Archwing Posted May 8, 2011 Report Share Posted May 8, 2011 This set started as a single but then i found a bunch of pictures and well... Now its probably gonna be a 18 card set But comments would be loved, i mean the effects arnt really mind benders... If you think their OPed, keep in mind their DEF sucks...bad..... And if you think their UP'ed Please let me know why [color="#00FF00"][size="3"]Reps[/size][/color] given to good advice/Comments. [spoiler=Grapplers!][center] [b]Novitiate Grappler[/b] [img]http://img710.imageshack.us/img710/7614/121928.jpg[/img] You can Special Summon this card from your hand if you control 1 or more "Grappler" monsters (Other than "Novitiate Grappler"). During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Damage to your opponent. [b]Reckless Assult[/b] [img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/9978/121928w.jpg[/img] Select 1 "Grappler" monster on your side of the field and decrease its DEF by 2000. All Battle damage inflicted by the selected card is doubled. [b]Sealing Smash[/b] [img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/7614/121928.jpg[/img] Activate only if you control a "Grappler" monster. Negate the activation of an Opponent's Spell or Trap card and destroy it. If this card is activated as a Chain Link 2 or higher add this card back to the Deck and shuffle it. If this card is activated as a Chain Link 3 or higher inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of "Grappler" monsters on the field x500. [b]Brawler Blitz[/b] [img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/3128/121928kh.jpg[/img] [color="#4169E1"]Activate only if your opponent Special Summons a monster. Select 1 Attack Postion "Grappler" monster on your side of the field. If the selected monsters ATK is greater than the summoned monsters DEF destroy the summoned monster and inflict 800 Points of damage to your Opponent's Life Points. If the selected monsters ATK is less than the summoned monsters DEF flip the selected card into Defence Postion.[/color] [b]Shockwave Grappler[/b] [img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/7573/121928u.jpg[/img] [color="#FFA500"]This card cannot be Special Summoned. If this card destroys an Opponent's monster decrease the ATK and DEF of any adjacent monsters to it by 500 untill the End Phase.During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Damage to your opponent.[/color] [b]Slag Fist Grappler[/b] [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/6250/121928x.jpg[/img] [color="#8B0000"]This card cannot be Special Summoned. During your Main Phase you can select 1 Face-Down monster card on your Opponents side of the Field and return it to your Opponent's hand. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Damage to your opponent. [/color] [/center][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted May 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 Pretty good so far, the effects of these cards seem generic, I suggest be more creative with the effects of the cards for this set if you're continuing to do it...I won't rate until I see more from this set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 Opponent=opponent Defence=Defense Nothing more i can suggest to these cards. card 1=Added more effect(up to you), because the effect is too simple and common card 2=Maybe decrease the 500 ATK then all battle damage from battle involving Grappler is doubled card 3=Fine card 4=Interesting and creative. no need to change Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ohisi Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 [b]Good concept on the cards, I escpecially lilke Reckless Assault (and Brawler Blitz). It seems very balanced IMOp. Also about it is, I would have made it an Equip card instead of a continuos becasue you are selecting a monster, and only one, to place the effect on. The other two cards aren't that great (no offense). Could use some improving on the first card, and I think there are some OCG errors around in the cards (IDK). Though some pretty good cards. I am wanting to see more of these from you. [/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted May 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2011 Thank you both Ill go back and make those corrections in a minute, Two new monsters but the Spell/Trap cards are what make the set (IMO) The monsters are ment to be kinda basic, Just a short effect and the Piercing damage effect. The first card is just a basic support for them, Really i should have started the set with a diffrent monster but whatever I think ill keep that one the same. Reckless Assult though i might change, Id rather not have an ATK decrease though :/ Updated, My personal Favorite monster from this set, Slag fist, and Shockwave. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted May 11, 2011 Report Share Posted May 11, 2011 Though they seem rather generic, they show great promise. I'd love to see this set completely finished, Now that corrections have been made there isn't much to speak of. Keep up the good work though, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ohisi Posted May 11, 2011 Report Share Posted May 11, 2011 [b]The two new cards you added are, interesting.Though you may want to reduce the 2nd new monsters ATK to about 1950, or something like that. Or you can keep it the same because I guess, the low DEF and ATK is making up for it, so maybe just keep it the same. The 1st new card is a kind creative kind of bland effect. It is right it the middle, IMOp. If there were about 60 - 65 card in this set, I woud make it a Deck, because I like the way it just peirces your opponent with a effective blow from the EFFECT of the cards. Very nice this time around as well. Keep them coming! [/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.A._Sakuyamon Posted May 11, 2011 Report Share Posted May 11, 2011 I agree that "Reckless Assault" should be a equip spell. Slag fist needs it's attack toned down. I'd say 1600 or you can increase it's level by 1, other wise it's to big of a beater ATM The other cards seem okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted May 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 Ill make changes next update, for now though thanks for the comments and bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 Slag fist is just great!! Which is why it hurts me to say its OP'd. A 2000 beater with no drawbacks except the special summoning thing. I agree either lower attack or higher level to balance it out. Reckless Assault should be an equip card but more to the point the cost should change mainly because there isn't a grappler with 2000 defense so you couldn't pay the cost for it. (Unless there is a future grappler coming out) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ketuur Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 [b]All of these cards are great IMO. Thing is some may have OCG errors that I cannot really tel right now, but maybe if I run through them one more time. Good cards, I loved them all and I especially liked, ALL OF THEM. Good cards, keep more please.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted May 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2011 thank you for the comments, this isnt a update just a quick bump :< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daft Punk Posted May 17, 2011 Report Share Posted May 17, 2011 Make Novitiate a Tuner (If you plan on having Synchro Monsters) and if you do, make it's DEF 200. Reckless Assault should be an Equip Spell Card Reduce Slag Fist's ATK [b]OR[/b] Increase it's ATK along with it's Level (5 or 6 is preferable if you go with this route) Great cards though, remind me slightly of Flamvell. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted May 17, 2011 Report Share Posted May 17, 2011 OCG REVIEW : Defense Position, opponent, face-down This card cannot be Special Summoned. If this card destroys an opponent's monster, decrease the ATK and DEF of any adjacent monsters by 500 untill the End Phase. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.>>[b] Pierching Effect is amazing in all other archetype, so, this one will be great added for you Set. [/b] This card cannot be Special Summoned. During your Main Phase, you can select 1 face-down monster on your opponent's side of the field and return it to its owner's hand. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Damage to your opponent.>> [b]Make a cost while activating its effect, such as pay 800 Life Points is the best option. I mean this "During your Main Phase, you can select 1 face-down monster on your opponent's side of the field and return it to its owner's hand. "[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted May 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2011 [quote]Make Novitiate a Tuner (If you plan on having Synchro Monsters) and if you do, make it's DEF 200. Reckless Assault should be an Equip Spell Card Reduce Slag Fist's ATK OR Increase it's ATK along with it's Level (5 or 6 is preferable if you go with this route) Great cards though, remind me slightly of Flamvell. 8/10 [/quote] No i despise Synchros so there wont be any in this set.... I allready made slag fist a bit weaker and Reckless assult an attack card but i havent found the time to update sadly Thanks for the comment @ maha Thanks ill change those in a bit too.... I probably wont update though till tomarrow though.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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