towitori Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 [center][img]http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9296/414924.jpg[/img] [i]1 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner Monsters This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card gains the following effects based on the number of non-Tuner Synchro Material Monsters used to Synchro Summon this card: *2: This card gains ATK equal to the combined ATK of the non-Tuner Synchro Material Monsters used to Synchro Summon this card. *3: This card cannot be destroyed by card effects *4 or more: Once per turn, Select 1 monster your opponent controls and destroy it. Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster.[/i] Good? Or Bad?[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 3's effect is OPed not possible to destroy it AND immune to your opponent's card effects, broken as hell. I would have only made it immune to your opponent's monster effects everything else is quite good though, so for a new guy, I'll give this 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
towitori Posted May 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 ok i'm working on that effectchanged immunity to undestructable since it has 0 so it'll just be used for stalling Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 You amazing for a newbs. But as Rag says that can't be destroyed by card effect seems OPed. Make the drawback i suggest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anthony Lu'Steezy' Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 you should make the effects get progressively better and make the effect say that you get 1 of the effects based on the number of non tuners used. would make it more balanced. but yeah yer pretty darn good for just starting props Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltorres666 Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 Your Lore should read [font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif][i][color="#1c2837"]1 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner Monsters[/color] [color="#1c2837"]This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card gains effects equal to the number of non-Tuner Monsters used to Synchro Summon this card:[/color] [color="#1c2837"]*2 or more: This card gains ATK equal to the combined ATK of the non-Tuner Monsters used to Synchro Summon this card.[/color] [color="#1c2837"]*3 or more: This card cannot be destroyed by [/color][color="#ff0000"]Monster, Trap, Spell [b](Pick One)[/b][/color][color="#1c2837"]effects[/color] [color="#1c2837"]*4 or more: Once per turn, Select 1 monster your opponent controls and destroy it. Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster.[/color][/i][/font] [font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif][i][color="#1c2837"] [/color][/i][/font] [font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][color="#1c2837"]If you don't have "or more" on all the effects then your monster wouldn't get all of it's effects, and I'd be pretty lame to have a 0 ATK Synchro monster. Also, maybe you should change the lvl to something higher like 10 to make it a little easier to get it's effects.[/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 your suggestion itorres destroyed it it will become superbly OP'd if you do that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 19, 2011 Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 [quote name='Midnight the Blackwing' timestamp='1305700748' post='5216347'] ok i'm working on that effect changed immunity to undestructable since it has 0 so it'll just be used for stalling [/quote] ok I see the changes, it makes it a little bit more balanced out so I'll raise my rate to 8.8/10 for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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