DMC_Dante Posted May 17, 2011 Report Share Posted May 17, 2011 Here is the start of my new fantasy fighter set check out my old set Anarchy heroes http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/244889-anarchy-heroesnew-cards-added/ [u][i][b] TELL ME OF OCG ERRORS please[/b][/i][/u] [img]http://img813.imageshack.us/img813/3394/373321.jpg[/img] [b]LORE:[/b]When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle you can Special Summon 1 monster with “fantasy” in its name from your Graveyard whose Level is equal to how many cards you hold. [img]http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/3394/373321.jpg[/img] [b]LORE:[/b]When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon a lvl 4 or lower Fantasy Fighter to the field. [img]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/3394/373321.jpg[/img] [b]LORE:[/b]This Card gains 500 ATK when "Fantasy Fighter Ifrit" is on the Field. [img]http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/3394/373321.jpg[/img] [b]LORE:[/b]This Card gains 500 DEF when "Fantasy Fighter Erif" is on the Field. [img]http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/3394/373321.jpg[/img] [b]LORE:[/b]"Fantasy Fighter Erif"+"Fantasy Fighter Ifrit" This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. When this card is Fusion Summoned, return all removed from play cards to the owners' Deck(s), then shuffle the Deck(s). Increase the ATK of this card by 150 points for each monster on your opponent's side of the field that shares an Attribute with this card. [img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/5212/373321k.jpg[/img] [b]LORE:[/b]Select 1 face-up Fantasy Hero Monster you control and remove it from play until the End Phase of this turn. When that monster is returned to the field double its ATK. During your next Standby Phase, destroy it. Bump bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted May 17, 2011 Report Share Posted May 17, 2011 Post the lore so we can doin a full fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 17, 2011 Report Share Posted May 17, 2011 Lylac's effect is barely more than Dark Magician of Chaos, too boring Strixe's effect is slightly watered down from Change of Heart, though not by too much, I still find it OPed I'd have removed from play the card PERMANENTLY. Not to mention that's Strider Hiryu from Marvel vs. Capcom 2 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anthony Lu'Steezy' Posted May 17, 2011 Report Share Posted May 17, 2011 that dudes name is pirate backwards... nice anyways, onto the cards theres a few OCG errors, but you have no lore, so we cant fix. i think its a cool set and idea, but overall but the effects are kinda dull and need a bit of an upgrade. I just really dont think that it all kinda works together... maybe if the pics actually looked like heroes, they look more like assassins to me (the two guys). also, the effects dont really seem to be stuff that go with a set, they kinda just seem like basic abilities. Cards in a set should all flow together, these dont. they pretty much all just remove your cards from play.... hahaha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMC_Dante Posted May 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 i fixed things and please tell me of errors BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 19, 2011 Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 oh yeah, for Erif, just gaining atk is a bit on the bland side perhaps add another effect to help it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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