JazzSax Posted May 24, 2011 Report Share Posted May 24, 2011 Hey! Making my first cards here, they're are pobably some OCG errors so fix them if you can plz and comments! Tell me if any of the pics are overused too! [img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/564/418835.jpg[/img] [img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/564/418835.jpg[/img] [img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/564/418835.jpg[/img] [img]http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/564/418835.jpg[/img] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/564/418835.jpg[/img] [img]http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/564/418835.jpg[/img] I tried to make my first cards extremely plain and simple, just for the sake of starting off easy. I have other cards that I am currently making, so I'll post those in a while too. Let me know how I did! This is purposely for OCG critique though haha. And I don't take credit for any of the pictures used! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 24, 2011 Report Share Posted May 24, 2011 they're balanced, though none of them have effects that really stand out much 1st card I'd still give it another effect unless it was your intention to keep it at 1 effect only Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark345678 Posted May 24, 2011 Report Share Posted May 24, 2011 I think that the cards are pretty good for your first cards, my main problem is with "Double-Axed Orc". It has 1800 ATK and can attack twice, which I think is pretty OP'd. If you post the lore for each of the cards, I could do some OCG fixing. Overall 9.7/10 for a first set of cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JazzSax Posted May 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2011 Okay, so I fixed Henasaurus and gave it another effect. And I made Double-Axed Orc and little weaker in ATK. I think they may be more balanced now, tell me whatcha think! and also, what do you mean by lore? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 lore is basically the effect printed on the card itself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JazzSax Posted May 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 Edited: Added 3 more cards! I think the dragons, esp. phendrana might be a little OP, but I'll wait until I here more from others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nghtwing Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 The're pretty good for first cards! congratulations ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark345678 Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 I actually think that Phendrana is ok, thats mainly because of it's high level. I think that, for it's ATK/DEF and Effect combo, that part might be a little op'd. I would maybe make a summoning restriction, like, say, "this card can only be summoned if there is at least 1 WATER card on the field." Not sure if that is correct OCG, but im just doing a quick thing before bed. Also, on Undead Dragon, I think that that card is OP'd too. Mainly because if you have a ton of level 1-4 Undead monsters, Undead Dragon could continue summoning it back to the field. I just think that the card should have something more like 2100 ATK instead. Defense could also be a bit lower, like, say, 2000 DEF. Those are my thoughts on the cards. Overall: Phendrana = 8.9/10 (starting to grade more proffesionally) Undead Dragon = 7.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 for Undead Dragon I think it's just better for you to treat it completely as a zombie type, forget dragon type altogether Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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