/ - Flames of Eternity - \

[AsianGuy1137]

[center][i]"As the flames of eternity scorch through the sins of the world, a new dawn rises from the ashes of the old..."[/i][/center]

[center][b][font="Book Antiqua"][size="5"]FLAMES OF ETERNITY[/size][/font][/b][/center]

[size="4"][font="Book Antiqua"]The Archetype[/font][/size]

[spoiler=Eternal Firebird - Dawn]
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[i]When this card is Normal Summoned, send the top 4 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard and inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points for each FIRE Monster sent to the Graveyard by this effect. When this card is returned to the Deck, draw 1 card.[/i][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Eternal Firebird - Dusk]
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[i]When this card is Normal Summoned, add 1 FIRE Monster from your Deck to your hand and discard 1 card. When this card is returned to your Deck, Special Summon 1 FIRE Monster from your Graveyard.[/i][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Eternal Phoenix - Ascension]
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[i]During your Main Phase, you can Special Summon this card from the Graveyard by returning 1 FIRE Monster you control to your Deck. When this card is Special Summoned, Special Summon 1 FIRE Monster from your Graveyard except Eternal Phoenix - Ascension.[/i][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Eternal Phoenix - Salvation]
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[i]During your Main Phase, you can Special Summon this card from the Graveyard by returning 1 FIRE Monster you control to your Deck. When this card is Special Summoned, return 1 FIRE Monster in your Graveyard to your hand. Once per turn, you can return 1 FIRE Monster in your Graveyard to your Deck to negate the activation of a card effect that would affect a FIRE Monster you control.[/i][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Eternal Phoenix - Conflagration]
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[i]You can Tribute Summon this card by tributing 1 FIRE Monster. During your Main Phase, you can Special Summon this card from the Graveyard by returning 1 FIRE Monster you control to your Deck. When this card is Special Summoned, send the top 5 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard and destroy 1 non-FIRE card on the Field for each FIRE Monster sent to the Graveyard.[/i][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Eternal Phoenix - Purification]
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[i]You can Tribute Summon this card by tributing 1 FIRE Monster. During your Main Phase, you can Special Summon this card from the Graveyard by returning 1 FIRE Monster you control to your Deck. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all face-up Monsters your opponent controls with an ATK that is lower than this card's DEF. Then, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points for each Monster destroyed.[/i][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Rise from the Ashes]
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[i]Return 1 Winged Beast-type FIRE Monster from your Graveyard to your Deck and Special Summon 1 Monster from your Graveyard with a Level that is lower than or equal to the returned Monster's Level.[/i][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Blazing Firestorm]
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[i]Activate by selecting 1 face-up Winged Beast-type FIRE Monster you control. Negate the activation of a card effect that would affect Monsters you control and inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the selected Monster's DEF.[/i][/spoiler]

[size="4"][font="Book Antiqua"]Useful Support[/font][/size]

[spoiler=Bird of Burning Embers]
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[i]If this card is removed from the Field, except when destroyed, Special Summon a Level 4 or lower FIRE Monster from your Deck during the End Phase. Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed.[/i][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Fiery Incineration]
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[i]Destroy 1 face-up FIRE Monster on the Field and 1 card your opponent controls. Inflict damage to your opponnet's Life Points equal to the destroyed Monster's ATK.[/i][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Fire of Creation]
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[i]Select 1 Level 4 or lower FIRE Monster in your Deck. Pay Life Points equal to its ATK points and Special Summon it to your side of the Field.[/i][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Support Recycle]
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[i]Select 4 cards from either player's Graveyard and return them to their respective Deck. Draw 1 card.[/i][/spoiler]

Note: Originally an archetype that'll be featured in my fanfic - not meant to be realistic or balanced. Support Recycle is especially broken, but aside from that, this archetype has the capacity to be very competitive and dominate early on if your opponent plays conservatively.

[AsianGuy1137]

Bumpety Bump. Sad face for not receiving any comments. Surely at least one of these cards deserves some kind of feeback.

[AsianGuy1137]

Daily bump time.

[Archwing]

Names: Pretty good
Pictures: All average, the only ones that caught my eye where Dusk, Ascension and Conflagration, Conflagration dosnt seem to be a phoenix either... and isnt "Support Recycle" just recycle (Same picture) with a cheaper effect? At least give it a new pic

Effects: they seemed fine up untill Salvation and Purification, I know its not ment to be fair but its worse than that
Use dusk to draw Ascension then discard Ascension and during your main phase 2 use Ascension to return dusk, special summon Ascension and 1 other thing, most of these card have no drawback if used together and are just really overall horribly overpowered - even for a set that was ment for a fan fic.
Balance: as stated the effects are just too cheap for me... That with an allreay insane amout of ATK and DEF on most of them. Yes they are a high level but they can be special summoned way to easily.
OCG: looks fine
Overall: They have potential but their too broken for me to think of them as real cards... Hope you can get some more comments though ~

[Lunar Origins]

I like the idea. Also, being able to get out high level monsters straight from the graveyard is a plus.

Got one thing to say though.

GRAVE. KEEPERS.

[AsianGuy1137]

Yes, thank you! I completely agree with everything you've said. They're all completely overpowered, but this is the deck of one of the strongest duelists in the fanfic (the Mr. Miyagi of the fanfic that never uses his cards unless absolutely necessary). Also, the decks of pretty much all the rivals and main characters are overpowered, except for the protagonist who's still kind of a noob trying to make his way to the top. But more for that later as I actually write out the fanfic. Again, thanks for commenting.

[quote=Kindred]GRAVE. KEEPERS. [/quote]

I have one more thing to say - Macro Cosmos, Hero/LIGHT Stun/Ritua... Actually, I designed them to be very susceptible to anything that affects the grave because the ENTIRE strategy revolves around graveyard recursion and similar shananigans.