slamsol Posted May 4, 2011 Report Share Posted May 4, 2011 Please rate this card, I have only just made it and want to know what you think. Rate 1/10 and tell me how I can make it better. [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Fire%20Phoenix%20&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Fire&level=8&magictraptype=None&rarity=Rare&picture=http://www.mateusz-buczko.net/mindfields/Phoenix.jpg&set1=67765&set2=64567&inset=false&type=Warrior&description=This%20card%20cannot%20be%20normal%20summoned%20it%20can%20only%20be%20summoned%20if%20you%20pay%202000%20life%20points%20as%20well%20as%20tributing%20the%20appropriate%20amount%20of%20monsters.&circulation=098788987&atk=2700&def=2500&creator=slamsol&year=2011&serial=94614317"]View card[/url] Thanks, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamee Posted May 4, 2011 Report Share Posted May 4, 2011 lots of grammer mistakes, and it probably wouldn't be used much if it became real... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slamsol Posted May 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2011 [quote name='jamee' timestamp='1304542894' post='5188221'] lots of grammer mistakes, and it probably wouldn't be used much if it became real... [/quote] First card made so I don't really know much about the grammer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neko Girl Posted May 4, 2011 Report Share Posted May 4, 2011 Well, don't post links. That's your first lesson on posting cards! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roryc96 Posted May 4, 2011 Report Share Posted May 4, 2011 well... OCG could be better, i would suggest "When you normal summon this card, pay 2000 life points or destroy this card" Plus it would probably be a Pyro or Winged beast if it's a FIRE (Pyro) PHOENIX (Winged Beast) However, the picture is really awesome and the ATK and DEF are pretty balanced for it's level. I would say... 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BerserkChargeDDX Posted May 4, 2011 Report Share Posted May 4, 2011 [quote name='slamsol' timestamp='1304541973' post='5188195'] Please rate this card, I have only just made it and want to know what you think. Rate 1/10 and tell me how I can make it better. [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Fire%20Phoenix%20&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Fire&level=8&magictraptype=None&rarity=Rare&picture=http://www.mateusz-buczko.net/mindfields/Phoenix.jpg&set1=67765&set2=64567&inset=false&type=Warrior&description=This%20card%20cannot%20be%20normal%20summoned%20it%20can%20only%20be%20summoned%20if%20you%20pay%202000%20life%20points%20as%20well%20as%20tributing%20the%20appropriate%20amount%20of%20monsters.&circulation=098788987&atk=2700&def=2500&creator=slamsol&year=2011&serial=94614317"]View card[/url] Thanks, [/quote] The only thing wrong with this card is grammar and the fact that its not powerful enough to have THAT specific ability. Maybe if it was say, 3600, 2950 or something high up there.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsianGuy1137 Posted May 4, 2011 Report Share Posted May 4, 2011 A -1 card advantage/field presence and -2000 LP for a beater? Not worth it with all the much more worthwhile choices around. If it had some kind of protection effect or grave recursion, then it'd be much more playable. How about paying 1000 LP to revive it during the End Phase if it's in your Graveyard? That kind of fits in with the theme of Phoenixes right? Also, I made my own Phoenix archetype. Check the CAC in my sig if you're interested. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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