aboo_portugal_786 Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adil Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 some ocg errorsnice picit's good, in the first card it's not "Fary" but Fairy and opponent's instead of opponenst...lol8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aboo_portugal_786 Posted February 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 lol my mistake! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest nwslap12 Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 well, pretty generic effectsi like the pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wilson91 Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 Awesome cards. A slight spelling error. I'll give 'em a 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Good effort, i hope to see more ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 A few errors.But good effort. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aboo_portugal_786 Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Thanks for the comments... i kno i do have gramar erros. (NOT MY FAULT I HATE ENGLISH) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 There are some grammer and OCG errors, but otherwise they're still fairly good 7/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soulrobber666 Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Awesome cards, just one thing: your spell card isn't continuous, so the effect "while this card is on the field" isn't really coherent. Some grammar mistakes, but a really good effort. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 The first card's image could be better seeing that it has a signature in the left hand corner. Some grammar and ocg errors, but not bad. Reinforcements may be broken because if you made it continuous it'd make them all 1700 that could possibly attack directly and if not become tribute fodders. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 good effort:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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