutely wrong. 3rd i rofl when i read this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stoopid1 Posted May 9, 2011 Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 [quote name='AngryBird' timestamp='1304954349' post='5198584'] 1st I agree with you in Steamroid effect but it loses its 500 in its entire turn despite his 1900 beatstick and only if he attacked so you ruined the originality part 2nd Do you play Yu-Gi-Oh! respectively? cause since when did "If you do..." becomes a choice? unless you saw a "you can..." and it didn't and your OCG you just gave, "If this card attacks, you can have it gain 500 ATK during the Damage Step only." is absolutely wrong. [/quote] Well I figured that didn't make a difference because Steamroid losing ATK when it's attacked is pretty much like losing ATK for the turn. Been playing since starter deck Yugi, which was like 12 years ago, but these days I only play it digitally in Nintendo games since TCG's are a scam. Anyway... how many cards use "if you do" after a trigger effect caused by attacking? That's why I figured it made more sense to choose whether or not you can gain 500 to lose 500. Konami would probly write something more like "If this card attacks, it gains 500 ATK during the Damage Step only, then loses 500 ATK until your next Standby Phase." If not, then something convoluted like Exarion Universe. So, what do you suggest, oh Guru of the cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted May 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 So should I change Burororo Car or not? I don't want it to be a Steamroid ripoff. I admit it's different in the fact the ATK loss lasts longer but it's generally the same idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted May 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 A brand spankin' new card! [i][u][b]Fufufu Clown[/b][/u][/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 just edit the spelling on your OCG for fufufu clown. anywyays it's pretty decent effect, Baby Tragon exceed fodder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 [quote name='AngryBird' timestamp='1305005561' post='5200374'] just edit the spelling on your OCG for fufufu clown. anywyays it's pretty decent effect, Baby Tragon exceed fodder. [/quote] Why would you even want to summon Baby Tragon?? And how is a monster that forces the opponent to target it decent exceed fodder? It won't last a turn... But I do agree his OCG is messed up... Remember, try to check for spelling mistakes, if nothing else, before posting the card... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 agree Baby Tragon is freakin useless. Unless your opponent summoned this Baby Tragon to steal an Exceed Monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted May 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2011 [quote name='AngryBird' timestamp='1305020081' post='5200606'] agree Baby Tragon is freakin useless. Unless your opponent summoned this Baby Tragon to steal an Exceed Monster. [/quote] What about Shien's Spy, Mystic Box, and Creature Swap? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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