ActionTurnip Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 Hello folks! I'm completely new to this forum. I decided to try out this card maker program just for the hell of it. I threw together these 3 shmos: [img]http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/1373/422124.jpg[/img] Lore: Increase the ATK and DEF by 300 points for each face-up FIRE monster on the field. When this monster is sent to the graveyard as a result of battle, you may move 1 FIRE monster from your deck to your hand. [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/1373/422124.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is sent from the field to the graveyard, select 1 magic card from your Deck, show it to your opponent, and add it to your hand. Then shuffle your Deck. (Update: used to have 5 stars, now has 4 stars.) [img]http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/1373/422124.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is attacked, increase your life points by the ATK of the attacking monster. (Update: Changed the word "offending" to "attacking" because apparently "offending isn't a term".) I couldn't think of interesting names so I decided to give them pretentious Latin names. (Cuz Latin sounds cool... I guess...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cobalt2 Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 Not bad for a first try... Infra Daemn is very underpowered. Give him 2300-2500 ATK. OCG is off somewhat. Latin- I've got to try that... I'll give it a ... 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loiden Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 offending is not a not a term but since its your first card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 Post the Effects of the card underneath the card, this is called "Posting the Lore", when you don't do it, people will not help you with the OCG of your cards, therefore, you ALWAYS post the Lore... Your OCG is incredibly off, but for a noob, its not [b]that[/b] bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ActionTurnip Posted May 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 I'm sure they all need work. Thanks for the suggestions. [quote name='Cobalt_000' timestamp='1306709788' post='5240668'] Not bad for a first try... Infra Daemn is very underpowered. Give him 2300-2500 ATK. OCG is off somewhat. Latin- I've got to try that... I'll give it a ... 7.5/10 [/quote] I made it underpowered because of it's special ability, but you're probably right. Perhaps if I just took away a star...? [quote name='Boss Z' timestamp='1306710405' post='5240684'] Post the Effects of the card underneath the card, this is called "Posting the Lore", when you don't do it, people will not help you with the OCG of your cards, therefore, you ALWAYS post the Lore... Your OCG is incredibly off, but for a noob, its not [b]that[/b] bad [/quote] Ah, of course. I never fully understood what OCG meant from the Yu-Gi-Oh wikia definition... but I see what you mean about the "lore". It would be best if I posted it alongside them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 30, 2011 Report Share Posted May 30, 2011 last card is just like Draining Shield, nothing too new Daemn I wouldn't have shown the spell card to your opponent, otherwise it's UPed 7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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