Hudra Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 This is my 1. card..........plz comment it and suggest how to make it better [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/125ovgh.jpg[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gatsumoro Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 "You can Tribute Summon this card only by tributing 2 Dragon-Type monsters. This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If it does, destroy it during the End Phase." <---- maybe like that? Anyway, not bad for your 1st card. It's not over-powered. 6/10 (because of OCG) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 OCG: If you Tribute Summon this card, the tribues must be Dragon-Type. If your opponent controls a monster, this card can attack directly. If it does, destroy it during the End Phase. Attack is a little low for a 2 tribute monster with that drawback, I'd say bump it to 2500 and it'll be good if you fix the OCG a bit. And thank god you didn't give it the "This card cannot be Special Summoned" effect, that would've ruined it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hudra Posted May 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 Tj ^^....well i must admit spelling isn't my feeld Mirror B. originaly i put 2500 att but i nerfet it little down becouse of its op effect (if u combine it with for ex. call of the haunted it would do 5000 dmg with nerfe is 4600 and i personaly think that every LP is important ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matthew251 Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 A very good card the ocg has been cleaned up so all thats left for me ti say is: I's good its good like cake. 8/10 bearing in mind its your 1st card (a very good 1st attempt it is too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 boring because it lasts only 1 turn and has little effect than that still, it's your first, so I'll give you 7.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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