ragnarok1945 Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 be my guest. When you're done, let us know for us to see it again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 I'm just not sure which direction to go in though. Normal, Fusion, Ritual, Tuner, Synchro? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 that's your call, not ours, I'm sure you'll know the right choice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 I dunno, I'm having a bit of a block. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 An interesting generic set. Jakijaki Swordsman is too powerful. A Piercing double-attacker with 1800 ATK and Rose's burn is much more than a neat weapon for direct hits. It would significantly alter the course of battles. It could halve your opponent's LP by stomping Dandy. It could kill two straight Tengus and still do 800 damage. Buroburo Car is also too powerful. It's a 2400 attacker in [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Black_Salvo"]Level 4 DARK Machine-Type[/url] skin. The "locomotion" effect is not that big of a deal for cards like Black Veloci because the ATK after the increase isn't so [i]big[/i]! Granted, it's no Stardust killer, but it does tie with Monarchs. Henshin Hero is stellar. It's a little unbalanced. 1900 is more than enough to make your opponent resort to removal effects, which will probably not work, since it can sidestep some removal with its effect. For that matter, it's Level 4, WIND, and a Warrior; searching it is no problem. Change the boost to some other, less potent form of advantage, I suggest. Hokahoka Dragon is meh. Usually, it's the removal that will be useful, not the burn. The kind of stuff you wanna remove tends to be around Level 3. A Tribute Summon probably isn't worth it. Honobono Angel seems like it could be useful, but I don't see how. Your opponent will either smash its face in after you Summon it, accidentally run over it while Set, or just pay the fee, guaranteeing damage to you. It needs another effect. Watawata Bird is very underpowered. While its effect is better than [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Jurrac_Iguanon"]Jurrac Iguanon[/url]'s, it's still unlikely that I'd prefer this to a Dust Tornado or something under most circumstances. Hisohiso Spy is also lacking. [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Goblin_Black_Ops"]Goblin Black Ops[/url] is stronger, and wouldn't leave you at such a huge disadvantage most of the time. Buroburo Cat is all right, and I think Chuchuchu Fish already exists, though as what, I cannot remember. By the way, do you play TF2? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 [quote name='newhat' timestamp='1308115266' post='5284451'] An interesting generic set. Jakijaki Swordsman is too powerful. A Piercing double-attacker with 1800 ATK and Rose's burn is much more than a neat weapon for direct hits. It would significantly alter the course of battles. It could halve your opponent's LP by stomping Dandy. It could kill two straight Tengus and still do 800 damage. Buroburo Car is also too powerful. It's a 2400 attacker in [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Black_Salvo"]Level 4 DARK Machine-Type[/url] skin. The "locomotion" effect is not that big of a deal for cards like Black Veloci because the ATK after the increase isn't so [i]big[/i]! Granted, it's no Stardust killer, but it does tie with Monarchs. Henshin Hero is stellar. It's a little unbalanced. 1900 is more than enough to make your opponent resort to removal effects, which will probably not work, since it can sidestep some removal with its effect. For that matter, it's Level 4, WIND, and a Warrior; searching it is no problem. Change the boost to some other, less potent form of advantage, I suggest. Hokahoka Dragon is meh. Usually, it's the removal that will be useful, not the burn. The kind of stuff you wanna remove tends to be around Level 3. A Tribute Summon probably isn't worth it. Honobono Angel seems like it could be useful, but I don't see how. Your opponent will either smash its face in after you Summon it, accidentally run over it while Set, or just pay the fee, guaranteeing damage to you. It needs another effect. Watawata Bird is very underpowered. While its effect is better than [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Jurrac_Iguanon"]Jurrac Iguanon[/url]'s, it's still unlikely that I'd prefer this to a Dust Tornado or something under most circumstances. Hisohiso Spy is also lacking. [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Goblin_Black_Ops"]Goblin Black Ops[/url] is stronger, and wouldn't leave you at such a huge disadvantage most of the time. Biribiri Cat is all right, and I think Chuchuchu Fish already exists, though as what, I cannot remember. By the way, do you play TF2? [/quote] Now ya see, this is what I've been looking for. Deep, detailed, creative criticism (Not that Ragnarok hasn't any). I will see what I can do about my card's flaws to the best of my abilities. No I do not play TF2, but I do like to watch people play it on youtube as well as the custom videos poeple make which are hilarious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted June 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 I'm going to be retooling some of the cards so there won't be a new one for a bit. Please be patient. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted July 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 Image uploader is being wierd. I updated some of my cards. They will be up ASAP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted July 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 OK images fixed, card's retooled, alright people tell me what you think and don't be afraid to be critical or brutal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 exactly what new cards did you add here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted July 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311539836' post='5383969'] exactly what new cards did you add here? [/quote] I didn't, I just retooled a few of the already existing one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted July 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 25, 2011 Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 Wow, you bump a lot, huh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted July 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 [quote name='Varion' timestamp='1311594324' post='5385602'] Wow, you bump a lot, huh? [/quote] Well I want an opinion on my retooled cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 26, 2011 Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 thanoyx, the new batch of cards will be up here soon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted July 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311651919' post='5387913'] thanoyx, the new batch of cards will be up here soon? [/quote] As soon as I can. That's all I can say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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