A Master Red Single - Dawn of the Apocalypse

[Master Red]

I'm quite certain the OCG is off but I'd love to get it corrected
Comment, Rate and Fix plz

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During the End Phase of each turn, the turn player must Tribute 1 Monster on their side of the field or take 1000 damage to their Life Points. If the monster tributed for this cards effect was of DARK, EARTH, FIRE or WATER Attribute, activate the appropriate effect:
DARK: Remove from play 1 card from either player's Graveyard.
EARTH: Send the top card of either player's Deck to the Graveyard.
FIRE: Inflict 800 damage to either player's Life Points.
WATER: Discard 1 card from either player's hand.
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[ragnarok1945]

for DARK and WATER, I'd add in an alternative effect

after all, what if there are no cards to be removed from play? Unless you want to count Dawn of the Apolcalypse itself as one

and the same for WATER, if there's no cards in the player's hand

aside from that though, I see nothing wrong with it

has a very reasonable burn effect to it, and I'll give it 9.1/10

[Master Red]

Hey, thanks for the input

I think I'll keep water as it is, the effect could end up being useless after all but it could also force you to discard 1 card from your own hand if you opponent has none in theirs.
Dark could be changed to RFG from GY, it'll probably be better after all. It keeps the field in play and also doesn't severely weaken one player by rfg one card.

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[ragnarok1945]

I only see the change in DARK

WATER's effect still looks the same

[Master Red]

If you read my earlier post then you'll see that Water is supposed to be the same. An effect can screw up you know. The DARK one can still screw up, there might be no cards in the graveyard to RFG and as such it fails. An effect doesn't alway have to work you know