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Theodore Baigun

The fact that his father was suddenly a top-ranked kickboxer feels like a Deus Ex Machina. Revealing it earlier in the history should fix that. Will do.

 

I’m a bit confused on both the Killjoy’s “helmet” and the self-sacrifice system, especially because what is does is unclear at times. Does it actually explode and destroy the Exframe or does it just emit radiation? The helmet is ejected from the ExFrame and is replaced (from the inner workings under the cockpit) with the Self-Sacrifice Nuke. And yes it explodes, but the bomb itself emits radiation.

 

Also, clarify the “life force” section of the sword: from my understanding, it diverts the majority of the Solomon Engine to itself to remain operational. What what I mean was, it converts life energy (the Solomon Engine) into power for the blade., which is why it is able to level mechs. Core energy essentially.

 

Fixing now. Will edit this post in a minute.

 

EDIT: Done. I believe that covers everything.

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Okay. Ketodama, Ghost Origins, since I can't decide which of you gets the slot, we'll have an RP-off. Each of you must PM me an RP sample, 500 words at max, that describes your character in a moment of their daily routine. Whoever has the one I judge to be better will get the slot, and the second-place will get immediate priority if another slot opens up. These sample are due in 24 hours: if one of you doesn't post, the other gets it. Good luck, and may the best one win!

 

To everyone else, WIP or not yet applied, sorry, but signups are closed. If this place is successful, I might reopen them in the future, but for now, my apologies.

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Steven Robert Yumikawa

His personality is contradictory, in that you don’t act like that without alienating at least some people. Make sure to mention the difficulties that can/will come up with being assholish like that.

 

Done

 

Straight A’s doesn’t make much sense if he previously didn’t demonstrate any outstanding intelligence.

 

If you read properly, you would see that his above average intelligence is the whole reason he is a cocky b*stard.

 

You still have mention of the antimatter cannon in the Exframe’s description.

 

Sorry, will fix.

 

Set a limit on how long the EMP’s effect lasts, as it does with other weapons.

 

Enough Time to Run away. 'Bout 1-2 min?

 

Fixed.

 

Scratch this. Seems I'm too late(Even though I was the first one to post an App. :( ) I'll wait 'till slots open up again then. I hate my Time Zone. You all finished at around about Midnight My time!

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RAEG D

 

Should I refer to Cory as German or French? :/

 

Either way works. He doesn't really care. But hold off a bit to let other people interact: we don't need one person carrying everything. ;3

 

Also, we only need ElectricKirby to post before I can get the ball rolling and actually get to some battles. You'll just be briefed, which should pass quickly.

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Either way works. He doesn't really care. But hold off a bit to let other people interact: we don't need one person carrying everything. ;3

 

Also, we only need ElectricKirby to post before I can get the ball rolling and actually get to some battles. You'll just be briefed, which should pass quickly.

 

 

I'm sorry. D: I just get really excited and postpostpostpostpost.

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Hey y'all, I'm sorry but I probably won't be able to post anything until Sunday. My girlfriend's leaving on a 2 month trip tomorrow afternoon, so I wanna spend as much time as possible with her. Also, I wanna spend the rest of Saturday sulking and being a sad, lonely emo kid. :C

 

So, just a heads up, and I apologize if this inconveniences everyone.

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As a public note/notice, I'd like to see if anyone has any mission ideas for later. I'll be pretty receptive with this, especially because I only have the first few planned out in my head as of now. Also, ElectricKriby, please post/PM me saying when you project you'll be able to post. I'd like to get this ball rolling at some point.

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I say that at least one mission must be planned to try to capture the city state of Singapore. Singapore is a major world port, both commercially and militarily, in that area and if the Pacific Rim wants to challenge the other world powers, it needs Singapore. The aquatic battlefield would also make things interesting for a team that is mostly ground based.

 

If you want to attack the West, maybe attacking Hawaii will be a reasonable battlefield, as it provides a powerful base of operations for naval operations.

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