Admiral Tim Posted May 8, 2011 Report Share Posted May 8, 2011 [spoiler= Team Funbari] [img]http://img859.imageshack.us/img859/607/154334.jpg[/img] [img]http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/607/154334.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler= Oversouls] [img]http://img863.imageshack.us/img863/607/154334.jpg[/img] [img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/607/154334.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be summoned by tributing one face up "Team Funbari Faust VIII" or by its own effect. Once per turn if a card you control is sent to the graveyard you can send this card instead. Once per turn you can pay 800 life points to special summon this card from the graveyard. If summoned this way this card gains 400 ATK and DEF. [/spoiler] Please don't hold back any negative comments every bit of criticism will be appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treex Posted May 9, 2011 Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 Faust is way too overpowered. Imagine this, I activate Raigeki Break/anything that requires a discard. Discard most powerful monster in my hand, pay 400 LP to summon it for free. A suggestion would be to pay 150LP per monster star level or limit it to a certain level and a certain type (Zombie-type). Oversoul has no ATK or DEF stat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted May 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 ok thanks, I'll raise faust's level or increase the cost to 800 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Yairnet Posted May 9, 2011 Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 in yo asakura card you should have written "decrease the DEF Of all monster cards your opponent controls by 200 points" 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted May 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 Ok i'll change it, thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeik Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 Yoh seems a little on the light side in that there's monsters that do in effect that but for free Faust is ok the cost seems ok for a Level 4 the oversouls seem fine small OCG tip though, use numbers over letters, like "1" instead of "one" and always Capitalize Graveyard and Speical Summon or any kind of Summon really, I think theres a few other errors but those 2 bug me and I can live with the rest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anonimen31 Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 hmm not bad but, still the oversouls should be union monsters... do you get where I'm going with this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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