The "Dorouth" Archetype [7/??]

[Cloister]

The "Dorouth"s are a series of DARK Warrior-Type monsters. They all gain various effects when their ATK is increased by another "Dorouth" monster. Most of them also have an effect that gives itself a small ATK boost.


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This card gains 200 ATK for each other "Dorouth" monster you control. Each time this card inflicts battle damage, 1 "Dorouth" monster you control gains 200 ATK. If this card gains ATK by the effect of another "Dorouth" monster, your opponent must reveal 2 cards in their hand.


This card cannot attack monsters in Defense Position. If this card attacks a monster in Attack Position, this card gains 500 ATK during the Battle Phase only. If this card gains ATK by the effect of another "Dorouth" monster, draw 1 card.


Once per turn, 1 other "Dorouth" monster you control gains 100 ATK for each monster on the field. If this card gains ATK by the effect of another "Dorouth" monster, you can change the battle position of 1 monster on the field.


Each time a player draws a card, 1 other "Dorouth" monster you control gains 300 ATK. If this card gains ATK by the effect of another "Dorouth" monster, remove from play 1 card from your opponent's Graveyard.


This card gains 100 ATK for each "Dorouth" monster on the field. This card inflicts Piercing Damage. You can discard 1 card to have 1 other "Dorouth" monster gain 500 ATK. If this card gains ATK by the effect of another "Dorouth" monster, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field.


This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot attack if your opponent controls a Level 5 or higher monster. This card gains 200 ATK for each "Dorouth" monster on the field. Once per turn, 1 other "Dorouth" monster you control gains 400 ATK. If this card gains ATK by the effect of another "Dorouth" monster, this card can attack twice during that turn.


This card gains 300 ATK for each "Dorouth" monster on the field. Once per turn, you can add 1 "Dorouth" monster from your Deck to your hand. You can pay 500 Life Points to have all other "Dorouth" monsters you control gain 700 ATK until the End Phase of this turn. If this card gains ATK by the effect of another "Dorouth" monster, inflict 300 damage to your opponent for each other "Dorouth" monster you control.
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I'm planning on making more than 10, but I might be too lazy or other stuff might take up my time instead.

Also, I know there is a "new OCG" but can't be arsed to change it right now.

[ragnarok1945]

only thing you need to change is an alternative for the 1st card

"If this card gains ATK by the effect of another "Dorouth" monster, your opponent must reveal 2 cards in their hand"

<---and what happens if they don't have that many to reveal?

9.4/10

[Cloister]

Nothing happens. They don't have to show you any cards.

"If they cannot, nothing happens." sounds weird, so didn't add that.

EDIT: Added 3 cards.

[ragnarok1945]

for Tallas, you should have SPECIFIED which other monster gains the atk

everything else looks fine though, so the 3 new cards you get 9.4/10 for them

[Cloister]

[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1306355272' post='5231437']
for Tallas, you should have SPECIFIED which other monster gains the atk

[i]How do you mean? Like "Dorouth Mex gains 300 ATK"?[/i]

everything else looks fine though, so the 3 new cards you get 9.4/10 for them

[i]Thanks.[/i]
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[ragnarok1945]

"Each time a player draws a card, 1 other "Dorouth" monster you control gains 300 ATK"

<---all you said is 1 other monster gains the 300 atk. Make it more specific

[Cloister]

I have "1 other "Dorouth" monster gains 300 ATK"...

[ragnarok1945]

but is that RANDOMLY selected?

[Cloister]

No, you select which monster that will gain the ATK.