endphase Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 Well, this is my first card in a looooooooooong time. What do you think of it? Constructive critism is appreciated (+reps). Please don't say things like: Good card, bro. I want more specific reviews.Credit to Future Paradise for the image and to Judas (Touma) for the template. [spoiler='My card'] [img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/6338/srenewal.jpg[/img]Activate only when a monster you control is destroyed. Pay 1000 lifepoints to Special Summon 1 level 2 or lower monster from your hand or Deck. Increase it's level by 1 and it's ATK and DEF by 500 during each of your Standby Phases. When it's destroyed, your opponent gains 1000 lifepoints. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Journey Posted May 9, 2011 Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 With this format this card would be UP THERE. Quick thing, "During each of your Standby Phase" card should be Continuous. Good card though.. My OCG kinda weird but ima try to edit it a bit.. [color="#800080"](Activate only when a monster you control is destroyed. Special Summon 1 level 2 or lower monster from your hand or Deck. During your Standby Phase increase it's Level by 1 and it gains 500 ATK and DEF.)[/color] Hope it helps..xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endphase Posted May 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 [quote name='Journey' timestamp='1304966417' post='5198856'] 1) With this format this card would be UP THERE. 2) Quick thing, "During each of your Standby Phase" card should be Continuous. 3) Good card though.. 4) My OCG kinda weird but ima try to edit it a bit.. [color="#800080"](Activate only when a monster you control is destroyed. Special Summon 1 level 2 or lower monster from your hand or Deck. During your Standby Phase increase it's Level by 1 and it gains 500 ATK and DEF.)[/color] Hope it helps..xD [/quote] Thanks for feedback! 1) I don't really know why it would be UP'ed[img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/mellow.gif[/img] 2) Yeah, it should be Continuous, I'll edit it. 3) Thanks![img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif[/img] 4) No, I think the OCG is correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 Should be a Continuous Spell card because of its last effect, seems a little overpowered don't you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endphase Posted May 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 [quote name='AsterikcAde' timestamp='1305054118' post='5201196'] Should be a Continuous Spell card because of its last effect, seems a little overpowered don't you think? [/quote] Yeah, it's a bit OP'ed. I'll ad a cost or downside... <div><br></div><div><br></div><div>EDIT: edited the card!</div> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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