hereh Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 [img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/710/290639q.jpg[/img] [b]When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of Battle, search your Deck and Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower Wind-Type Monster to your side of the field in face-up defense position.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 it's Winged Beast, not Winged-Beast for the type and Wind is not a type, it's an attribute Demoness doesn't look anything like a female demon, effect is somewhat bland, was that your intention? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hereh Posted May 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 Ra....i didn't see all the typos that i actually made.... i think my mind was bland.. -_____- The effect was like, when she's destroyed you can summon a monster from your deck...or something like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard[b], [/b]as a result of [b]b[/b]attle, Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower Wind-Type Monster [b]from your Deck[/b] on your side of the field in face-up [b]D[/b]efense [b]P[/b]osition. No bad. Some OCG errors.. Other than that I think it is ok. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hereh Posted May 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 Wait..so the Wind-Type Monster part was correct..? or is it wrong?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Communityreborn Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 I'd prefer Flying Kamakari compared to this. Maybe if the attack was lowered to 1800 ish, and the level was reduced to 4, I would use it. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hereh Posted May 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 That might work yu know...it looks like it could be a level 4 rather than a higher level... Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 OCG: "When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon from your Deck 1 level 3 or lower WIND monster in face-up Defence Position." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hereh Posted May 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 That OCG makes sense....is it the right one though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen-Psi Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 Just small ocg errors, not so bad. But you might want to find another pic because it seems more spirit-like than demon. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 Yup pretty sure its the right one lol, When saying "destroyed by battle" that's how it is, it used to be longer but got shortened from "Destroyed by way of battle" or "destroyed as a result of battle" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hereh Posted May 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 Well..i know that part..but the WIND part... cuz i put Wind-Type and it wasnt corrected then it was :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 [quote name='Black of Broken Hearts' timestamp='1306374162' post='5232257'] OCG: "When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon from your Deck 1 level 3 or lower WIND monster in face-up Defence Position." [/quote] Get rid of the "by battle" here and the OCG will be correct for your original effect. It's slow, sadly. Flying Kamakiri can at least be Normal Summoned w/o tribue, and WIND doesn't have very much support as it is. I'd say make it a level 4 with 1800 ATK or something, and keep the effect the same. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 [quote name='Miror B.' timestamp='1306378832' post='5232527'] Get rid of the "by battle" here and the OCG will be correct for your original effect. It's slow, sadly. Flying Kamakiri can at least be Normal Summoned w/o tribue, and WIND doesn't have very much support as it is. I'd say make it a level 4 with 1800 ATK or something, and keep the effect the same. [/quote] No mate, the effect activates when the card is destroyed by battle. If it's destroyed by an effect, then the effect doesn't activate, so my wording was right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hereh Posted May 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 two people saying totally different things.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Communityreborn Posted May 27, 2011 Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 Another thing I forgot to add. The card pic isn't...you know... that.. *cough* sexy *cough*. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hereh Posted May 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 I call everything sexy alright.. >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted May 27, 2011 Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 Make this card Level 4, with appropriate ATK reduction, and it's still only okay. You could bring out Shield Wing in the right position, but Flying Kamakiri #2 would still be better. If you made it add Level 4 or lower WIND monsters to the hand, it would be far more useful. You could use it in Mist Valley Synchro to search Mist Condor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hereh Posted May 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 Sounds cool...level 4 monsters seem to be people's favorites.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted May 27, 2011 Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 [quote name='Black of Broken Hearts' timestamp='1306395597' post='5232854'] No mate, the effect activates when the card is destroyed by battle. If it's destroyed by an effect, then the effect doesn't activate, so my wording was right. [/quote] Wut? The effect when I first read it said if it's destroyed. It would make it better than Kamakiri anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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