Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 [Spoiler=Eduj Rerrot] [Spoiler= Monsters] [Spoiler=Eduj Rerrot Heart] [img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/1120/354645.jpg[/img] Eduj Rerrot Heart effect this is Treated as a Machine type monster while in Hand Field or Graveyard. When this card is removed from the field Special Summon 1 each of "Eduj Rerrot Hero", "Eduj Rerrot Zero", "Eduj Rerrot One", "Eduj Rerrot Offensive", and "Eduj Rerrot Defensive" in Attack Postion from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Eduj Rerrot Hero] [img]http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/2117/354645u.jpg[/img] Eduj Rerrot Hero effect this is Treated as a Machine type monster while in Hand Field or Graveyard. This card gains the ATK, DEF, and effects of all "Eduj Rerrot" monsters you control. Once per turn, you can equip 1 Exceed Monster your opponent controls to this card. This card gains its ATK. When this card is removed from the field, destroy all monsters you control. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Eduj Rerrot Zero] [img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/3858/354645j.jpg[/img] Eduj Rerrot Zero effect this is Treated as a Machine type monster while in Hand Field or Graveyard. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 "Eduj Rerrot" monster from your Graveyard. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Eduj Rerrot One] [img]http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/1120/354645.jpg[/img] Eduj Rerrot One effect this is Treated as a Machine type monster while in Hand Field or Graveyard. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Eduj Rerrot Offensive] [img]http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/1120/354645.jpg[/img] Eduj Rerrot Offensive effect this is Treated as a Machine type monster while in Hand Field or Graveyard. When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict 600 damage to your opponent. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Eduj Rerrot Deffensive] [img]http://img857.imageshack.us/img857/1120/354645.jpg[/img] Eduj Rerrot Deffensive effect this is Treated as a Machine type monster while in Hand Field or Graveyard.When 1 monster you control would be targeted by a card effect or destroyed, you can have this card be targeted/destroyed instead. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 "Eduj Rerrot" monster from your Deck. [/Spoiler] [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Spells and Traps] [Spoiler=Eduj Rerrot Fortress] [img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/7263/354645i.jpg[/img] Eduj Rerrot Fortress effect This card gains the following effects depending on what face up monster is on the Field. •Fiend type monster : During the your End Phase both players sends the top cards of their Deck to the Graveyard equal to the number of Fiend type monsters on the Field .•Machine type monster : During the your End Phase both players lose Life Points equal to the number of Machine type monsters on the Field X 200 [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Eduj Rerrot Spirit Of Mercy] [img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/1120/354645.jpg[/img] Eduj Rerrot Spirit Of Mercy effect This card gains the following effects depending on what face up monster is on the Field. •Fiend type monster : During the your Stanby Phase you can return cards in the Graveyard to the top card of your Deck equal to the number of Fiend type monsters on the Field .•Machine type monster : During the your Standby Phase you gain Life Points equal to the number of Machine type monsters on the Field X 300 [/Spoiler] [/Spoiler] [/Spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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HeavyMech Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 Decent cards 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted May 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 [quote name='HeavyMech' timestamp='1305527892' post='5212467'] Decent cards 7/10 [/quote] thanks but could you go a little futher with it ??? by like explaining why you felt like that and how it could be improve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 Mate... sorry... but 1. You need work on OCG (Official Card Grammar), if you need help about it just PM. 2. You need to find better pic than those.. 3. Start your effects with CAPITALIZED letters!! examp: This card cannot....etc AND NO: this card cannot.... -5/10 cuz you are a 3 star member and you lug on OCG!! -1/10 for the pics Overall 4/10 (Change the OCG and I'll change my rate) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted May 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 [quote name='A.Prime' timestamp='1305576182' post='5213152'] Mate... sorry... but 1. You need work on OCG (Official Card Grammar), if you need help about it just PM. 2. You need to find better pic than those.. 3. Start your effects with CAPITALIZED letters!! examp: This card cannot....etc AND NO: this card cannot.... -5/10 cuz you are a 3 star member and you lug on OCG!! -1/10 for the pics Overall 4/10 (Change the OCG and I'll change my rate) [/quote] you do not even try to fix the ocg or fully explain (just like HeavyMech) but could you go a little futher with it ??? by like explaining why you felt like that and how it could be improve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 ok.... you have right... I'll show you! [b]At Eduj Rerrot Heart[/b] you wrote this: this is Treated as a Machine type monster while in Hand Field or Graveyard. When this card is removed from the field Special Summon 1 each of "Eduj Rerrot Hero", "Eduj Rerrot Zero", "Eduj Rerrot One", "Eduj Rerrot Offensive", and "Eduj Rerrot Defensive" in Attack Postion from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. Correction: [b]T[/b]his [b]card [/b]is Treated as a Machine[b]-T[/b]ype monster while in [b]h[/b]and Field or Graveyard. When this card is removed from the field Special Summon 1 each of "Eduj Rerrot Hero", "Eduj Rerrot Zero", "Eduj Rerrot One", "Eduj Rerrot Offensive", and "Eduj Rerrot Defensive" in Attack Postion from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. [b]Eduj Rerrot Hero[/b] you wrote this: this is Treated as a Machine type monster while in Hand Field or Graveyard. This card gains the ATK, DEF, and effects of all "Eduj Rerrot" monsters you control. Once per turn, you can equip 1 Exceed Monster your opponent controls to this card. This card gains its ATK. When this card is removed from the field, destroy all monsters you control. Correction: [b]T[/b]his [b]card [/b]is Treated as a Machine[b]-T[/b]ype monster while in [b]h[/b]and Field or Graveyard. This card gains the ATK, DEF and effects of all "Eduj Rerrot" monsters you control. Once per turn, you can equip 1 Exceed Monster your opponent controls to this card. This card gains [b]the [/b]ATK [b]of the equiped monste[/b]r. When this card is removed from the field, destroy all monsters you control. As you can see you have minor but at the same time important OCG errors! And the reason I'm rush on you is cuz you are a 3 star member and you made those errors! No hard feelings! As for the pics use deviantart.com!! Here are some examps: [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/2m7uc85.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/b9aagj.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/ejcux5.jpg[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted May 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2011 some of the pic you use do not really fit the scheme but i will fix the ocg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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A.Prime Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 So... you gave me a -rep cuz I told you my opinion... that's low! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted May 19, 2011 Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 You ain't allowed to neg rep people who try to help you/ give a bad opinion about you dude.[b] If you neg rep me, i will report you.[/b] Please become a polite and low-profiled new member. You gotta +rep them suddenly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted May 19, 2011 Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1305783122' post='5218404'] You ain't allowed to neg rep people who try to help you/ give a bad opinion about you dude.[b] If you neg rep me, i will report you.[/b] Please become a polite and low-profiled new member. You gotta +rep them suddenly [/quote] I do not know what you will do... but I will report him for me and for @[b]HeavyMech[/b]. Cuz Mr. Herman The German think's that the neg reps are candies! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giga Hand Posted May 19, 2011 Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 shouldn't it be Egduj Rorret? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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