Suicune17 Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 Please judge my card [img]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/1750/184131.jpg[/img] Elemental Hero Avenger - "Elemental Hero Necroshade" + "2 DARK monster" This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon, or by returning the above cards you control to the Deck. During your Stand-by Phase, if this card attacked 5 times, this card is removed from play. This card's attack is equal to the number of monsters in the user's graveyard X 500. If this card is removed from the field, inflict damage equal to the ATK of this card and remove from play all monsters in the user's graveyard. [img]http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/1750/184131.jpg[/img] Elemental Hero Avenger's Spirit - This card cannot be special summoned except by it's own effect. If an Elemental Hero Avenger is removed from the field and removed from play 10 or above monster, Special Summon this card. Once per turn, you can equip this card to another monster card on the field. If this card is attacked, before damage calculation, equip this card to the attacking monster. The monster equipping this card loses or gains 500ATK. If the monster equipping this card is removed from the field, Special Summon this card to the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorin Markov Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 Elemental Hero Avenger - "Elemental Hero Necroshade" + "2 DARK monster" This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon, or by returning the above cards you control to the Deck. During your Stand-by Phase, if this card attacked 5 times, this card is removed from play. This card's attack is equal to the number of monsters in [s]the[/s] [s]user's[/s] [b]your[/b] graveyard X 500. If this card is removed from the field, inflict damage equal to the ATK of this card and remove from play all monsters in [s]the[/s] [s]user's[/s] [b]your[/b] graveyard. Elemental Hero Avenger's Spirit - This card cannot be [b]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummoned except by it's own effect. If an Elemental Hero Avenger is removed from the field and removed from play 10 or above monster, Special Summon this card. Once per turn, you can equip this card to another monster card on the field. If this card is attacked, before damage calculation, equip this card to the attacking monster. The monster equipping this card (loses or gains) 500 ATK. If the monster equipping this card is removed from the field, Special Summon this card to the field. [b]bold[/b]-Added [s]strikethrough[/s]-Took out (word)-Choose one or the other [spoiler=Without fixes] Elemental Hero Avenger -5/10-OCG 4/5-Balance 4/5-playabillity 5/5- Picture 4.5/5-Name Support Picture and Vice Versa 22.5/30-total Elemental Hero Avenger's Spirit -6/10-OCG 4/5-Balance 4/5-playabillity 5/5- Picture 4.5/5-Name Support Picture and Vice Versa 23.5/30-total Combined total 46/60=7.6/10[/spoiler] [spoiler=With fixes] Elemental Hero Avenger-8/10-OCG 4/5-Balance 4/5-playabillity 5/5- Picture 4.5/5-Name Support Picture and Vice Versa 25.5/30-total Elemental Hero Avenger's Spirit -8/10-OCG 4/5-Balance 4/5-playabillity 5/5- Picture 4.5/5-Name Support Picture and Vice Versa 25.5/30-total Combined total 51/60=8.5/10[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suicune17 Posted May 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2011 Thanks for rating it pretty high for my first try to make a worthy card that has a chance to be included in the real Yugioh Card Game. Any suggestions to the effects? I'll be doing another Card. I like doing an iconic card that depends on supports from other cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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