My first cards, pls rate

[Mariofreak95]

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This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summond, only if you sacrifice Minotaurus equipped with "Battle Axe". This cards gains for every monster your opponent summon 300 ATK and can attack twice.

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This card cannot be normal summoned. This card cannot be special summoned, only if you sacrifice Minotaurus equipped with "Fire Swords". This cards gains for every monster your opponent summon 300 DEF. If this monster attacks a face-down monster, destroy the monster with the effect of this monster.

[Lyfe.]

A few capitalization errors such as "summoned" rather than "Summoned". OCG is off. Try to refrain from using black and white images, as they are not realistic. I also see them as a tad Over Powered.

Overall, 4/10, but as you stated, they are your first cards. You'll improve in time

[Mariofreak95]

[quote name='Lyfe.' timestamp='1306949624' post='5246610']
A few capitalization errors such as "summoned" rather than "Summoned". OCG is off. Try to refrain from using black and white images, as they are not realistic. I also see them as a tad Over Powered.

Overall, 4/10, but as you stated, they are your first cards. You'll improve in time
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Thank you for your comment, I'm not good in english, so I cannot swear that OCG will be better, but thanks anyway

[ragnarok1945]

1st card is OPed for multi attacks unless you say it can't attack directly, given its atk boosting effect

but since you're new I'll give these cards 5.5/10