Shuij Kuromara

[Garthfunkle Vii Backwards]

Shuij Kuromara
[Spoiler=a cool card with a somewhat new and somewhat indefferent effect]
[img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/1120/354645.jpg[/img]
Shuij Kuromara The Burnning Curse Champion
effect
1 FIRE Tuner monster + 1 or more FIRE non Tuner monsters
this is treated as a Warrior type monster while on the Field and in the Graveyard. This monster gains 100 ATK and DEF points for every FIRE monster, Pyro type monster and, Warrior type monster on the field and in the Graveyard. during the Battle Phase after Damage Calculation this card loses 800 ATK and DEF Points.[/Spoiler]

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

Make it's defense 200 for massively lulzy rekindling plays.

[Azphreal]

I suppose the name and image are alright, but the effect could be cut down a fair bit.

You say that 'this card is treated as a Warrior-Type monster while face-up on the field and in the Graveyard'. That clause, because of how it is worded, makes making it a Pyro-Type obsolete. Make it 'This card is [b]also[/b] treated as...'.
The ATK/DEF boost can be combined. 'This card gains 100 ATK and DEF for each FIRE, Pyro-, and Warrior-Type monster face-up on the field and in the Graveyard.'
You don't really need the Pyro bit there, unless you DNA Surgery everything, because all Pyros are FIRE anyway.
Last effect is a definite disadvantage. Even though this would have higher ATK than, say, a Colossal Fighter in the same position, the 1000 point loss would make it near unplayable for anything except a wall, and once your opponent realises the effect, will just suicide on it to reduce its stats.

All in all, probably not something I would run. Definately could do without that last bit, but it would then need another drawback, since it can gain a fair bit of ATK/DEF. About a 8.3/10.

[CardCaster]

K, read above post, how about this for a drawback, when this card cannot attack unless you have another pyro type monster on the field and a warrior type monster in the graveyard?

[Garthfunkle Vii Backwards]

there was susposed to be a set

well there all pyros but have effect that treated as warriors as well

and they sort of get a power boost / work together like how blackwings do

this card was more intended for mostly (FIRE monsters) (warrior type monsters) (pyro type monsters) kind of deck so the boost effects would make up for the lost effect

i edited it some please check it out

[Boss Z]

Would be pro with a Laval/Flamvell Deck... no doubt about that...

OCG things:
non[b]-[/b]Tuner
FIRE Attribute
Pyro[b]-[/b]Type
Warrior[b]-[/b]Type

Its the little things that matter when making a card

And the DEF doesn't need to be so high... its not really good for the card... I mean it is... but its too much for a rather simple to summon 8Star

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

I still say give it 200 DEF for more abuseability. It's effect isn't the best, but Rekindling support would be amazing.