Lexadin Posted May 9, 2011 Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 [center]to continue my remakes of old contest cards I'll present you the following cards. They may have some slight errors and/or perhaps some ballancing issues. [img]http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/8593/20638.jpg[/img] [size="1"]Img from Pixiv[/size] [i]When this card is Summoned, you can send the top 2 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard. This card gains 400 ATK for each Zombie-Type monster sent to the Graveyard by this effect. While this card is in the Graveyard, you can remove it from play to increase the ATK of all face-up Zombie-Type monsters by 500, until the End Phase.[/i] [img]http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/7697/20638d.jpg[/img] [size="1"]Img by Hp Doom[/size] [i]Remove 1 monster from play. The controller of that card can draw 1 card for every 1000 ATK the removed monsters has. (If the removed monster has less then 1000 ATK, its controller draws 1 card instead.)[/i] [img]http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/4362/20638o.jpg[/img] [size="1"]Img from DA, can't remember the maker though.[/size] [i]If this card is discarded from the hand to the Graveyard by a card effect, equip it to a face-up Fiend-Type monster you control. Increase its ATK and DEF by 400. If the equipped monster would be removed from the field, you can discard 1 card instead.[/i] [b]NOTE: It's named after Vermilion (a color).[/b] [img]http://img863.imageshack.us/img863/3410/20638a.jpg[/img] [size="1"]Img from Jazin Kay's archive.[/size] [i]Born in the scorching desert surrounding Necrovalley, this scarab was gifted with great powers. It was chosen to become a Guardian of the Temple of Ra. Only a chosen few may pass under his watch.[/i] [b]Don't hate the Vanilla's.[/b] [b]Any comments with less then 4 words will be considered Spam and will be negged and reported.[/b] [color="#F4A460"][size="1"]Rate/Hate/Comment/Fix[/size][/color][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted May 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 No comments, seriously? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.A._Sakuyamon Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 All the cards both look good and seem balanced. A few OCG errors but nothing great 8.3453/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted May 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 Thanks for your comment, but could you be a little bit more specific about the errors. I always try to improve my cards till thier maximum potential. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.A._Sakuyamon Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 Aww............I didn't want to but okay [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif][i]When this card is Summoned, you can [b]send [/b]the top 2 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard. This card gains 400 ATK for each Zombie-Type monster [b]send[/b] to the Graveyard by this effect. While this card is in the Graveyard, you can remove it from play to increase the ATK of all face-up Zombie-Type monsters by 500, until the End Phase.[/i] [/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif] [/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]Bold:Sent[/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif] [/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif][i]Remove 1 monster from play. The [b]controler[/b] of that card can draw 1 card for every 1000 ATK the removed monsters has. (If the removed monster has less then 1000 ATK, its controller draws 1 card instead.)[/i][/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif][i] [/i][/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]Bold: controller[/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif][i] [/i][/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]told you minor stuff[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted May 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 Ah thanks, [s]I'll fix.[/s] Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.A._Sakuyamon Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 Hmm..............now that I think about it 'D.D. Shockwave" would be great for my "Tera Void" monsters.................mind if I use it on YVD? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 [quote name='♥ D.A._ϯɨå Håʀʀɨbel ♥' timestamp='1305039536' post='5200851'] Aww............I didn't want to but okay [color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][i]When this card is Summoned, you can [b]send [/b]the top 2 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard. This card gains 400 ATK for each Zombie-Type monster [b]send[/b] to the Graveyard by this effect. While this card is in the Graveyard, you can remove it from play to increase the ATK of all face-up Zombie-Type monsters by 500, until the End Phase.[/i] [/font][/color] [color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"] [/font][/color] [color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"]Bold:Sent[/font][/color] [color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][/font][/color][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][color="#1c2837"][b]Send is correct in the first case. O_o[/b] [/color][/font][color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"] [/font][/color] [color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][i]Remove 1 monster from play. The [b]controler[/b] of that card can draw 1 card for every 1000 ATK the removed monsters has. (If the removed monster has less then 1000 ATK, its controller draws 1 card instead.)[/i][/font][/color] [color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][i] [/i][/font][/color] [color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"]Bold: controller[/font][/color] [color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][i] [/i][/font][/color] [color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"]told you minor stuff[/font][/color] [/quote] On my comments, D.D. Shockwave's wording may or may not vary depending on what you tried to say: The drawing counts the ATK of the monster at the time of activation, or after it is removed? If the correct one is the former, you should change the 'the removed monster has', for the sake of [i]had[/i]. Envoy of the Dark World looks nice, and his effect is rather helpful. But I suggest adding an additional name to it, after the main color he wears, following Dark World monsters' fashion. Scarab looks like it could blow the f*ck up any second, why not adding a nice nuke effect? [size="1"]Because Gravekeepers need more field advantage, sure.[/size] [size="1"] [/size] [size="1"] [/size] [size="2"]These remade cards keep getting better, to be honest.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted May 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 O_o Just when I fixed it. It's the latter. *facepalms* Forgot about thier names, I'll edit. I hope that was Sarcasm. Alright I'll fix & Edit them. Thanks for your comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 [quote name='Lexadin' timestamp='1305049706' post='5201063'] I hope that was Sarcasm. [/quote] Captain Obvious. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted May 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 Anywho I edited the bunch. And gave the Envoy a name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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FacelessHero Posted May 12, 2011 Report Share Posted May 12, 2011 I like them 8.5/10 I only wouldn't give a higher score as they don't seem to fit together at all (not sure if they were meant to...) but on their own they are good cards. My personal favorite is Crodunk PS: I don't hate the vanillas EDIT: reread the [b]TITLE[/b] of the thread *facepalm "+3 random cards" I now give them a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted May 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2011 Thanks for your comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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