D.A._Sakuyamon Posted May 14, 2011 Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 I find the draw power of the 3 drawers a bit much. You could make a sound exodia deck with them 3ing each for max power along with "Emerald Sonic" for more cosmic gem counter chances. 7.34523 cause of the major draw power sry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted May 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 Thanks for the comments, but you realize that the draw cards would be limited if they were real, right? After all, Allure and Necro Gardna are both limited - therefore, I wouldn't see why these wouldn't be ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.A._Sakuyamon Posted May 14, 2011 Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 ^Exactly my point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted May 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 [quote name='♥ D.A._ϯɨå Håʀʀɨbel ♥' timestamp='1305412628' post='5208681'] ^Exactly my point. [/quote] And limiting the actual cards would limit the draw power Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.A._Sakuyamon Posted May 14, 2011 Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 [quote name='Zextra' timestamp='1305412922' post='5208692'] And limiting the actual cards would limit the draw power [/quote] What I mean is with so many of the cards getting card amount restrictions wouldn't you be turned off by it? The goal I see now is making those draw cards less powerful so they don't get restricted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted May 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 Ah, I see. Yeah, I specifically made these cards for RP'ing purposes, so I wasn't thinking of things such as Exodia when making them. I'll see what I can do about the Spells, but do the monsters (aside from Emerald Sonic) bother you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.A._Sakuyamon Posted May 14, 2011 Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 nope none at all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted May 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 Cool Perhaps I can add a couple of effects to restrict them, like preventing them from using 2 in the same turn (like Duality) and something else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.A._Sakuyamon Posted May 14, 2011 Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 Well the very first one can get you six cards easy I'd say restrict it so it does the half thing like with its way to get cosmic gems Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted May 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 Which one do you mean by the first one? Sorry, I'm a bit slow today - and I'm on an iPod, so that doesn't help either... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.A._Sakuyamon Posted May 14, 2011 Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 Cosmic Gem Amethyst Charger Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted May 15, 2011 Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 I've kept my promise. Here is my review: [spoiler=Details] [quote name='Zextra' timestamp='1305071569' post='5201855'] [center][size="4"][b][color=#F9966B]Hey, everyone![/color] [color=Red]This is a set I made[/color] [color=#00FF00]last year in my free time.[/color] [color=#00FFFF]Anyways, please rate and comment. Thanks![/color][/b][/size] [color=Orange][size="4"][i][b]Monsters[/b][/i][/size][/color] [spoiler=Cosmic Gem Amethyst Charger] [img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/7154/99600r.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned, place a number of Cosmic Gem Counters (max. 3) on it equal to or less than half the number of "Cosmic Gem" monsters in your Graveyard (rounded down). When this card is Normal Summoned, you can discard 1 "Cosmic Gem" monster to draw 2 cards. When this card destroys a monster by battle, place 1 Cosmic Gem Counter on it. You can remove 3 Cosmic Gem Counters from this card to draw 1 card for each "Cosmic Gem" monster in your Graveyard. When this card attacks a Defense Position monster, destroy the monster immediately without applying Battle Damage. Negate the effects of monsters this card destroys.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: Hmmm…defense negator with draw power. Sure it’s power is at level 4 but it might be a little OPed mainly because it’s doing too much. First you have a +1 draw while you have at least 6 “Cosmic Gem” monsters (which is not that hard to get with cards like Ryko, Glow-up Bulb and Foolish) and then you have a +2 when you discard a “Cosmic monster” giving you a +2 hand advantage all during the turn it’s Summoned. Then it has a recharge effect that allows it to get more counters. It’s doing too much…Maybe just make it discard 1 “Cosmic Gem” monster to draw 2 cards and get rid of it’s Counter Gem Counter effect when it’s Summoned, but keep the second effect of getting counters while destroying monsters. Maybe the effect negation effect should go bye bye as well. Stats are good. Art is good. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Gem Crystal Stag] [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/8760/99600bm.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: You can Special Summon this card while you control another "Cosmic Gem" monster. When this card is Special Summoned, place a number of Cosmic Gem Counters (max. 3) on it equal to or less than half the number of "Cosmic Gem" monsters in your Graveyard (rounded down). When this card destroys a monster, place 1 Cosmic Gem Counter on it. This card gains 200 ATK for each Cosmic Gem Counter on it. You can remove 3 Cosmic Gem Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower "Cosmic Gem" monster from your Deck.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: This one is somewhat balanced. It has the potential of getting to 2200 ATK, but no where near the first turn. Could be a decent beater. The Special Summon effect is what is getting to me. Maybe make it level 4 or lower instead of 6? Well…I’ll check the level 6 monsters before continuing with this card. OPed mainly for the reason that you can Special Summon ATK 2300+ monsters with it’s effect, which could lead to a total field domination. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Gem Diamond Inferno Drago] [img]http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/6627/99600.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: You can Special Summon this card when there are 3 or more "Cosmic Gem" monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned, place a number of Cosmic Gem Counters (max. 4) on it equal to or less than half the number of "Cosmic Gem" monsters in your Graveyard (rounded down). During each of your Standby Phases, place 1 Cosmic Gem Counter on this card. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to remove all Cosmic Gem Counters from this cards. For each Cosmic Gem Counter removed this way, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the combined Levels of all "Cosmic Gem" monsters you control x100. If more than 1000 damage is inflicted by this card's effect, you can Special Summon 1 "Cosmic Gem" monster from your Deck.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: Interesting burn effect. I like this card because it’s moderately balanced. Good burn, good additional effect. Pretty nice stats also. Now…however…I must finish reviewing that Crystal Stag… [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Gem Emerald Mantis] [img]http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/6627/99600.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: When you control a "Cosmic Gem" monster, you can Special Summon this card from your Hand. When this card is Summoned, place 1 Cosmic Gem Counter on it (max.1). You can remove 1 Cosmic Gem Counter from this card to have 1 "Cosmic Gem" monster you control attack directly this turn.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: This card is…balanced…but I fear only just. It’ll be a quick Synchro Card… [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Gem Emerald Quartz Gargoyle] [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/3175/99600e.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: You can Special Summon this card by Tributing 1 "Cosmic Gem" monster you control. When this card is Special Summoned, place a number of Cosmic Gem - Emerald Counters (max. 3) and a number of Cosmic Gem - Quartz Counters (max. 3) on it equal to or less than half the number of "Cosmic Gem" monsters in your Graveyard (rounded down). Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 card in your Hand to place 1 Cosmic Gem - Emerald Counter or 1 Cosmic Gem - Quartz Counter on this card. You can remove 3 Cosmic Gem - Emerald Counters from this card to select 1 monster Type. Destroy all monsters on the field with the selected Type. You can remove 3 Cosmic Gem - Quartz Counters from this card to Special Summon up to 2 Level 4 or lower "Cosmic Gem" monsters from your Deck.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: Easy Summon conditions, powerful effect, = Broken card. This card can selectively destroy everything on the field AND can Special Summon “Cosmic Gem” fodder. This basically sets up for Deck thinning, swarming, and monster clearance all together. Top it off with 2400 ATK and you have a general beatstick with too many good effects. FIX. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Gem Emerald Sonic] [img]http://img859.imageshack.us/img859/7038/99600d.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: When your opponent declares an attack, you can remove from play this card in your Graveyard to gain Life Points equal to the ATK of the attacking monster. Then, apply one of the following effects depending on how much Life Points you gained: • Less than 1500 Life Points: Place 1 Cosmic Gem Counter on each face-up "Cosmic Gem" monster you control. • More than 1500 Life Points: Add a "Cosmic Gem" monster from your Deck to your hand.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: This one’s nice. It’s costs can be achieved pretty easy, and doesn’t stop the damage from happening. Overall, balanced. Pretty useful. Good to run at 3 in a Deck. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Gem Hematite Undead Dragoon] [img]http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/1576/99600ou.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: When this card is Normal Summoned, place a number of Cosmic Gem Counters (max. 4) on it equal to or less than half the number of "Cosmic Gem" monsters in your Graveyard (rounded down). This card's Type is also treated as Zombie. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to place 1 Cosmic Gem Counter on this card). When this card has 3 or more Cosmic Gem Counters on it, you can draw 1 additional card during the Draw Phase. You can Tribute this card with 4 Cosmic Gem Counters on it to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of "Cosmic Gem" monsters in your Graveyard x200.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: Burn effect, good. Draw effect, BROKEN! A free pot of greed? This guy is at 1900 ATK making him pretty evil already. Now it gives a benefit of drawing? FIX. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Gem Lavender Magician] [img]http://img863.imageshack.us/img863/5370/99600p.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: When this card is Summoned, you can discard 1 "Cosmic Gem" monster from your Hand. If you do, place a number of Cosmic Gem Counters on this card equal to the Level of the discarded monster. Once per turn, you can remove up to 2 Cosmic Gem Counters from this card to decrease the Level of 1 monster in your Hand by 1 for each Cosmic Gem Counter removed this way. When this card is destroyed, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of Cosmic Gem Counters that was on this card before it was destroyed x300.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: Interesting. Pretty balanced, and due to it’s stats I doubt it will be on the field for long. Plus, most cards now days remove cards from the field instead of destroying them, which makes it pretty easy to avoid it’s burn effect. Overall, balanced nicely. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Gem Opal Transport] [img]http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/6627/99600.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: You can Special Summon this card while you control a "Cosmic Gem" monster. When this card is Summoned, place 3 Cosmic Gem Counters on it (max.3). You can remove a Cosmic Gem Counter from this card to add a "Cosmic Gem" card in your Graveyard to your hand. You can Tribute this card to distribute a number of Cosmic Gem Counters on monsters you control equal to the number of Cosmic Gem Counters on this card.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: Broken with this set. Because the second effect is not limited to “Once per turn,” you can add a +3 to your hand without much trouble. Then you can set up some Swarm Tactics with [b]Mantis[/b], [b]Gargoyle[/b], and even recycle itself. Lets assume you do that. Then you can activate this guy’s last effect to add 3 Cosmic Counters to your previous Opal Transport and repeat. Then you can set up for Gargoyle’s effect and Summon a third Opal and another Cosmic Monster and the look keeps on going. This guy is so broken….FIX! [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Gem Opal Overdriver] [img]http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/6627/99600.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: You can Special Summon this card while there are 2 or more "Cosmic Gem" monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is Summoned, place 5 Cosmic Gem Counters on it (max.7). If there is a "Cosmic Gem Opal Transport" in your Graveyard when this card is Summoned, place 7 Cosmic Gem Counters on it instead. You can remove a Cosmic Gem Counter from this card to add a "Cosmic Gem" card from your Deck to your hand. You can Tribute this card to distribute a number of Cosmic Gem Counters among "Cosmic Gem" monsters you control equal to the number of Cosmic Gem Counters on this card.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: BROKEN! Instant +7 to your hand with it’s summon. FIX! NOW!!! [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Gem Quartz Colossus] [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/1862/99600v.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned, place a number of Cosmic Gem Counters (max. 3) on it equal to or less than half the number of "Cosmic Gem" monsters in your Graveyard (rounded down). This card's Type is also treated as Rock. This card cannot be destroyed by card effects while you control 3 or more monsters. When this card destroys a monster by battle, place 1 Cosmic Gem Counter on it. When this card has 3 Cosmic Gem Counters on it, you can Tribute it to inflict damage to your opponent equal to this card's original ATK. While this card is in your Graveyard, you can discard 2 "Cosmic Gem" monsters to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: OMG! This guy can lead to a potential OTK! Card destruction? Hand destruction? Special Opal Overdriver with 7 Counters? Special monster after monster and recycle and reloop with Opal Transport?! >.> Wow…instant burn OTK, and if you play the effects just right, you can even establish a very powerful FTK. Plz Fix. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Gem Sapphire Beluga] [img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/2995/99600m.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 "Cosmic Gem" monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is successfully Special Summoned, place 1 Cosmic Gem Counter on this card (max.1). When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can discard a "Cosmic Gem" monster to destroy a card on the field. You can Tribute this card with 1 Cosmic Gem Counter on it to Special Summon up to 2 Level 4 or lower "Cosmic Gem" monsters in your Graveyard.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: Okay, this one is pretty balanced. It can be Special Summoned pretty easy, doesn’t have a massive effect and leads to two level 4 monsters. This one is balanced. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Gem Ruby-Sapphiric Interceptor Golem] [img]http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/6627/99600.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: This card can only be Special Summoned when your opponent declares a direct attack while there are 3 or more "Cosmic Gem" monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is successfully Special Summoned this way, negate the attack and place a Cosmic Gem - Ruby Counter and a Cosmic Gem - Sapphire Counter on this card. During your opponent's Battle Phase, you can remove a Cosmic Gem - Ruby Counter to decrease this card's ATK to 0. If you do, destroy a monster your opponent controls. When a monster your opponent controls is destroyed, you can remove a Cosmic Gem - Sapphire Counter from this card to decrease this card's DEF to 0. If you do, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's Level x400. When this card is destroyed, draw 2 cards for each Counter on this card.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: This one can be balanced pretty quickly. Maybe make it’s ATK 2400 instead of 2600 to keep the Summon effect. Maybe increase it’s DEF to 1900-2400 to make it’s second effect worth thinking over, and finally make it draw 1 card instead of 2, or it will be like a Pot of Greed. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Gem Sapphire Incandescent Drake] [img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/8390/99600i.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: When this card is summoned, place 1 Cosmic Gem Counter on it (max.1). This card gains 200 ATK for each Cosmic Gem Counter on it. You can Tribute this card with 1 Sapphire Counter on it to destroy a number of face-down cards equal or less to the number of "Cosmic Gem" monsters in your Graveyard.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: Uhhh…how does this card get “Sapphire Counters”? It would be useful only as a 1900 beater if you had to get the Sapphire Counters from somewhere else…and if you switch the Sapphire Counters to Cosmic Counters, this card would be kind of OPed as it would destroy several face-downs with just it’s Summon. Fix? [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Gem Turquoise Plasmer] [img]http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/7507/99600s.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: You can Special Summon this card if you have not Normal Summoned this turn. When this card is successfully Special Summoned, place a number of Cosmic Gem Counters on this card equal to the number of "Cosmic Gem" monsters in your Graveayard (max.10). You can remove all Cosmic Gem Counters from this card to Special Summon a "Cosmic Gem" monster from your Hand, Deck, or Graveyard with a Level of equal or lower than the number of Cosmic Gem Counters removed through this effect.[/b][/i] Too fast. It’s a quick Synchro monster with the possibility of it being used for a Quick FTK/OTK set up. Wickedly powerful. Plz fix. Maybe make it half the number of counters on this card? [/spoiler] [color=Grey][size="4"][i][b]Synchros[/b][/i][/size][/color] [spoiler=Cosmic Gem Hybrid Dragon] [img]http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/6627/99600.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters While there are 3 or more "Cosmic Gem" monsters in your Graveyard, this card cannot be destroyed by your opponent's card effects. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 card you control. If the removed card is a monster, place 1 Cosmic Gem - Sapphire Counter on this card (max.2). If the removed card is a Spell Card, place 1 Cosmic Gem - Emerald Counter on this card (max.2). If the removed card is a Trap Card, place 1 Cosmic Gem - Ruby Counter on this card (max.2). You can remove 2 Cosmic Gem - Sapphire Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 "Sapphiric Synchronic Drago Token" (Dragon-Type/LIGHT/Tuner/Level 3/ATK 1200/DEF 0) in face-up Attack Position. You can remove 2 Cosmic Gem - Emerald Counters from this card to add 1 Spell or Trap Card from your Graveyard to your Hand. You can remove 2 Cosmic Gem - Ruby Counters from this card when your opponent declares an attack to destroy the attacking monster and send a number of cards from the top of your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard equal to half the Level of the destroyed monster (rounded down). While there are 2 Cosmic Gem - Sapphire Counters, 2 Cosmic Gem - Emerald Counters, and 2 Cosmic Gem - Ruby Counters on this card, you can return this card to your Extra Deck and destroy all cards on the field. When this card is destroyed, take damage equal to the combined number of Counters on this card x500.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: Strangely balanced but does way too much. And it’s ATK makes it slightly OPed as it can be brought out pretty easily. Maybe make it 3000 ATK. As for its effect…very long, and the last one seems somewhat redundant. Maybe just scrap the burn effect and keep the rest. That should make it much more readable and enjoyable. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Gem Hybrid Golem] [img]http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/5370/99600p.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters While there are 3 or more "Cosmic Gem" monsters in your Graveyard, this card cannot be destroyed by your opponent's card effects. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 card you control. If the removed card is a monster, place 1 Cosmic Gem - Sapphire Counter on this card (max.2). If the removed card is a Spell Card, place 1 Cosmic Gem - Emerald Counter on this card (max.2). If the removed card is a Trap Card, place 1 Cosmic Gem - Ruby Counter on this card (max.2). You can remove 2 Cosmic Gem - Sapphire Counters from this card to Special Summon 2 Level 4 or Lower "Cosmic Gem" monsters from your Hand. You can remove 2 Cosmic Gem - Emerald Counters from this card to send 5 random Spell Cards from your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard. You can remove 2 Cosmic Gem - Ruby Counters from this card to negate the effects of all Trap Cards your opponent controls and activates until the 2nd Standby Phase after this effect is activated. You can remove 2 Cosmic Gem - Sapphire Counters, 2 Cosmic Gem - Emerald Counters, and 2 Cosmic Gem - Ruby Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 Level 8 or lower monster from your Extra Deck, ignoring the Summoning Conditions. When this card is destroyed, take damage equal to the combined number of Counters on this card x500.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: Okay…this one seems quite abusable, and not in a good way. The first effect of Special Summoning 2 monsters is okay. The second one seems quite OPed maybe make it 3 cards instead of 5. The third effect is alright because it requires a set up, so that’s okay. The second last effect is good also because it requires a lot of time to set up, and the last effect seems kind of redundant, just like with the previous Synchro. It’s not needed. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Gem Rainbow Prismer Dragoon] [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/3175/99600e.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: 1 "Cosmic Gem" Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner "Cosmic Gem" monsters This card can only be Synchro Summoned during your opponent's Main Phase or Battle Phase, and only while there are 5 or more "Cosmic Gem" monsters in your Graveyard. While there are 3 or more "Cosmic Gem" monsters in your Graveyard, this card cannot be destroyed by your opponent's card effects. When this card is successfully Synchro Summoned, place 1 Cosmic Gem - Sapphire Counter (max.3), 1 Cosmic Gem - Emerald Counter (max.3), and 1 Cosmic Gem - Ruby Counter (max.3). Once per turn, you can reveal up to 2 cards in your Hand. For each monster revealed this way, place 1 Cosmic Gem - Sapphire Counter on this card. For each Spell Card revealed this way, place 1 Cosmic Gem 0 Emerald Counter on this card. For each Trap Card revealed this way, place 1 Cosmic Gem - Ruby Counter on this card. You can remove 3 Cosmic Gem - Sapphire Counters from this card to halve this card's ATK. If you do, it can attack directly this turn. You can remove 3 Cosmic Gem - Emerald Counters from this card. If you do your opponent cannot activate Spell and Trap cards until your next Standby Phase. You can remove 3 Cosmic Gem - Ruby Counters from this card to negate the effects of any Monster Cards your opponent controls until your next Standby Phase. When this card is destroyed by battle, take damage equal to the total number of Counters on this card x500.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: Very balanced, although the Synchro Summon Conditions seem unnecessary. It has perfectly good effects and the specifics make it generally good. The ATK is what is most troublesome. Maybe make it 4000 instead of 4400. Last but not least, take out the last burn effect, as it is not needed. [/spoiler] [color=#54C571][size="4"][b][i]Spells[/i][/b][/size][/color] [spoiler=Cosmic Gem's Spreading] [img]http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/7633/99600t.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: When you Summon a "Cosmic Gem" monster, you can place a number of Gem Counters on this card equal to half the Summoned monster's Level (rounded up). Once per turn, you can remove up to 4 Gem Counters from this card to place an equal number of Cosmic Gem Counters on "Cosmic Gem" monsters you control.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: I wonder if this card can be miss interpreted as you removing 4 counters from it and adding 4 counters to each Cosmic Gem monster. 4 Counters for you, 4 Counters for you, and 4 Counters for you. Maybe make the wording in such a way where they won’t confuse it for such? Other than that it looks fine. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Release] [img]http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/6627/99600.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: Discard a "Cosmic Gem" monster and send 1 "Cosmic Gem" monster from your Deck to your Graveyard. Draw 2 cards.[/b][/i] See, this is the type of card that will set up the OTK for this theme. It’s a good draw engine with a nice mill. More so, you get to choose what card to mill!! Setting up a Grave is no longer a “drawback” for the game especially with all the Graveyard support. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Wish] [img]http://img815.imageshack.us/img815/6627/99600.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: Discard a Level 6 or lower "Cosmic Gem" monster and take damage equal to the Level of the discarded monster x300. Draw a number of cards equal to half the Level of the discarded monster (rounded down).[/b][/i] Cody Frost: No…simply OPed. Take 2400 damage? Draw 8 cards?! Too powerful, and not enough of a drawback effect to justify its abusive nature. Fix. [/spoiler] [color=#C25283][size="4"][i][b]Traps[/b][/i][/size][/color] [spoiler=Cosmic Barrier Orb] [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/3161/99600z.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: While you control 3 or more "Cosmic Gem" monsters, all "Cosmic Gem" monsters you control cannot be destroyed by your opponent's card effects. When this card is destroyed while there are 5 or more "Cosmic Gem" monsters in your Graveyard, destroy all monsters on the field and send this card to the Graveyard.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: Hmm…with you needing cards in the Graveyard…this card doesn’t really…it’s just that its….I see no use to this card. Still, it’s balanced. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Veil] [img]http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/4395/99600c.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: While you control 3 or more "Cosmic Gem" monsters, "Cosmic Gem" monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, you can discard a "Cosmic Gem" card to draw a card.[/b][/i] Cody Frost: Completes the shield of the Cosmic Gem monsters. Not only that, but it’s a draw engine. Maybe make it, “While there are 3 or more “Cosmic Gem” monsters in your Graveyard, you can discard 1 card to negate the destruction of 1 “Cosmic Gem” monster you control. During your 3rd Standby Phase after this card’s activation, destroy this card and draw 1 card.” Wouldn’t that be a little better? [/spoiler] [/center] [/quote] [spoiler=Additional Thoughts] Counters can be shortened. Cosmic Gem - Sapphire/Emerald/Ruby Counter can be expressed as just Sapphire/Emerald/Ruby Counters. Would cut down a lot and make things more readable. Many of these cards are Summon/Draw supporters for each other. Maybe you can cut down the effects so that they don’t overlap each other into +4s or higher. Overall, the set is quite OPed, but it has great potential. I shall refrain from rating until I’ve seen some changes or such. I shall be watching till then. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] This has been Cody Frost’s Epic single card review. On a side note, could you review/rate/comment on my Crystal Beast monsters? Link's in my sig. would appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted May 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 [quote name='Cody Frost' timestamp='1305469355' post='5210020'] I've kept my promise. Here is my review: [spoiler=Details] [spoiler=Additional Thoughts] Counters can be shortened. Cosmic Gem - Sapphire/Emerald/Ruby Counter can be expressed as just Sapphire/Emerald/Ruby Counters. Would cut down a lot and make things more readable. Many of these cards are Summon/Draw supporters for each other. Maybe you can cut down the effects so that they don’t overlap each other into +4s or higher. Overall, the set is quite OPed, but it has great potential. I shall refrain from rating until I’ve seen some changes or such. I shall be watching till then. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] This has been Cody Frost’s Epic single card review. On a side note, could you review/rate/comment on my Crystal Beast monsters? Link's in my sig. would appreciate it. [/quote] Thanks - I never intended to put so many draw effects into the monster, but I'll see what I can do. Also, for Cosmic Wish - it's Draw equal to half the levels, not equal to the level. Initially, I did use just Sapphire/Emerald/Ruby Counters, but then I can't classify them as a single type of Counter. Also, I will be sure to check out your set as soon as I get back on a computer - I've been stuck on an iPod during the past 2-3 days.EDIT: Fixed all the effects! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted May 15, 2011 Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 Much better. Most of the OTK/FTKs this deck can accomplish have been greatly reduced. I'm still seeing a no-no with Cosmic Wish, but with the other cards now more balanced, it seems like this card would at least be run at 1. Rate: 9.8/10 I like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 15, 2011 Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 [quote name='Zextra' timestamp='1305483352' post='5210468'] Thanks - I never intended to put so many draw effects into the monster, but I'll see what I can do. Also, for Cosmic Wish - it's Draw equal to half the levels, not equal to the level. Initially, I did use just Sapphire/Emerald/Ruby Counters, but then I can't classify them as a single type of Counter. Also, I will be sure to check out your set as soon as I get back on a computer - I've been stuck on an iPod during the past 2-3 days. EDIT: Fixed all the effects! [/quote] Personally I felt the effect changes weren't too huge a difference, but that's your call I'd raise my rate higher, but I'd want to see the remaining cards first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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