MystirMeme Posted May 24, 2011 Report Share Posted May 24, 2011 Hello. Meh name used to be Dragon Master Zero, but I changed it, just in case anyone didnt know (or cared). A while ago, I created the Spiritual Archetype, but they seem to have died for me. (T.T) Well, one day, I remembered my Spiritual archetype and, remembering how good a concept it was, decided to give the archetype a bit of a "refurbishing" of sorts. I have made some modifications of the archetype, being: *It is no longer split up to the Spiritual Souls, Spiritual Beasts, Spiritual blah blah blah, it's JUST the Spiritual Force. *Some cards have had their effects redone. Others were scrapped and others will probably get a redo sometime in the future. *The effects for the Spiritual Force monsters have been slightly tweaked in how they work. *I might make a new back story if I feel like it. So without further ado, I give you the new and (more or less) improved Spiritual Force Archetype. [center][spoiler='Monsters (NEW)'][spoiler='Spiritual Force - Star Trooper'][IMG]http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg177/icarus_022/My%20Created%20Cards/The%20Spiritual%20Force/SpiritualForce-StarTrooper-1.jpg[/IMG] When this card is Normal Summoned: You can add 1 "Spiritual Force" monster in your Deck to your hand, except "Spiritual Force - Star Trooper". When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 "Star Trooper Token" (Warrior-Type/LIGHT/4 Star/ATK 1600/DEF 1100) on your side of the field. That Token cannot be Tributed for the Tribute Summon of a monster.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Spiritual Force - Blackfeather'][IMG]http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg177/icarus_022/My%20Created%20Cards/The%20Spiritual%20Force/SpiritualForce-Blackfeather-1.jpg[/IMG] If you control a "Spiritual Force" monster, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 Blackfeather Token" (Winged Beast-Type/DARK/4 Star/ATK 1700/DEF 1300) on your side of the field. That Token cannot be Tributed for the Tribute Summon of a monster.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Spiritual Force - Weapon Master'][IMG]http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg177/icarus_022/My%20Created%20Cards/The%20Spiritual%20Force/SpiritualForce-WeaponMaster.jpg[/IMG] Once per turn: You can discard 1 card in your hand and add 1 Equip Spell Card in your Deck to your hand. During your Main Phase: You can target 1 Token on the field; Equip it to this card as an Equip Card. This card gains 500 ATK for each Equip Card on it.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Spiritual Force - Necromaster'][img]http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg177/icarus_022/SpiritualForce-Necromaster.jpg[/img] Once per turn, you can discard 1 card in your hand to select 1 level 4 or lower "Spiritual Force" monster in your Graveyard. Special Summon 1 "Necro Soul Token" on your side of the field. The "Necro Soul Token's" name is treated as the selected monster's name and has the same Level, Type, Attribute, ATK, and DEF as the selected monster's.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Spiritual Force - Soul Charger'][IMG]http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg177/icarus_022/My%20Created%20Cards/The%20Spiritual%20Force/SpiritualForce-SoulCharger.jpg[/IMG] Once per turn: You can target 1 monster you control, other than this card, and one monster your opponent controls; Destroy the selected monsters.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Spiritual Force - Sacred Scarab'][IMG]http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg177/icarus_022/My%20Created%20Cards/The%20Spiritual%20Force/SpiritualForce-SacredScarab-1.jpg[/IMG] If you control a Token, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If you control a Token when this card is Special Summoned, this card's level is increased by 2.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Spiritual Force - Dark Ganesha'][IMG]http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg177/icarus_022/My%20Created%20Cards/The%20Spiritual%20Force/SpiritualForce-DarkGanesha.jpg[/IMG] You can Tribute 1 Token to Special Summon this card from your hand. If you Tribute a Token Special Summoned by a "Spiritual Force" monster, This card gains 500 ATK. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 "Dark Ganesha Token" (Beast-Type/DARK/5 Star/ATK 2000/DEF 2000) on your side of the field. That Token cannot be Tributed for the Tribute Summon of a monster.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Spiritual Force - Yin Tora (NEW)'][IMG]http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg177/icarus_022/My%20Created%20Cards/The%20Spiritual%20Force/SpiritualForce-YinTora.jpg[/IMG] While you control a Token, This card gains the following effects: *This card gains 200 DEF for each Token you control and cannot be destroyed by card effects and your opponent cannot select another "Spiritual" monster on the field as an attack target[/spoiler] [spoiler='Spiritual Force - Yang Tora (NEW)'][IMG]http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg177/icarus_022/My%20Created%20Cards/The%20Spiritual%20Force/SpiritualForce-YangTora.jpg[/IMG] While you control a Token, this card gains the following effects: *This monster cannot be destroyed by battle while attacking and any monster that this card attacks is destroyed at the end of the Damage Step. In addition to a normal attack, this card can attack during the same Battle Phase as many times as the number of Tokens you control.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Spiritual Force - Angelic Protector (NEW)'][IMG]http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg177/icarus_022/My%20Created%20Cards/The%20Spiritual%20Force/SpiritualForce-AngelicProtector-1.jpg[/IMG] During your Main Phase: You can discard this card in your hand; Add 1 "Floating Island of the Spirits" in your Deck to your hand. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 "Angelic Protector Token" (Fairy-Type/LIGHT/4 Star/ATK 1800/DEF 1350) on your side of the field. That Token cannot be Tributed for the Tribute Summon of a monster.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Synchros / Exceeds'][spoiler='Spiritual Force - Golden Protector'][IMG]http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg177/icarus_022/My%20Created%20Cards/The%20Spiritual%20Force/SpiritualForce-GovernorofLight-1.jpg[/IMG] 1 "Spiritual Force" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned: Special Summon "Guardian Soul Tokens" (Fairy-Type/DARK/2 Star/ATK 800/DEF 1800) in face-up Defense Position up to the number of non-Tuner monsters used as Synchro Material Monsters for this card. This card cannot be targeted by your opponent's card effects or selected as an attack target while you control a "Guardian Soul Token".[/spoiler] [spoiler='Spiritual Force - Governor of Light'][IMG]http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg177/icarus_022/My%20Created%20Cards/The%20Spiritual%20Force/SpiritualForce-GoldenProtector-1.jpg[/IMG] 1 "Spiritual Force" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monster .If this card is Synchro Summoned using a Token: You can Special Summon 2 "Remnant Spirit Tokens" (Fairy-Type/LIGHT/2 Star/ATK 500/DEF 500) on your side of the field. Once per turn: You can Tribute any number of Tokens; Activate one of the following effects. * Destroy 1 card on the field for each Token Tributed. * Inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points for each Token Tributed[/spoiler] [spoiler='Spiritual Dragon'][IMG]http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg177/icarus_022/My%20Created%20Cards/The%20Spiritual%20Force/SpiritualDragon-1.jpg[/IMG] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters Once per turn: You can Special Summon 1 "Spiritual Seed Token" (Fairy-Type/LIGHT/2 Star/ATK 1000/DEF 1000) on your side of the field. If this card would be destroyed by your opponent's card effect: You can target 1 Token you control; tribute that target instead. Once per turn: You can target 1 "Spiritual Force" monster in your Graveyard; banish that target, then increase this card's ATK by 500 until the End Phase.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Spiritual Force - Reaper Taiji'][IMG]http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg177/icarus_022/My%20Created%20Cards/The%20Spiritual%20Force/SpiritualForce-ReaperTaiji-1.jpg[/IMG] 2 level 4 "Spiritual Force" monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material Monster from this card; Special Summon 1 "Spiritual Soul Token" on your side of the field. The "Spiritual Soul Token's" name is treated as the detached monster's name and has the same Level, Type, Attribute, ATK, and DEF as the detached monster's. When a level 4 or lower "Spiritual Force" monster you control would be destroyed and sent to the Graveyard: you can attach that monster as an Xyz Material Monster on this card instead.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Spells (NEW)'][spoiler='Floating Island of the Spirits (NEW)'][IMG]http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg177/icarus_022/My%20Created%20Cards/The%20Spiritual%20Force/FloatingIslandoftheSpirits.jpg[/IMG] Cards in your Graveyard cannot be banished. Any "Spiritual Force" monster that would be banished is sent to the Graveyard instead. All "Spiritual Force" monsters gain 300 ATK and DEF.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Release the Spirit'][IMG]http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg177/icarus_022/My%20Created%20Cards/The%20Spiritual%20Force/ReleasetheSpirit-1.jpg[/IMG] Target 1 "Spiritual Force" monster you control; Tribute the selected monster and Special Summon 1 "Released Spirit Token" on your side of the field. The "Released Spirit Token" has the same Level, Type, Attribute, ATK, and DEF as the Tributed monster and cannot be destroyed by battle. During the End Phase, destroy the "Released Spirit Token"[/spoiler] [spoiler='Kusanagi no Tsurugi'][IMG]http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg177/icarus_022/My%20Created%20Cards/The%20Spiritual%20Force/KusanaginoTsurugi.jpg[/IMG] Equip this card to a face-up "Spiritual Force" monster OR a Token you control. That monster gains 300 ATK. If this card is in the Graveyard: You can Target 1 Token; Tribute that target and add this card in your Graveyard to your hand.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Traps][spoiler='Soul Barrier'][IMG]http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg177/icarus_022/My%20Created%20Cards/The%20Spiritual%20Force/SoulBarrier-1.jpg[/IMG] When your opponent declares an attack while you control a Token: Tribute 1 Token you control; While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent's monsters cannot attack monsters you control or attack your Life Points directly. This card is destroyed during your 2nd Standby Phase after activation.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 24, 2011 Report Share Posted May 24, 2011 two thumbs up for the artwork you get some the pics from Jazin Kay or HP Doom? only thing maybe you want to change given the uses you have for your tokens already, maybe say you can't use these tokens for synchro/tribute summoning 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MystirMeme Posted May 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1306279791' post='5229828'] two thumbs up for the artwork you get some the pics from Jazin Kay or HP Doom? only thing maybe you want to change given the uses you have for your tokens already, maybe say you can't use these tokens for synchro/tribute summoning 9.5/10 [/quote] Thanks. These are Jazin Kay's. And I was considering that on some of the cards, but I felt like it would be too much card text. I might do it if I get enough people asking for it though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 oh there's no such thing as too much card text well, short of you writing 1000 lines onto it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MystirMeme Posted May 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 Bumpz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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MystirMeme Posted June 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 Bump. Anyone? EDIT: Im probably gonna be updating to the new Problem Solving Card Text sometime in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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newhat Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 Problem Solving Card Text is a little ugly to me. Unless your wording would be unclear otherwise, I'd prefer you didn't. Star Trooper and Blackfeather...I remember these cards. They're like weaker Tengus. Search Star Trooper, Normal Summon, search Blackfeather, Special Summon. If you please, alter Star Trooper's text to prevent it from searching itself. Armament Master would mainly be useful in a Supervise Deck. No matter. Necromaster's a tad too strong. Require the discard to be a monster (a la Zombie Master) and he's fine. While it can't affect Spells or Traps, Cannon Blaster's effect is too much for a Level 3 LIGHT Warrior. If its Type were different, it would be fine. On the Extra stuff: I like Golden Protector. It doesn't kill Stardust or Shi En; it just tanks. Token Sundae! Spiritual Dragon looks balanced. Not much to say. Reaper Taiji has too much power. 2600 ATK is equivalent to Gem-Knight Pearl. Its Summon is a +1, since you can immediately eject both materials and get your monsters back. Sure, they won't have their effects, but if you use it in Gadgets, they won't miss them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MystirMeme Posted June 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [quote name='newhat' timestamp='1308495537' post='5295087'] Problem Solving Card Text is a little ugly to me. Unless your wording would be unclear otherwise, I'd prefer you didn't. Star Trooper and Blackfeather...I remember these cards. They're like weaker Tengus. Search Star Trooper, Normal Summon, search Blackfeather, Special Summon. If you please, alter Star Trooper's text to prevent it from searching itself. Armament Master would mainly be useful in a Supervise Deck. No matter. Necromaster's a tad too strong. Require the discard to be a monster (a la Zombie Master) and he's fine. While it can't affect Spells or Traps, Cannon Blaster's effect is too much for a Level 3 LIGHT Warrior. If its Type were different, it would be fine. On the Extra stuff: I like Golden Protector. It doesn't kill Stardust or Shi En; it just tanks. Token Sundae! Spiritual Dragon looks balanced. Not much to say. Reaper Taiji has too much power. 2600 ATK is equivalent to Gem-Knight Pearl. Its Summon is a +1, since you can immediately eject both materials and get your monsters back. Sure, they won't have their effects, but if you use it in Gadgets, they won't miss them. [/quote] Thanks. Will do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MystirMeme Posted June 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2011 Bump. Fixed the above. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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