simorgh the mighty Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 [img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/1461/377786.jpg[/img] plz comment new member first post, need advice, for posting making cards etc. Lore: 2 Machine type tuner monsters + 1 or more non-tuner monsters When this card is synchro summoned successfully destroy all face down trap and spell cards they are all negated. Special summon a monster from your deck with stars equal to the amount of cards destroyed by this effect. Once per turn you can remove a monster from play. example only a maximum of 10 cards can be destroyed cuz you and your opponent only have 5 places for spells and traps i'll be posting alot today cuz i was being retarded and didnt validate account so i have so many cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ketuur Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 [b]Can you please post the Effect under the card. People, like me, cannot read the effect of the card.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
simorgh the mighty Posted May 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 [quote name='Ketuur' timestamp='1305319811' post='5205983'] [b]Can you please post the Effect under the card. People, like me, cannot read the effect of the card.[/b] [/quote] There you go plz comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 After squinting I read the effect its way OP'd imo its heavy storm, with a monster summoning bonus, and you're a more powerful chaos sorcerer. I would say loose the last effect drop the level by 2 and let it be one machine tuner and one non-tuner monsters that way everything balances out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
simorgh the mighty Posted May 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 [quote name='simorgh the mighty' timestamp='1305320011' post='5205994'] There you go plz comment [/quote] Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ketuur Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 Woah horsey! OCG fix (OCG = Official Card Grammer) Original 2 Machine type tuner monsters + 1 or more non-tuner monsters When this card is synchro summoned successfully destroy all face down trap and spell cards they are all negated. Special summon a monster from your deck with stars equal to the amount of cards destroyed by this effect. Once per turn you can remove a monster from play. [b] New[/b] [b]2 Machine Type Tuner monsters + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned successfully destroy any number of Face-Down Spell and Trap Cards. Special Summon a monster from your Deck with Level Stars equal to the amount of cards destroyed by this Effect. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can pay 500 Life Points to remove 1 card from play. [/b] Good concept for a first guy. I also added some other things in the new effect for balance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
simorgh the mighty Posted May 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 [quote name='Ketuur' timestamp='1305320808' post='5206053'] Woah horsey! OCG fix (OCG = Official Card Grammer) Original 2 Machine type tuner monsters + 1 or more non-tuner monsters When this card is synchro summoned successfully destroy all face down trap and spell cards they are all negated. Special summon a monster from your deck with stars equal to the amount of cards destroyed by this effect. Once per turn you can remove a monster from play. [b] New[/b] [b]2 Machine Type Tuner monsters + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned successfully destroy any number of Face-Down Spell and Trap Cards. Special Summon a monster from your Deck with Level Stars equal to the amount of cards destroyed by this Effect. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can pay 500 Life Points to remove 1 card from play. [/b] Good concept for a first guy. I also added some other things in the new effect for balance. Thanks like that idea [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ketuur Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 Since I commented your cards, can you comment mine? here is the link: [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/249493-getting-swiss-cheezd/"]TO THE POST![/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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