Mechanische Division

[Tefached]

For a quick return to test how much of my card making ability I have lost during my absence I recently (as in 10 mins ago) made two cards (Planning on making more).

Mechanische Division Set (Mechanical-> German)


[IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2qce2qh.jpg[/IMG]
[spoiler=lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 2 Machine-Type Monsters. When this card is Special Summoned successfully return on Face-Up Monster on your Opponents side of the Field to his/her hand. Once per turn, by discarding 1 or more Machine-Type Monster(s) on your side of the Field, this card may attack your Opponent's Life Points directly. If this effect is used, return this card in Face-Up Defense Position[/spoiler]

[IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2mpx72v.jpg[/IMG]
[spoiler=lore]Activate this card only when 1 or more Monster(s) with "Mechanische" in the Card Name is attacked. Upon activation, switch the ATK and the DEF of the targeted "Mechanische" Monster until the end of the Battle Phase.[/spoiler]

Rate, Hate, Comment, its all the same to me.

Its been quite some time since I've made a card, I suspect my OCG is off.

I planned on making at least 3 more cards, but i got sidetracked and when i got back to working on it, I lost my train of thought.

[ragnarok1945]

2nd card isn't too impressive

it's barely more than a Shield and Sword effect, but more focused.

But at least this you can use on your opponent's turn, which Shield and Sword you can't, so that's a boon

for the 1st card, I'd only add one other thing

"When this card is Special Summoned successfully return on Face-Up Monster on your Opponents side of the Field to his/her hand"

<----suppose your opponent has no monsters on the field

will you add an alternative to that?

8/10

[Tefached]

I'll definitely look into a better effect for the first one.

Thank you.

[DARKPLANT RISING]

The first one is virtually unusable as of now, given Machines have an ace card good enough (Machina Fortress). If you want to leave it as it is, I say at least swap its original ATK and DEF and change the "attack directly" to Drill Warrior-style. Otherwise, simply change its conditions to 1 Machine tribute. That's all for the first.

I don't see a single reason to run the second one either given D-Prison is basically a much better anti-attacker. It basically gives nothing of real advantage. Maybe Mirror Force plus an attack boost that goes on till your End Phase?

Overall the problem seems to be how they're all severely underpowered.

[Tefached]

Thank you, ill work on these later tonight and upgrade them then.