Lugiafan123 Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 This is my first set so tell me what you think. The archetype is centered around punishing Decks who rely on drawing cards [img]http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/2765/414559.jpg[/img] You can only activate this card if your opponent has twice as many cards that you have in your hand. Your opponent chooses and activates one of the following effects 1- You lose half of your Life Points, and your opponents next turn is skipped. 2- Your opponent discards his/her entire hand. This cards effect can not be negated. [img]http://img804.imageshack.us/img804/2765/414559.jpg[/img] If you have less cards in your hand than your opponent, this Card can be Special Summoned. When this card is face-up on the field, both players can choose to skip their Draw Phase. If a player draws a card while this card is face-up on the field, he/she have to show what card it is and if it is a Monster card, that card is destroyed and the player takes damage equal to the destroyed monsters Level X100 [img]http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/2765/414559.jpg[/img] All "White Flame" monsters gain 500 DEF. If your opponent draws a card, add a "greed counter" to this card. you can remove a number of "greed counters" to activate the following effects. 1-Add a random card from your Deck to your hand. 3-Negate this cards destruction. 5-gain 1000 Life Points. 7-Destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field. 10-Destroy all cards on your opponents side of the field. [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/8580/414559q.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner + 2 or more non-tuner "White Flame" monsters When this card is face-up on the field, both players can choose to skip their Draw Phase. If you have 0 cards in your hand, this card is unafected by your opponents card effects and can't be destroyed by battle. You can discard all cards in your hand to destroy all cards on the field except this one. [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/2765/414559.jpg[/img] [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/2765/414559.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal summoned or Set. This card can only be Special summoned by its own effect. If you have 0 cards in your hand, you can Special Summon this card from your Deck. If this card is Special Summoned, you lose half your life points and the opponent have to discard all his/her cards to the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, neither player can draw any cards. You can remove a "White Flame" monster in your Graveyard from play in order to negate this cards destruction [img]http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/2765/414559.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-tuner "White Flame" monsters When this card is face-up on the field, both players can choose to skip their Draw Phase. If a player draws a card while this card is face-up on the field, "White Flame" monsters can't be destroyed by card effects until the End Phase of that turn. [img]http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/2765/414559.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-tuner "White Flame" monsters This card lose 1000 ATK for each card in the owning players hand. When this card is face-up on the field, both players can choose to skip their Draw Phase. This card gains 1000 ATK for each card in your opponents hand. [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/2765/414559.jpg[/img] When this card is face-up on the field, both players can choose to skip their Draw Phase. If your opponent draws a card while this card is face-up on the field you can Special summon a Level 4 or below "White Flame" monster from your hand or Deck. [img]http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/2765/414559.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal summoned or Set. This card can only be Special summoned to your opponents side of the field by paying 1000 life points and discarding one card. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card cannot be tributed or used as synchro material. If the player controlling this card skips his/ her Draw phase, during his / her standby phase, he/she draws a card. This effect cannot be negated. [img]http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/2765/414559.jpg[/img] When this card is face-up on the field, both players can choose to skip their Draw Phase. If your opponent draws a card while this card is face-up on the field, you gain 500 Life Points and this cards level increase by 1. [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/6420/414559p.jpg[/img] When this card is face-up on the field, both players can choose to skip their Draw Phase. If a player draws a card while this card is face-up on the field, he/she takes 500 points of damage. [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/2765/414559.jpg[/img] When this card is face-up on the field, both players can choose to skip their Draw Phase. If a player draws a card while this card is face-up on the field, he/she cannot declare an atack during that turn. [img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/2765/414559.jpg[/img] You can only equip this card to a "White Flame" monster.The monster equipped with this card gains 1000 ATK. If the monster equipped with this card destroys a monster in battle, the owner of the card that was destroyed has to discard one card. [img]http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/2765/414559.jpg[/img] [img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/6607/414559x.jpg[/img] If this card is face-up on the field you can skip your draw phase and add a "White Flame" monster from your Deck to your hand. If this card is destroyed in battle you can add a level 4 or below "White Flame" monster from your Deck to your hand. [img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/1108/414559i.jpg[/img] Please rate and comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kenxisonline Posted May 21, 2011 Report Share Posted May 21, 2011 First things first... GET BETTER PICTURES I could barely take the cards serious, especially the librarian one... And for a set of monster, you should put 'White Flame', not 'white flame' But I totally like the Paladin one, it actually makes a powerful use of the whole 'not drawing' option Please accept my humble comments... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blueberry23 Posted May 21, 2011 Report Share Posted May 21, 2011 Pretty Cool. But don't forget to capitalize. Other than that i think they're AWESOME Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ginko Posted May 21, 2011 Report Share Posted May 21, 2011 [quote name='Blueberry23' timestamp='1305988435' post='5222724'] Pretty Cool. But don't forget to capitalize. Other than that i think they're AWESOME [/quote] first post, way to lie. card pics are horrible btw, especially the librarian. white backgrounds are plain. its called google images btw. too many 5+ starred monsters so how do you plan to get them onto the field? the cards posted weren't in any order, next time put them in order by monsters, then spell, then trap or something to that extent. bad for a first set, some card effects were too long, so i did not read, but the ones i did read had average ocg. keep working and you will get better 2/10 +1 for first set so 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lugiafan123 Posted May 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2011 [quote name='Konata Izumi :3' timestamp='1305991817' post='5222816'] first post, way to lie. card pics are horrible btw, especially the librarian. white backgrounds are plain. its called google images btw. too many 5+ starred monsters so how do you plan to get them onto the field? the cards posted weren't in any order, next time put them in order by monsters, then spell, then trap or something to that extent. bad for a first set, some card effects were too long, so i did not read, but the ones i did read had average ocg. keep working and you will get better 2/10 +1 for first set so 3/10 [/quote] OK, changed some of the cards, removed the librarian, changed some levels, fixed some OCG and added 2 more monsters. Any ideas for spells and traps and the reason I have so many white backgrounds is because I could'nt find any better. P.S check out my other topic "Dark Dieties" its up on realistic cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
momobeast Posted May 22, 2011 Report Share Posted May 22, 2011 Ok look if you wanna make a good set do this no white backgrounds,dont put old man libarians,don't get crappy pics,and dont make cards a cheat(like White Flame Beast,to much ATK for a level 4 monster). Here are my ratings: Pics 3/10 effects 6/10 Balance 9/10 overall 5/10 Hey check out my first set im currently constructing another one http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/249172-beast-empire/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lugiafan123 Posted May 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2011 [quote name='momobeast' timestamp='1306097218' post='5225693'] Ok look if you wanna make a good set do this no white backgrounds,dont put old man libarians,don't get crappy pics,and dont make cards a cheat(like White Flame Beast,to much ATK for a level 4 monster). Here are my ratings: Pics 3/10 effects 6/10 Balance 9/10 overall 5/10 Hey check out my first set im currently constructing another one http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/249172-beast-empire/ [/quote] Changed Beasts ATK to 2000 and unless you didn't see it there's a negative effect for him to balance high attack power out. I based beast on cards like Giant Orc, Beast king barbaros, Goblin attack force etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lugiafan123 Posted June 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 [quote name='Lugiafan123' timestamp='1306161409' post='5227067'] Changed Beasts ATK to 2000 and unless you didn't see it there's a negative effect for him to balance high attack power out. I based beast on cards like Giant Orc, Beast king barbaros, Goblin attack force etc. [/quote] OK, if you want me to move this set to no pictures then leave a comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PGR Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Some pictures are blurry, some don't even fit Yu-Gi-Oh cards. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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