New card Crazy good!!!!

[Dr.FeelGood]

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Lore:
If you have 4 or less monsters on the field you may normal summon this monster without tribute summoning. This monsters ATK is inreased by 1000 points per monster on the field.As long as this Face-up monster remains on the field Fiend-type monsters cannot be affected by magic cards or trap cards(excluding this monster).All non Fiend-type monsters ATK are decreased by 300 points per X amount of stars on the card.For each Fiend-type monster in your graveyard this monster can ATK in the same turn. If your life points are lower than 8000 this monster cannot be destroted by battle.

New card Need feed back I tried to make it oped, I need help with OCG I never knew how to write it, Please rate comment

[ragnarok1945]

300 per level might be a bit too much of a drain, you should have said 200 per level

it's not likely you'd have above the 8000 LP anyway, so it gets broken for the not being able to be destroyed in battle

7/10

[Garthfunkle Vii Backwards]

[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1305699017' post='5216309']
300 per level might be a bit too much of a drain, you should have said 200 per level

it's not likely you'd have above the 8000 LP anyway, so it gets broken for the not being able to be destroyed in battle

7/10
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you should have said 200 per level

you should have said If your life points are lower than 5500 this monster cannot be destroted by battle.

[ragnarok1945]

to me 5500 is still somewhat on the high end, make it 4000 instead

[MibeR]

[quote] I need help with OCG I never knew how to write it[/quote]

If you have 4 or less monsters on the field, you can Normal Summon this card without Tributing a monster. This monster's ATK is increased by 1000 points equal to the number of monster on the field. As long as this face-up monster remains on the field, Fiend-Type monsters are unaffected by the effect of Spell or Trap Cards (excluding this monster). All non-Fiend-Type monsters ATK are decreased by 300 points x its Level. This monster can attack as many Fiend-Type monsters in your Graveyard. If your Life Points are lower than 8000, this monster cannot be destroyed by battle.

Remove as attack as many and the last effect. This card would be broken if you keep it.

Suggestion.


If you have 1 or less monsters on the field, you can Normal Summon this card without Tributing a monster. This card cannot attack this turn. This monster's ATK is increased by 1000 points equal to the number of monster on the field. As long as this face-up monster remains on the field, Fiend-Type monsters are unaffected by the effect of Trap Cards. All non-Fiend-Type monsters ATK are decreased by 100 points x its Level. This monster gains additional attack for each 3 Fiend-Type monsters in your Graveyard. If your Life Points are lower than 2000, this monster cannot be destroyed by battle.

[Anthony Lu'Steezy']

haha wow card is way OP. you tried too hard on this one my friend and added way too much to it

[anonimen31]

well OP'd here's my suggestion - try this

If you have 1 or less monsters on the field, you can Normal Summon this card without Tributing a monster. This card cannot attack this turn. This monster's ATK is increased by 1000 points equal to the number of monsters on your side of the field (excluding tokens). As long as this face-up monster remains on the field, Fiend-Type monsters are unaffected by the effect of Trap Cards. Once per turn you can remove 2 fiend-type monsters from your graveyard. If you do this card can attack an additional time during your next battle phase. If this card is selected as an attack target you must destroy one monster you control to negate the attack