Elite Wolf Ezarian

[Bundu45]

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[Qu@ke]

Hello again, my card making friend!

"Elite Wolf" isn't a type, if you wanted to do something that includes them say "A monster with "Elite Wolf" in it's card name" or in this case just use Beast type and that way you can use it well in a beast deck.

So if you decide to take my advice it'll be reworded as:

1 Beast-Type Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner "Beast-Type monsters
As long as this card remains Face-up on the Field, negate and destroy Spell or Trap cards that designate any Beast-Type monster as a target.

Name: 4/5 "Elite Wolf" Seems to be a title you should put it as "Elite Wolf-Ezarian" However there's nothing to major wrong
Pic: 4/5 Seems pretty standard to me but I feel like you could have found something more suited
Effect: 7/10 Basic, a good place to start for someone new =D
OCG: 3/10, Everything capitalized, the effect isn't written out right, needs some work on who the effect is targeting.
Balance: 7/10 It's effect will run hell on the opponent in an all beast deck but overall would be pretty easy to deal with
Playability: 8/10 in an all beast deck this would play out great but very few seem interested in wanting beast decks so I feels as though they'd try to run this using whatever they have lol but it should be pretty easy to get out.

Overall: 33/50, keep trying, dont give up

[Missing Number]

[quote name='Qu@ke' timestamp='1306654866' post='5239270']
Hello again, my card making friend!

"Elite Wolf" isn't a type, if you wanted to do something that includes them say "A monster with "Elite Wolf" in it's card name" or in this case just use Beast type and that way you can use it well in a beast deck.

So if you decide to take my advice it'll be reworded as:

1 Beast-Type Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner "Beast-Type monsters
As long as this card remains Face-up on the Field, negate and destroy Spell or Trap cards that designate any Beast-Type monster as a target.

Name: 4/5 "Elite Wolf" Seems to be a title you should put it as "Elite Wolf-Ezarian" However there's nothing to major wrong
Pic: 4/5 Seems pretty standard to me but I feel like you could have found something more suited
Effect: 7/10 Basic, a good place to start for someone new =D
OCG: 3/10, Everything capitalized, the effect isn't written out right, needs some work on who the effect is targeting.
Balance: 7/10 It's effect will run hell on the opponent in an all beast deck but overall would be pretty easy to deal with
Playability: 8/10 in an all beast deck this would play out great but very few seem interested in wanting beast decks so I feels as though they'd try to run this using whatever they have lol but it should be pretty easy to get out.

Overall: 33/50, keep trying, dont give up
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hehehe dont take this the wrong way, im not picking a fight, but i dont think you should tell him to change it up that much... "Elite Wolf" is, im guessing, his archetype, so it should be 1 "Elite Wolf" Tuner + 1 or more "Elite Wolf" monsters..... etc.

he could just go for "Wolf", but it might be too standard as it'd include "Twin-Headed Wolf" and just plain ol' "Wolf" to name a few

and, im guessing since he already posted an '"Elite Wolf", he should probably turn this into a single thread, with a [2/??] instead of making multiple

[ragnarok1945]

this is barely more than Horus Lv8, just used for traps instead

and even then Horus lv8's effect is better

I'd give it another effect to match that or something

7/10