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Master Telion, Presentiment of the Terminals [10 points to constructive critisism]


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[b]If you Tribute Summon this card, the Tribute (s) must be DARK Fiend-Type Monsters. When this card is sucessfully Normal Summoned, destroy 1 card on the field. Increase this card's ATK by 100 for each DARK Fiend-Type Monster in your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can discard 1 DARK Fiend-Type Monster to select 1 face-up Monster your opponent controls, and take control of it until the End Phase (it cannot declare an attack or be Tributed). This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. During each of your End Phases, decrease this card's Level by 2. When this card's Level becomes 1, negate all of its effects. [/b]

Made for a contest. By the way "Master Telion" is the official name for the "Beast" in the Revelation of the Holy Bible which represents "666".[/center]
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Hey, the picture is ok, although you should look for a hugher resolution alternative, go to http://www.deviantart.com/ because they have lots of high resolution pictures, but give credit on the topic or the card. The name isnt simple aswell which is good for a card in most circumstances. The summon is a bit strict, you should make it either only fiend monsters or dark monsters. The actual effect per turn is simple yet effective. The way it should be. Overall the card is good, but you should really try to improve the images and your cards would be great. 9/10! 1+rep (because i like it)
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If you Tribute Summon this card, the Tribute (s) must be DARK Fiend-Type Monsters. When this card is sucessfully Normal Summoned, destroy 1 card on the field. Increase this card's ATK by 100 for each DARK Fiend-Type Monster in your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can discard 1 DARK Fiend-Type Monster to select 1 face-up Monster your opponent controls, and take control of it until the End Phase (it cannot declare an attack or be Tributed). This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. During each of your End Phases, decrease this card's Level by 2. When this card's Level becomes 1, negate all of its effects.


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Interesting effect (I don't know if it should be Special Summoned instead of Normal) you might want to check on that.
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