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Knight of Emotion Posted May 22, 2011 Report Share Posted May 22, 2011 [quote name='wrothmonk' timestamp='1306045447' post='5224550'] [b]UPDATE[/b] #1 NEW CARDS monsters Aphrodite [img]http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/9774/416705.jpg[/img]] Apollo [img]http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/1980/416705c.jpg[/img] Artemis [img]http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/9774/416705.jpg[/img] Athena [img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/9774/416705.jpg[/img] Demeter [img]http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/9774/416705.jpg[/img] Once per turn you may select a season and add its effect until the end of that turn. • Summer: add 1000 ATK points to all LIGHT monsters • Spring: add 700 ATK points to all LIGHT monsters and 300 ATK points to all DARK monsters • Fall: add 700 ATK points to all DARK monsters and 300 ATK points to all LIGHT monsters • Winter: add 1000 ATK points to all DARK monsters Hephaestus [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/9774/416705.jpg[/img] Hera [img]http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/9774/416705.jpg[/img] Hermes [img]http://img813.imageshack.us/img813/9774/416705.jpg[/img] spells Council of the gods [img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/9774/416705.jpg[/img] unfortunetly the image upload is currently not working for the pick I want for this card. PIC [IMG]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/4929/unknowns.jpg[/IMG] also can anybody tell me how to make one of those drop down boxes with text/photos in them so its a smaller post? [b]Update[/b] #2 Two new cards! [img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/9774/416705.jpg[/img] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/9774/416705.jpg[/img] I still don't get why some images wont upload... pic: [IMG]http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/2302/59882235.jpg[/IMG] [/quote] Terrible OCG and pictures plus fake types. Sorry mate 1/10 (Just for the effort...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted May 22, 2011 Report Share Posted May 22, 2011 [quote name='wrothmonk' timestamp='1306045447' post='5224550'] [b]UPDATE[/b] #1NEW CARDS [spoiler=monsters] Aphrodite [img]http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/9774/416705.jpg[/img] Apollo [img]http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/1980/416705c.jpg[/img] Artemis [img]http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/9774/416705.jpg[/img] Athena [img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/9774/416705.jpg[/img] Demeter [img]http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/9774/416705.jpg[/img] Once per turn you may select a season and add its effect until the end of that turn.• Summer: add 1000 ATK points to all LIGHT monsters• Spring: add 700 ATK points to all LIGHT monsters and 300 ATK points to all DARK monsters• Fall: add 700 ATK points to all DARK monsters and 300 ATK points to all LIGHT monsters• Winter: add 1000 ATK points to all DARK monsters Hephaestus [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/9774/416705.jpg[/img] Hera [img]http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/9774/416705.jpg[/img] Hermes [img]http://img813.imageshack.us/img813/9774/416705.jpg[/img] spellsCouncil of the gods [img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/9774/416705.jpg[/img] unfortunetly the image upload is currently not working for the pick I want for this card. PIC [IMG]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/4929/unknowns.jpg[/IMG] [/spoiler] also can anybody tell me how to make one of those drop down boxes with text/photos in them so its a smaller post?[ b]Update[/b] #2Two new cards! [spoiler=cards] [img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/9774/416705.jpg[/img] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/9774/416705.jpg[/img] I still don't get why some images wont upload... pic: [IMG]http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/2302/59882235.jpg[/IMG] [/spoiler] [/quote] Use that: [code] [spoiler=something] <----open a "spoiler" code tag and give a name! Here I call it "something" Pic, Text or Video here!! <---Copy - Paste the IMG code, the text or the video url you like to add into the spoiler [/spoiler] <---Close the "spoiler" tag! [/code] here it is runing: [spoiler=something] Pic, Text or Video here!! [/spoiler] [quote name='Hybrid-X89-0rb' timestamp='1306102397' post='5225829'] Terrible OCG and pictures plus fake types. Sorry mate 1/10 (Just for the effort...) [/quote] I agree... but hey!! He is new!! He doesn't know about OCG!! (Official Card Grammar) I can help you if you like. Just PM me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrothmonk Posted May 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2011 [quote name='A.Prime' timestamp='1306105576' post='5225907'] Use that: [code] [spoiler=something] <----open a "spoiler" code tag and give a name! Here I call it "something" Pic, Text or Video here!! <---Copy - Paste the IMG code, the text or the video url you like to add into the spoiler [/spoiler] <---Close the "spoiler" tag! [/code] here it is runing: [spoiler=something] Pic, Text or Video here!! [/spoiler] I agree... but hey!! He is new!! He doesn't know about OCG!! (Official Card Grammar) I can help you if you like. Just PM me! [/quote] TY a ton for your help. also in reply to the fake types, They are supposed to be different because: A I don't want the Chiron card to overpower a ton of monsters that dont fit with it at all, and B I dont want the spell card to let you win with 6 monsters completely un-related to the olympian council. honestly... The pics are the best I could find since I wanted it to look like the characters (I use the ones from the demigod files) but I couldn't get a picture for them all.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Time Psyduck Posted May 23, 2011 Report Share Posted May 23, 2011 Firstly, the cards from your updates only seem to be in Hybrid's quote, so you may want to re-post them. Firstly, you shouldn't name abilities - Apollo has "illuminate", which you proceed to explain anyway, so there's no need for it to have a name. Mamer (Lamer) says it stuns and negates an attack - is the "stun" an attack negation (in which case see Apollo) or something else (in which case in needs explaining). If you want to identify a specific set of cards in order for support cards without fake types, add a common element the name, say "Greek God [Name of Character]". Then, your cards that only work on those cards should then say ..."Greek God" monster... rather than Greek God type monster. Alternatively, for the gods themselves you could use Divine Beast, as the only other cards with that type are the Egyptian Gods, which aren't entirely inappropriate and don't work very well at 6+ per deck anyway. Major things at first glance: Athena and Hermes should be effect monsters. Demeter has no ATK or DEF values. On to the cards Your 'big three' all have the same effect. When it goes off, do you get a flip for each or one for all three? If the latter, that effect should only be on one card (probably Zeus), freeing up the other two to have different effects (and the one with the joint effect should probably have it's own effect as well). Also, you're much better off referring to the other two by name, as in: When this card, "[God2]" and "[God3]" are on the field... rather than referring to a set of three - since people could get confused and think three of the same card set off the effect. They should also have some special summoning rules - something like needing three tributes or specific monsters as tributes. Every card in the deck needs tribute summons. You really should have some level 4 or lower cards, so you can use the who set together. I recommend downgrading everything other than the gods. Clarisse La Rue is overpowered for a level 6. The best level 6 real card has 2600 ATK, and really anything with 3000 ATK is level 8. Also, normal monsters usually have less that 3000 ATK, so as to preserve Blue-Eyes as the best in it's class, although that's not a hard rule. Aphrodite is too powerful - there's no clause to say how long you keep the monster (for a once per turn deal it should really be the end phase), so you'll never hand it over, meaning you're continually gaining advantage. Because of it's low ATK it's not hard to bring out and/or revive despite the low level, so it can keep being used over and over, and the ATK/DEF loss and inability to attack directly with it won't hurt if you tribute/synchro/exceed the stolen monster away, so you should prohibit at least 1-2 of these uses. Apollo basically means you get full knowledge of you're opponent's face-downs (since anything they set in your turn after you check their card's can't be used against you unless you attack a monster they set). Perhaps limit it to set monsters or spell/traps, or a single card, or when he's summoned, which is still very useful. Artemis is just a big attacker that can shift beasts. You haven't mentioned when or if they come back. They should, unless you put a limit on the levels of monsters you can remove. Also, is it any beasts or just yours/your opponents? For Athena, which cards. It sounds like you mean one from your hand, based on the 'not the one they just drew' rule. If so, make it clear. Also, the effect will happen in their turn, so they won't have just drawn one anyway. Demeter seems interesting, but you don't really need spring and autumn/fall. At best, keep spring (since it's international) with 500 boosts to both. Your set is mostly LIGHT anyway, so the dark boost has little advantage as of yet. Also consider having them cycle, or perhaps dependent on a Persephone card if you make one, or picking one on summoning, rather than just choosing. Hephaestus is a bit low in ATK for a level 8, although is effect is actually very powerful, so only wants to be level 7 or at 2200-2300 ATK. His effect doesn't complement the rest of the set, since they're not Machines, but is broken in decks that use Machines. Hera is over-levelled. 1000ATK/3000DEF should be level 5-6. Her effect isn't clear either. I presume she has to be on the field to use it, in which case she definitely shouldn't be more than one tribute, since tributing two monsters is worse than using polymerisation. If she can be used from the hand, she breaks Elemental Heroes and Gemknights, since she's a free, reusable, fusion card. In this case she should have to be discarded, making her a fusion card or a monster. Again, her effect doesn't really work with the rest of the cards. Hermes is also over-levelled. His low attack is OK, but he shouldn't need more than one tribute. The best thing for him to be is a way to drag out the higher-levelled gods without losing as many smaller monsters. Also, you don't need to specify where in the deck he goes if it's shuffled after he's returned. You don't need to tell a player to shuffle the deck anyway - in Yugioh it's implied you do unless a card(s) is specifically returned to the top or bottom of the deck. Council of the Gods is interesting for an instant win card. I'd add a clause that requires the player to still have six gods after the three turns, and make it clear that it's three of [i]your[/i] turns - three turns includes the opponent's turns as well, making the time until victory shorter and giving your opponent less time to try and do something about it. Your OCG needs work, although it doesn't have to be perfect for pop culture cards. Still, if you want to improve it I can help, although I may be a bit rusty, and I know you've had an offer before. As for the pictures, replace the ones without backgrounds, because they are terrible, and crop the ones where bits of border from the original can be seen. Hera could do with having one that doesn't have her name on it, but the rest aren't too bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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brandog78 Posted May 31, 2011 Report Share Posted May 31, 2011 hi i was just wondering, how do you do those tabs? im new if you culdnt tell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted May 31, 2011 Report Share Posted May 31, 2011 [quote name='brandog78' timestamp='1306804156' post='5243180'] hi i was just wondering, how do you do those tabs? im new if you culdnt tell [/quote] You are out of topc! All questions and help you need goes to "Question and Help" section. Anyway I posted this above: [code] [spoiler=something] <----open a "spoiler" code tag and give a name! Here I call it "something" Pic, Text or Video here!! <---Copy - Paste the IMG code, the text or the video url you like to add into the spoiler [/spoiler] <---Close the "spoiler" tag! [/code] You will get this: [spoiler=something] Pic, Text or Video here!! [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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