elonkudden Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 Here are my first cards. Please treat with care and give constructive criticism! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 That last is pretty awsome, you need to work on your grammar a bit. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elonkudden Posted February 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 Thanks, but in the editor, my cards were curäctli speldd ;). I dunno what's happened to them now - I used a normal tag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 You have random spaces in the fusion and 5505 is pretty random and overpowered. In the other cards you have % signs in it?I guess it's alright to make mistakes when your new at something. 4/10 for the effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen Moon Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 grammar erros 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 many errors, and they are far overpowered, ns try, but sorry, 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wilson91 Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 Grammar needs working on. 4/10. Good effort tho :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elonkudden Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Thanks, but all of you who posted about grammar errors - check post number 3, please! The overpowered thing... the fusion is really worth it cause "Beautiful Plant" is a ritual monster. As for the spaces/%20, I dunno how they got in there. EDIT: I found out what was wrong: I forgit to save the images on my computer and upload them, sorry :PNew cards in next edit! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
achoi2 Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 umm what can I say, hmm i know, the first is too strong, the 2nd too weak the 3rd, too strong, the grammer needs a bit of edit, but on the other hand, at least you tried, I give this a 5/10, needs a bit more editing, keep trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elonkudden Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 achoi2, what do you think of the new cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 The grammar is off on all of them, but hey, your a new member ^_^Pretty good for a new one 6/10If you ever want any help, just ask ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
achoi2 Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Ye I guess that true, since she is new, about the new cards you made, you forgot the Ritual Spell Card, the Grammer is kinda wrong for some cards, but the fire card is kinda too strong for defence for a level 7, if it was a level 8 then I think it will do fine, but still keep trying and you'll understand the game and creating cards a bit more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elonkudden Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 OK, thx! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 nice'ish just improve pic choice effect and grammar good effort for your first card:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elonkudden Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 'K! I'm impressed to get a review from the legendary God Kaiba ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 The picture on your last card is Uber kool ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zachy_syko Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 they need some work but pretty good for your first go. and flowers, real flowers? huhh...4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 well i still think its overpowered...and ur using totally random numbers 5505, 2495....??? and i read tat, and there still are other grammar errors... ns try though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Few grammar errorsI like the picturesTheir ATK and DEF is kinda random.Good try though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 nice pics but overall there not all that great 4.67/10 (not couting the spelling mistake cuz i make em all the time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Thanks' date=' but all of you who posted about grammar errors - check post number 3, please! The overpowered thing... the fusion is really worth it cause "Beautiful Plant" is a ritual monster. As for the spaces/%20, I dunno how they got in there. EDIT: I found out what was wrong: I forgit to save the images on my computer and upload them, sorry :PNew cards in next edit![img']http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/9351/aotwlv7.jpg[/img] all nice pics i like these 7.98/10 by the way water spirit thing is a girl that right a she not a he so fix that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elonkudden Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 all nice pics i like these 7.98/10 by the way water spirit thing is a girl that right a she not a he so fix that Why can't he be a boy? I don't get it... And all of you - geez! I told you to read post 3 for the grammar errors! If you need it so much, here: Overpowered: Geez... 1:"Beautiful Flower" is a Ritual card, for god's sake! 2: Battle damage is applied normally, remember? 3: It can't attack unless "WotM" is in Graveyard! 4: Elf is a Fusion!! 5: It's hard to get 3 Spirits in Graveyard. 6: OK - I admit, I was stupid there, but you can't target it with your cards either. 7: Not overpowered, and seriously, I think he's a boy! 8:Not overpowered, but funny!(laughs) And, please tell me what is wrong with the grammar, for the 3rd time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 For a new member these arn't bad at all, the pictures are brilliant to but you have many OCG errors still not to matter you are new. 7/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elonkudden Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 For a new member these arn't bad at all' date=' the pictures are brilliant to but you have many OCG errors still not to matter you are new. 7/10 ^_^[/quote'] ? I thought i looked it up correctly, please tell me what's wrong! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megakenny Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 tiny bit overpowered , and grammer errors 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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