silentwolfassassin Posted May 15, 2011 Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 Sorry if i mess up on the post but its my first post on here so these are my cards i made that would go with a rainbow dragon deck. [img]http://i1225.photobucket.com/albums/ee381/lonewolfassassin/RainbowDragonAssaultMode.jpg?t=1305500182[/img] Lore:This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned except with "Assault Mode Activate". This card can activate its effects the turn it is special summoned. Send all "Crystal Beast" monsters on the Field to the Graveyard; This card gains 1000 ATK and 500 DEF for each card sent. You can activate this effect only on your turn. You can remove from play all "Crystal Beast" Monster Cards in your Graveyard to return all cards (including this card) to there owners Decks. [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/5787/120180.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be destroyed while there is another "Crystal Beast" monster in the monster card zone. While this card is on the field, "Rainbow" monsters and "Crystal Beast" monsters cannot be targeted by Spells, Traps,and Effect Monsters. [img]http://i1225.photobucket.com/albums/ee381/lonewolfassassin/RainbowPower.jpg?t=1305500182[/img] Please tell me if i could improve any of these and how good they are Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted May 15, 2011 Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 No attachments plz...If I remember correctly, they aren't allowed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted May 15, 2011 Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 don't you know how to post the image? [font="Impact"]just press it and copy-paste the code in the post [/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silentwolfassassin Posted May 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 [quote name='jaster_rogue' timestamp='1305500113' post='5211230'] don't you know how to post the image? [font="Impact"]just press it and copy-paste the code in the post [/font] [/quote] not really cause i never posted something before Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted May 15, 2011 Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 Go to the card creator. Open you card. Literally, click ON the card. A small image link should be loading at the bottom of the card maker. Copy that link and post it here. The image should show. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silentwolfassassin Posted May 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 [quote name='Cody Frost' timestamp='1305500494' post='5211261'] Go to the card creator. Open you card. Literally, click ON the card. A small image link should be loading at the bottom of the card maker. Copy that link and post it here. The image should show. [/quote] thank you i fixed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted May 15, 2011 Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 [quote name='silentwolfassassin' timestamp='1305493750' post='5210936'] [spoiler=Rainbow Dragon/Assault Mode] [img]http://i1225.photobucket.com/albums/ee381/lonewolfassassin/RainbowDragonAssaultMode.jpg?t=1305500182[/img] Lore:This card cannot be [u]Normal Summoned[/u] or [u]Set[/u]. This card cannot be [u]Special Summoned[/u] except with "Assault Mode Activate". This card can activate its effects the turn it is [u]Special Summoned[/u]. Send all "Crystal Beast" monsters on the [u]field[/u] to the Graveyard; This card gains 1000 ATK and 500 DEF for each card sent. You can activate this effect only on your turn. You can remove from play all "Crystal Beast" Monster Cards in your Graveyard to return all cards (including this card) to [u]their[/u] owners Decks. [b]Nope. This card is definetly weak in it's own right, and there isn't much use to it anyway. For Rainbow Dragon support, this card doesn't help the archtype much at all. :/ Still, fixed OCG errors. Maybe I missed a few...I'm kinda tired[/b][/spoiler] [spoiler=Rainbow Servant] [img]http://i1225.photobucket.com/albums/ee381/lonewolfassassin/RainbowServant.jpg?t=1305500182[/img] Lore: [u]All[/u] "Rainbow Dragon" and "Crystal Beast" monsters are unaffected by Spells, Traps, and Effect Monsters Effects, and cannot be attacked while this card is on the field. [b]Again...no use. Crystal Beasts need to be destroyed and one of the best ways to get them destroyed is via battle. This card cuts that...It's not helping them at all. Plus, if they are unaffected by Spells and Traps, then you can use your own cards on them...and Crystal Beasts need their support [/b][/spoiler] [spoiler=Rainbow Power] [img]http://i1225.photobucket.com/albums/ee381/lonewolfassassin/RainbowPower.jpg?t=1305500182[/img] [b]Not really needed. ATK Boosts used to be good, but they're not anymore. This card has been outdated...[/b][/spoiler] [/quote] Overall, you are trying to go at an archtype through power. That can be reckless and unwise with todays format. Hmm...since your trying to go about with the Rainbow Dragon theme (which is closely related to the Crystal Beast theme) try looking at these cards: [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/249380-crystal-beasts-evolution-trimmed-beasts-58/"]Trimmed Beasts[/url] Maybe they'll spark up something. Also review OCG grammar. It will help you make better cards and explain effects more clearly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 with Rainbow Dragon Assault Mode, I'd lower its base atk just a little bit given its atk gain effect already for Rainbow Servant, you can't have 2 types on the card like that, you need to say it's treated as the other in the effect overall they're still reasonable for a new member where did you get the pics from? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black W Mage Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 It's better than all the CB support I've seen come out of this hell hole. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silentwolfassassin Posted May 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 i found the pics on google so i dont really know who created them an i give credit to whoever made them. And do you mean treated as a "Crystal Beast"? im not sure i understand that What if i changed the Rainbow Servant's effect to this effect: [i]This card cannot be distorted while there is another "Crystal Beast" monster in the monster card zone. While this card is on the field, "Rainbow" monsters and "Crystal Beast" monsters cannot be targeted by Spells, Traps,and Effect Monsters. [/i] or is that a little overpowering too? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 no that should be fine since it's only card effects that SPECIFICALLY target if you had said ALL effects, THEN it'd be OPed as hell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silentwolfassassin Posted May 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 I think ill add more cards to the list when i get time to make the rest of the cards. i have one idea for a card that would get rainbow dragon or rainbow dark dragon out from the deck depending on the conditions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 if you do, please add a NEW next to the added cards makes it easier for us to find, k? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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