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I am going to be completely honest with you. I got three things that are bothering me.
1: It is too OP'ed because its DEF is too high and its effect is too broken.
2: The OCG is Off meaning the wording and how it is said needs to change.
3: I never heard of a Dark-type monster but at least it is creative.

Changes with the OCG: It should say something like this.
OCG Fix: [b]This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the number of cards in your Graveyard x1000. Once per turn, You can add 1 "Dead" monster from your Graveyard to your hand.[/b]

Opinions: Change the effect a little so it is less OP'ed(Over Powered). Make sure the ATK and DEF is fair and balanced with its effect. And I like the Pic, very Original. I would rate this 6/10.
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