Shaco Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Some card errors i believe near the beginning, but other then that its an excellent card ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Instead of "if this Monster Card you control is sent to the Graveyard...", try "if this card is sent to the Graveyard..." It's shorter and sounds better. 2 things, is monster supposed to be capped? If ya, shouldn't card be capped too?Really cool card. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaco Posted February 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Thanks Dj I say "If this Monster Card you control is sent to the Graveyard" because after it's destroyed, it's treated as an Equip Spell.Huh, yeah, you're right, I did screw up on the capitalization a bit, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Thanks Dj I say "If this Monster Card you control is sent to the Graveyard" because after it's destroyed' date=' it's treated as an Equip Spell.Huh, yeah, you're right, I did screw up on the capitalization a bit, thanks.[/quote'] Hmmm, so you keep the you control part. I get it now.No problem, I knew there was something wrong at first, but I just didn't know what until about the 4th review. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaco Posted February 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Fixed it. If you see any more problems point them out. But I'm pretty sure the OCG is correct now. The only think I'm not 100% sure on is the occupying 2 of your Monster Card zones.I don't know if I should specify that that effect is only valid when it is a monster card, but that seems like a given. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Fixed it. If you see any more problems point them out. But I'm pretty sure the OCG is correct now. The only think I'm not 100% sure on is the occupying 2 of your Monster Card zones.I don't know if I should specify that that effect is only valid when it is a monster card' date=' but that seems like a given.[/quote'] I think it is a given. Besides, if you made it any longer the text would be too small. I think it's good the way it is. Nice work. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaco Posted February 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Fixed it. If you see any more problems point them out. But I'm pretty sure the OCG is correct now. The only think I'm not 100% sure on is the occupying 2 of your Monster Card zones.I don't know if I should specify that that effect is only valid when it is a monster card' date=' but that seems like a given.[/quote'] I think it is a given. Besides, if you made it any longer the text would be too small. I think it's good the way it is. Nice work. :D Yeah, I was pretty excited when I saw the text fit perfectly, thanks ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Very nice ^_^8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaco Posted February 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Very nice ^_^8/10 7.8/10 Thanks ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 No prob XDWhen are you making more cards? I like your stuff the pics usually rule 0_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaco Posted February 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 No prob XDWhen are you making more cards? I like your stuff the pics usually rule 0_o :shock: Thanks. Uhhh, I don't usually make cards all that often, although I've been making more recently. Whenever I suddenly get an idea, I make a card out of it.So, yeah, whenever that happens, be ready for another card, I suppose ^^ (I'll make one when you least expect it.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Well, than that makes me expect it, thus, you arent gonna make 1, but that mkes me think you arent gonna make 1, thus, you are gonna make 1, but then i'll think you are, 0_o It's a never ending cycle. But in the end, you won't make a card ever again! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaco Posted February 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Really? What a bummer, I liked making cards T_T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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