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[spoiler= Candida and Lilith, normal versions][img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/3937/420519.jpg[/img]

[i]Lore:
Spirits are not always malevolent beings; the ones that are, however, are captured by this huntress of souls. Arrows from this holy bow travel faster than lightning, piercing and illuminating the blackened souls of the corrupt. Her mission of destruction is with the ideal of spiritual rebirth for her foes, though there are others, beings that are shadows within shadows, with a much more wicked desire for souls.[/i]

[img]http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/3937/420519.jpg[/img]
[i]Lore:
Beyond death lies a darkness far worse. When corruption is left undisturbed by the forces of light, a Devourer is formed. A fierce combatant and predator of weak souls, this witch is a formidable opponent for even the most blessed of Spirit Hunters. Souls of the deceased beware; even the wicked should avoid this wretched being, as being her prey is a fate far worse than even eternal damnation.[/i]

I am going to make effect versions of these two, with Candida taking down fiends to bring out Fairies, and Lilith absorbing one or the other. Also failed at making the text interesting, I know.
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EDIT: Effect versions.
[spoiler= Candida and Lilith, Effects]
[img]http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/3937/420519.jpg[/img]

[i]Effect:
When this card is selected as the target of an attack, or when this card selects a monster as the target of an attack, and the monster is a Fiend-Type monster, increase the ATK of this card by 500 during the Damage Step only. When this card destroys a DARK monster by battle, you can Special Summon 1 Fairy-Type monster from your hand whose ATK is equal to or lower than the difference between the ATK of this card and the ATK of the destroyed monster.[/i]

[img]http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/3937/420519.jpg[/img]

[i]Effect:
When you control a Fiend-Type monster, this card cannot be selected the as the target of an attack. When this card destroys a Fairy-Type or Fiend-Type monster by battle, increase the ATK of this card by the difference between the ATK of this card and the ATK of the destroyed monster until the End Phase of your next turn. Once per turn, During the End Phase, if there are no LIGHT monsters on the field, increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 200.[/i]
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[spoiler= Cassandra (Both Versions)][img]http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/6033/420519k.jpg[/img]

[i]Lore:
The thought of devouring souls used to be quite unsettling, but ambition is an amazing anesthetic for the pain of wrongdoings. Certainly this isn't corruption; it is under control... When you grow accustomed to the power this darkness gives you, you would certainly wish for more as well.[/i]

[img]http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/3937/420519.jpg[/img]
[i]Effect:
When you control Fiend-Type monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, place 1 Corruption Counter on this card. This card gains 100 ATK for each Corruption Counter on it. When this card has Corruption Counters on it equal to its level, it is destroyed in the End Phase. When this card is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Proto Spirit Devourer" from your hand or Deck.[/i]

Yes, this is perhaps a more disappointing effect without supporting cards, but it serves to the point that Cassandra is destroyed by her own ambition, and that her influence survives past death, as is with the summoning of Proto Spirit Devourer...
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[img]http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/3937/420519.jpg[/img]

[i]Lore:
We were all human. Once. Often times a Spirit Devourer will, in defeat, revert to their weakest, human form again. If not, their corrupted essence, though much weaker, will still exist to claim another host. The worst thing for a Spirit Hunter to do is let a Proto Devourer live. We feel no debts to any being, and when met again, the same Hunter that spared a Proto Devourer will often be slain by their more powerful recovered form.[/i]
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I guess changing them to Fairy and Fiend would be okay, but I did not wish to do that, as they aren't supposed to be members of the mystical beings they are after, rather they became involved with those beings and took different sides of the matter. Lilith's effect form is coming up.

EDIT: Effect form IS up.
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You can shorten the first effect of Candida to "When this card attacks or is attacked by a Fiend-Type monster...". It would mainly be useful against The Fabled Unicore; Infernity would destroy it. Giving it the Warrior Type makes it difficult to use effectively in a Deck that would benefit from its second effect.

Given that Lilith's automatic boost is only 200, it will take two turns for it to equal Stardust Dragon; an ATK cap doesn't seem necessary. The first effect is the one that will give massive boosts. Killing Sangan yields 3200 ATK.
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Eep, you're right. Lilith is supposed to be a type-specific deck destroyer, but that boost warrants she have a more difficult summoning condition. Perhaps she can only be summoned when there are no light monsters on the field and by tributing fiends.
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You can fix Lilith by giving her ATK equal to the DEF of the destroyed monster instead of the difference between their ATK values. Since most Fiends don't have much DEF, this won't lead to so much curb-stomping. As for the Fairy bit, it's not a problem, since they can just kill her with Honest.
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AWWWWW YEAH! What I've been waiting for.

These are very good effects, and original too as I have not seen them before-such is one's definition of originality. Also, the effect of Lilith requires no cap and I'll tell you why. With as many anit-summoning cards (I.E.: Trap Hole) and field clear cards their are this monster can be stopped with ease, there's also cards like Ekobio Drakmord (did I spell that right? Don't care...) That not only stop ones attack but kill the monster in two turns. If this monster gets a high attack from that effect it is at the complete fault of the opponent for not being prepared.
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I might, seeing as the HP Doom archive tribute set does not seem popular. That, and I have not gotten around to thanking Jazin Kay, though all of my cards, excluding the HP Doom archive set, are from Jazin Kay's archive.
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[center][b][color="#8B0000"]The pic's are good, well balanced (though the Normal versions May be considered Underpowered)

Nice Flavor text on the Normal cards =D!

The effect versions are nice. Original Effects. Just some Minor OCG error's.

Candida OCG Fix:[/color][/b]
When this card is targeted for an attack, or if this card targets a monster for an attack, and the monster is a Fiend-Type monster, increase the ATK of this card by 500 during the Damage Step only. When this card destroys a DARK monster by battle, [b]you can Special Summon 1 Fairy-Type monster whose ATK is equal to or lower than the difference between the ATK of this card and the ATK of the destroyed monster.
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On the bold, Special Summon from where; Hand, Graveyard, Deck, etc.[/color]

[color="#8B0000"][b]Lilith OCG Fix[/b][/color]

When you control a Fiend-Type monster, this card cannot be targeted for an attack. When this card destroys a Fairy-Type [b]of[/b] Fiend-Type monster by battle, increase the ATK of this card by the difference between the ATK of this card and the ATK of the destroyed monster until the End Phase of your next turn. Once per turn, During the End Phase, if there are no LIGHT monsters on the field, increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 200.
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On the bold, did you mean or?[/color][/center]
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Thank you! I am on my phone now and will not be back at my computer until tomorrow, but I am planning a surprise for the set, as well as working on the spells and traps and forming the story of the hunters and devourers with the normal monsters. If I were a better writer, I would plan a written story.
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