Lexadin Posted May 15, 2011 Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 [center]To somewhat continue with my "Writer's Celebration" Thread. I made a Fusion for [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Memory_Crush_King"]Memory Crush King[/url] (as it is an awesome card imo). And I wanted your opps on this. [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/9443/20638t.jpg[/img] [size="1"]Img from Jazin Kays.[/size] [i]"Memory Crush King" + "Horrendous Slizer" This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. Once per turn, you can remove 1 Fiend-Type monster from your hand from play. This card can attack your opponent directly this turn. When it does so using this effect, any Battle Damage it inflicts to your opponent is halved. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points by attacking directly, remove from play all Fusion, Synchro and Exceed Monsters in your opponent's Graveyard and inflict 800 Damage for each card removed that way.[/i] [spoiler=Horrendous Slizer] As the Card Maker won't let me load it's img I'll post it in written format instead. DARK Level 5 ATK 1900 DEF 1600 Fiend/Effect [i]This card inflicts piercing damage. Once per turn, you can remove 2 Fiend-Type monsters in your Graveyard from play to select 1 Fiend-Type monster you control. The selected monster can attack your opponent directly this turn.[/i] [/spoiler] [color="#006400"][size="1"]Rate/Hate/Fix[/size][/color] [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 15, 2011 Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 well it's better than Memory Crush's 1000 burn per synchro even so, removing that much is easily able to drain 5000 or more LP away, might still be a bit too much but Memory Crush was easy to set up OTK so I'll say this is balanced and give you 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted May 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 Oh, back from ban again Rag? Anyway, thanks for your comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 do you only take pics off Jazin or off HP Doom as well? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 800 is the wise choice, and since this card have only 2000 ATK. so it is fair and balanced, the idea and pic also good. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 Reverse ATK and DEF, okay pic, kinda useless effect. Work on wording so you can use it during your opponent's turn. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted May 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1305505755' post='5211501'] do you only take pics off Jazin or off HP Doom as well? [/quote] Not only, it's 1 of my sources. Including DA, Art Catacombs, Pixiv and CI Archives. [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1305511898' post='5211945'] 800 is the wise choice, and since this card have only 2000 ATK. so it is fair and balanced, the idea and pic also good. 10/10 [/quote] Thanks for the comment. [quote name='Professor Cobra' timestamp='1305513866' post='5212050'] Reverse ATK and DEF, okay pic, kinda useless effect. Work on wording so you can use it during your opponent's turn. 7/10 [/quote] It's stats are fine. Like I said in the sub-title, combined with Extra Deck Mill, it will be very damaging. Also why would I let it be able to attack the foe directly in my opp's turn? That would be OPing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blah_blah12629 Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 Maybe you could reduce the burn damage to 500? but otherwise, it's a great card. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted May 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 Mhh, considering 1 of it's parts has 1000 burn (p Synchro), I think 800 is fair enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AgentBlaze117 Posted May 17, 2011 Report Share Posted May 17, 2011 Cool, But a few OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted May 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2011 Can you name them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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