WolfFan16 Posted May 24, 2011 Report Share Posted May 24, 2011 [color="#2E8B57"]first started with a contest entry but decided to expand it a little...not the best but hey its whatever comments are appreciated.[/color] [center][img]http://img810.imageshack.us/img810/9496/225556.jpg[/img] [color="#FF8C00"]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner LIGHT monsters This card is also treated as a Thunder-type monster. Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 200 for every Thunder-type monster in your Graveyard. If this card is targeted by an opponent's spell or trap card, negate the activation of it and inflict 500 points of damage. [/color] [img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/5279/225556v.jpg[/img] [color="#0000FF"]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner WATER monsters As long as this card remains face up on the field, increase the ATK of all WATER monsters by 500 points. When a Field Card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 monster that was effected by the Field Card from your Graveyard. [/color] [img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/8840/225556u.jpg[/img] [color="#FF0000"]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner FIRE monsters As long as this card remains face up on the field, increase the ATK of all FIRE monsters by 500 points and decrease their DEF by 400 points. When this card is Synchro Summoned to the field, destroy all non-FIRE monsters on the field. This card can not attack the same turn it is Synchro Summoned[/color].[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hereh Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 I love synchro monsters...they look pretty tight good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 I like A bit of OCG that needs attention, though: Raikou 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner LIGHT monsters "This card is also treated as a Thunder-type monster. Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 200 [b]points[/b] for every Thunder-type monster in your Graveyard. If this card is targeted by an opponent's [b]S[/b]pell or [b]T[/b]rap [b]C[/b]ard, negate the activation of it and inflict 500 points of damage." Bolded parts are simple fixes. Spells and Traps are capitalized, and the word "points" must follow reference to ATK and DEF. The last bit, who is being inflicted with the 500 points of damage? The opponent is assumed, but it must be stated. Suicune 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner WATER monsters "As long as this card remains face[b]-[/b]up on the field, increase the ATK of all WATER monsters by 500 points. When a Field [b]Spell[/b] Card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 monster that was [b]a[/b]ffected by the Field [b]Spell[/b] Card from your Graveyard." This one's good. "Field Spell Card" is just proper. Hyphens go between face and the position, here up. It might also be a good idea to specify where the Special Summoned monster is to be placed. We assume the player's side of the field, but as is, that's unclear. Entei 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner FIRE monsters "As long as this card remains face up on the field, increase the ATK of all FIRE monsters by 500 points and decrease their DEF by 400 points. When this card is Synchro Summoned [s]to the field[/s], destroy all non-FIRE monsters on the field. This card [b]cannot[/b] attack the same turn it is Synchro Summoned." "To the field" is unnecessary. Also, I'm pretty sure "cannot" is considered one word. Overall, I like them. 9/10, one point for the OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YugiJosh Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 Cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WolfFan16 Posted May 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2011 Bump and i minus above due to useless comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poopybuttoxes Posted May 28, 2011 Report Share Posted May 28, 2011 I like entei. I think suicunes effect is a little weird. I think suicune could be 7 stars or something. Eight seems a bit high to me. 7/10 Thanks for posting some good cards haha. Its nice to see those for a change. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shatterfangs Posted May 28, 2011 Report Share Posted May 28, 2011 kewl :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starrush Posted May 28, 2011 Report Share Posted May 28, 2011 "that was effected by the Field Card" Can you explain a bit more about this effect? In other words, what is the meaning that "a monster" is affected by Field Spell Card(s)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight of Emotion Posted May 28, 2011 Report Share Posted May 28, 2011 [quote name='starrush' timestamp='1306588857' post='5237358'] "that was effected by the Field Card" Can you explain a bit more about this effect? In other words, what is the meaning that "a monster" is affected by Field Spell Card(s)? [/quote] An example is a Red-Eyes B. Dragon whose ATK and DEF is raised because of the effect of the Field Card Mountain. If Red Eyes B. Dragon is in the Graveyard and when Mountain is destroyed , you can Special Summon the Red Eyes B. Dragon whose ATK was raised while mountain was on the field because it was effected by Mountain. (Well thats what I think it means) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spellcaster2000 Posted May 28, 2011 Report Share Posted May 28, 2011 Nice cards. But they shouldn't be put in a deck together.Nice cards. But they shouldn't be put in a deck together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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