Nghtwing Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 [center][size="3"]I'd like to make this set Focused on Direct Attack and Mantainning Low ATK Monsters on the field. I had this idea when I saw that Direct Attackers are too weak and too easy to destroy. SO instead of making direct attackers with high attack (what would be clearly OP) I made monsters whose effect is focused on mantain weak opponents for weak monsters [/center][/size] [b][size="4"]Update:[/size] For reasons of Overuse, Healing Fairy's Pic. has been changed, Given Wings added. [/b] [spoiler=Depressive Angel][center][img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/1051/419009.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore:[/b]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand in face-up Defence Position when a Monster Card you control is destroyed by battle. When this card is Special Summoned by its effect, destroy all face-up Monster Cards whose ATK is higher than 1500. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, Monster Cards whose ATK is higher than 1500 cannot be Summoned. When this card is destroyed inflict 500 Points to either player's Life Points.[/center][/i][/spoiler] [spoiler=Elf Summoner Maiden][center][img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/1051/419009.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore:[/b]When this card is Flip Summoned, place 3 "Fairy Counters" on it (Max. 3). Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can remove 1 "Fairy Counter" from this card to Special Summon 1 Fairy-Type monster with 1500 or lower ATK from your hand or Deck. When this card is destroyed by battle, with "Fairy Counters" on it, destroy 1 Monster Card on the field for each "Fairy Counter" on this card.[/center][/i][/spoiler] [spoiler=Archer Elf][center][img]http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/1051/419009.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore:[/b]Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, this card can attack your opponent directly. If this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, increase its ATK by 100. If this card's ATK is higher than 1500, destroy this card during your End Phase.[/i][/center][/spoiler] [spoiler=Clocktower Witch][center][img]http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/1051/419009.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore:[/b]Once per turn, during your Stanby Phase, you can discard 1 Monster Card with 1500 ATK or higher to skip your opponent's next Draw Phase. If this card is selected as an attack target by an Monster Card with 1500 or higher ATK, put 1 "Time Counter" on that card (max. 1 per card). A Monster Card with an "Time Counter" on it cannot delcare an attack. During your End Phase, if you control 1 Monster Card with 1500 or higher ATK, remove all "Time Counters" on the field.[/i][/center][/spoiler] [spoiler=Healing Fairy][center][img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/1051/419009.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore:[/b]You can control only 1 "Healing Fairy" per time. This card cannot be Summoned by the effect of another card. When this card is Normal Summoned, if your LP are 2000 or lower, Increase your LP by the number of Monster Cards with 1500 or lower ATK in your Graveyard X 200. During your End Phase, if you control no monsters except this card, Special Summon from your Graveyard 1 Monster Cards whose ATK is lower than 1500.[/i][/center][/spoiler] [spoiler=*NEW* - Given Wings][center][img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/1051/419009.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore:[/b]This card cannot be activated except by Banishing 1 Fairy-Type monster from your Graveyard. Equip this card to a non Fairy-Type monster you control. A monster equipped with this card is treated an Fairy-Type monster. If the monster equipped with this card is destroyed, add 1 banished Fairy-Type monster to your hand.[/i][/center][/spoiler] [size="5"][center]Please, vote on the pool [/center][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hereh Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 This card cannot be [b]Advance[/b] Summoned or Set. What does that mean..? Is that Special Summoned? Never seen a card say "Advance". I think there is grammer errors....but minor..the is, is suppose to be are..I THINK .-. But..the card seems pretty good :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 "As long as this card remains face-up in the field, Monster Cards whose ATK is higher than 1500." <---I don't understand that sentence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nghtwing Posted May 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 [quote name='hereh' timestamp='1306295541' post='5230305'] This card cannot be [b]Advance[/b] Summoned or Set. What does that mean..? Is that Special Summoned? Never seen a card say "Advance". I think there is grammer errors....but minor..the is, is suppose to be are..I THINK .-. But..the card seems pretty good :/ [/quote] Advance Summon means Tribute Summon, i saw it on New OCG and i thought it would be better ... but , i'll refix it to Old OCG , sorry for that.[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1306305213' post='5230431'] "As long as this card remains face-up in the field, Monster Cards whose ATK is higher than 1500." <---I don't understand that sentence [/quote] OH i think i've forgot to place "cannot be Summoned" :S I'm really sorry for this maan , oh God , I'm terrible D:Card Refix'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 You should make it "Normal Summoned", since Cost Down would allow it to be Summoned without Tribute. This card is better than Crush Card Virus and Gravity Bind combined. No kidding. You could wall your opponents for a really long time, since they're not even allowed to bring Brionac out to get this off the field. It's possible to overcome in most Decks, but it would take a really long time, long enough to kill your opponent with Raging Flame Sprite. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 [quote name='Matheus Mariano II' timestamp='1306688335' post='5239802'] Advance Summon means Tribute Summon, i saw it on New OCG and i thought it would be better ... but , i'll refix it to Old OCG , sorry for that. OH i think i've forgot to place "cannot be Summoned" :S I'm really sorry for this maan , oh God , I'm terrible D: Card Refix'd [/quote] ok now it makes sense, so I'll give the card 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nghtwing Posted May 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1306693515' post='5240037'] ok now it makes sense, so I'll give the card 8.4/10 [/quote] okay , thanks *-* . a new card is coming , I decided to make this set focused on Low ATK , what do you think ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 you show us the new card first, then I'll tell you about it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nghtwing Posted May 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 [quote name='newhat' timestamp='1306693349' post='5240034'] You should make it "Normal Summoned", since Cost Down would allow it to be Summoned without Tribute. This card is better than Crush Card Virus and Gravity Bind combined. No kidding. You could wall your opponents for a really long time, since they're not even allowed to bring Brionac out to get this off the field. It's possible to overcome in most Decks, but it would take a really long time, long enough to kill your opponent with Raging Flame Sprite. [/quote] thanks! , i planned this card for some monsters like Leghul that cant attack directly , BUT since they have LOW ATKs i made this card for making more difficult to kill'em (:NEW CARD ADDED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 it has a neat effect, pretty good summoning one probably won't be able to destroy up to 3 monsters on it short of you killing it yourself this way, so I like it where'd you pull the pic from? 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 Actualy, the Advance or Tribute Summon it counts like a Normal Summon, so the correct is: This card cannot be [b]Normal [/b]Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand in face-up Defence Position when a Monster Card you control is destroyed by battle. When this card is Special Summoned by its effect, destroy all face-up Monster Cards whose ATK is higher than 1500. As long as[b],[/b] this card remains face-up [b]o[/b]n the field, Monster Cards whose ATK is higher than 1500 cannot be Summoned. When this card is destroyed inflict 500 Points to either player's Life Points. I like it! The OCG is good exept some minor errors 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nghtwing Posted May 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1306695411' post='5240108'] it has a neat effect, pretty good summoning one probably won't be able to destroy up to 3 monsters on it short of you killing it yourself this way, so I like it where'd you pull the pic from? 9.3/10 [/quote] Thank you *-* . I get the picture from Google , I discovered that if you search in English the results are different fom the ones you get searching in portuguese , It is a hundred per cent mor options cause I can search in both languages *0*[quote name='A.Prime' timestamp='1306695677' post='5240119'] Actualy, the Advance or Tribute Summon it counts like a Normal Summon, so the correct is: This card cannot be [b]Normal [/b]Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand in face-up Defence Position when a Monster Card you control is destroyed by battle. When this card is Special Summoned by its effect, destroy all face-up Monster Cards whose ATK is higher than 1500. As long as[b],[/b] this card remains face-up [b]o[/b]n the field, Monster Cards whose ATK is higher than 1500 cannot be Summoned. When this card is destroyed inflict 500 Points to either player's Life Points. I like it! The OCG is good exept some minor errors 8.5/10 [/quote] Thank you! , i'll fix some letters that were forgotten :S , thank you bud. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 Also: When this card is Flip Summoned, place 3 [b]"[/b]Fairy Counters[b]"[/b] on [b]it[/b]. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can remove 1 [b]"[/b]Fairy [b]Counter"[/b] [b]on[/b] this card to Special Summon 1 Fairy-Type [b]m[/b]onster [b]with 1500 or lower ATK[/b]. [b]When[/b] this card is destroyed by battle[b], with[/b] [b]"[/b]Fairy Counters[b]"[/b] on it, destroy 1 Monster Card [b]o[/b]n the field for each [b]"[/b]Fairy [b]Counter"[/b] on this card. 6/10 Overall 7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nghtwing Posted May 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 [quote name='A.Prime' timestamp='1306696030' post='5240140'] Also: When this card is Flip Summoned, place 3 [b]"[/b]Fairy Counters[b]"[/b] on [b]it[/b]. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can remove 1 [b]"[/b]Fairy [b]Counter"[/b] [b]on[/b] this card to Special Summon 1 Fairy-Type [b]m[/b]onster [b]with 1500 or lower ATK[/b]. [b]When[/b] this card is destroyed by battle[b], with[/b] [b]"[/b]Fairy Counters[b]"[/b] on it, destroy 1 Monster Card [b]o[/b]n the field for each [b]"[/b]Fairy [b]Counter"[/b] on this card. 6/10 Overall 7.3/10 [/quote] thanks again bud . i'm fixing the errors and learning from them (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 From where are you Special Summoning the monsters with Little Elf? The Deck? The Graveyard? It's not broken, but I'm not sure how to use it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nghtwing Posted May 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 [quote name='newhat' timestamp='1306696455' post='5240158'] From where are you Special Summoning the monsters with Little Elf? The Deck? The Graveyard? It's not broken, but I'm not sure how to use it. [/quote] the Deck (; , but i think it's better to write it on the card's effect right ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nghtwing Posted May 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 new caed added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 When this card is Flip Summoned, place 3 "Fairy Counters" on it. [b](max. 3)[/b] Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can remove 1 "Fairy Counter" from this card to Special Summon 1 Fairy-Type monster with 1500 or lower ATK from your hand. When this card is destroyed by battle, with "Fairy Counters" on it, destroy 1 Monster Card on the field for each "Fairy Counter" on this card. Sorry... I forgot that. My rate it's the same though. Also the 3rd card's OCG it's perfect! 8/10 (and rising!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 30, 2011 Report Share Posted May 30, 2011 nice new addition, like Raging Flame Sprite, but with a WAY long time to boost itself I would have increased it by 200 and not 100 instead 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nghtwing Posted May 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2011 [quote name='A.Prime' timestamp='1306703474' post='5240440'] When this card is Flip Summoned, place 3 "Fairy Counters" on it. [b](max. 3)[/b] Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can remove 1 "Fairy Counter" from this card to Special Summon 1 Fairy-Type monster with 1500 or lower ATK from your hand. When this card is destroyed by battle, with "Fairy Counters" on it, destroy 1 Monster Card on the field for each "Fairy Counter" on this card. Sorry... I forgot that. My rate it's the same though. Also the 3rd card's OCG it's perfect! 8/10 (and rising!) [/quote] Nah it's ok , we're all humans right? (i think my friend is an unicorn BUT ... ) thank you so much for the comments! , I'm really starting to think that I'm getting better ( a little but i'm)[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1306730848' post='5241305'] nice new addition, like Raging Flame Sprite, but with a WAY long time to boost itself I would have increased it by 200 and not 100 instead 9.5/10 [/quote] Yeah , i think it would be better too did you read the "update" I've made? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 31, 2011 Report Share Posted May 31, 2011 yeah but there's no new cards, so it matters not to me right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nghtwing Posted June 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1306875021' post='5244950'] yeah but there's no new cards, so it matters not to me right now [/quote] Yeah , BUT i really don't know what to do now , I have no ideas .-. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nghtwing Posted June 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 Newest addition - Clocktower Witch, please enjoy and rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Nghtwing Posted June 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 NEW ONE - HEALING FAIRY! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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