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LORE: [B]This card cannot be special summoned. Once per turn you can discard 1 card from your hand to put 1 "Green Spore" counter on this card. You may discard 4 "Green Spore" counters from this card to Special summon "Eternal Colossal" from your hand, deck or graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no battle damage from battles involving this card.[/B]

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Please help me if I did something wrong.
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[quote name='lmpossible' timestamp='1306692763' post='5240012']
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LORE: [b]This card cannot be special summoned. Once per turn you can discard 1 card from your hand to put 1 "Green Spore" counter on this card. You may discard 4 "Green Spore" counters from this card to Special summon "Eternal Colossal" from your hand, deck or graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no battle damage from battles involving this card.[/b]

Thank you!

Please help me if I did something wrong.
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Very good, it's effect may either be to powerful or just right, considering how hard it is to destroy
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This card cannot be [b]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummoned. Once per turn[b],[/b] you can discard 1 card from your hand to [b]place[/b] 1 "Green Spore [b]C[/b]ounter[b]"[/b] on this card. [b](max. 4)[/b] You [b]can[/b] [b]remove[/b] 4 "Green Spore [b]C[/b]ounters[b]"[/b] [b]on[/b] this card to Special [b]S[/b]ummon [b]1 [/b]"Eternal Colossal" from your hand, [b]D[/b]eck or [b]G[/b]raveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no battle damage from battles involving this card.

No bad, you need work on OCG, (Official Card Grammar), but for 1st card it's ok. I think it's a little bit OP'ed, but anyway....

My rate 6.5/10
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I think it should be changed to a 6* monster and the effect should be:

"This card cannot be special summoned. Once per turn you can discard 1 card from your hand to put 1 "Green Spore" counter on this card. You may discard 5 "Green Spore" counters from this card to Special summon "Eternal Colossal" from your hand, deck or graveyard. You take no battle damage from battles involving this card."

That's my opinion but it's very good for a first card :)

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