Lucec Posted May 8, 2011 Report Share Posted May 8, 2011 [size="3"][b]Hello, this is my NEWEST card in my collection of YCM cards. Please, see to it that you make comments and rate. (Or critique)[/b][/size] [center] [b][s]__________________________________________________________[/s][/b] [img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/4332/409671.jpg[/img] [size="3"][b].::LORE / EFFECT::.[/b][/size] [quote][i][b]When this card is Successfully Summoned, add 1 Assault Counter on this card. For each Assauslt Counter added onto this card its ATK and DEF points are increased by 100. Once per turn, you can pay 100 Life Points to add 1 Assualt Counter onto this card. If any Assault Counters are removed from this card by card effects, this card is removed from play for 3 turns. After 3 truns, Special Summon this card to the field in Face-Up Attack Postition. Assault Counters that were previously on this card before it was removed from play are re-equipped to this card. [/b][/i][/quote] [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
litenite Posted May 8, 2011 Report Share Posted May 8, 2011 in other word if a counter is destroyed you get one back in 3 turns. a good card and a good pic. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucec Posted May 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2011 Thanks for the reply. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldeneagle Posted May 8, 2011 Report Share Posted May 8, 2011 Apart from your rather creative spellings of Assault as 'Assualt' and 'Assauslt', the ocg is pretty good. A couple of unneccessary capitalisations and the odd spelling mistake but nothing major. A couple of issues though. Firstly, counters are not 'equipped' to cards, they are placed on cards, but just change it to 'place Assault Counters on this card equal to the number of Assault Counters on this card before it was removed from play.' Most importantly however, the effect just isn't workable. There are very few cards that remove counters from monsters, and those that do usually designate a specific type of counter and then remove as a cost, not an effect. Without support cards, the effect is useless. In addition to this, it is seriously UPed. 100 ATK/DEF per counter with 1000 original ATK/DEF just doesn't make this card competitive. If it was changed to 700 per counter and a lower original ATK/DEF like 400, then it would be at 1800 ATK after turn 1 so wouldn't be too weak. Also, what do you mean by removal for 3 turns; it's very vague, and you need to state which phase it comes back in. Most cards say 'during your/your opponent's 1st/2nd standby/main/end phase', this would imply that it comes back at the exact point in the phase when it was destroyed but in 3 turns (individual turns not joint turns). Fix all this and I'll rate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe G. Posted May 8, 2011 Report Share Posted May 8, 2011 Up'ed I dont get what's the point of this card. One tribute to a 1000 atk and def monster. Maybe some more atk for each counter. And you can only add one counter per turn.. it would be destroyed even before reaching 1200... Sorry but its like a 4/10 to me. Good pic btw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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