cheezeman224 Posted June 2, 2011 Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 [img]http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/189/204716.jpg[/img] [img]http://img848.imageshack.us/img848/189/204716.jpg[/img] [img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/189/204716.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snyperfox2003 Posted June 2, 2011 Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 minor ocg errors and naruto and sasuke need backgrounds but not bad 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheezeman224 Posted June 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 Aha fixed the errors (i think) and i found a bit better pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Auralady Posted June 3, 2011 Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 Naruto should be wind.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheezeman224 Posted June 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 other than that how much would u rate it out of ten???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted June 3, 2011 Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 Pics are good, though Sasuke's looks a bit pixelated. I can see FIRE Naruto because of the 9-Tailed Fox, but he is a Ninja, so WIND might be better. Official Grammar and card format tips: Numbers are not spelled out. You discard 1 card, not one. "A '(insert card name here)' card" isn't necessary. Sakura's effect should read "While "Sasuke" is face-up on your side of the field..." Graveyard, Deck, Special Summon, Normal Summon, etc. are all Capitalized. "Hand" is not, though. When it comes to commas, regular English grammar is used. "When this card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard, Special Summon it to your side of the field." "Limited Edition" isn't called "Limited Addition" >_> Levels are disproportionate to ATK value. Look up "Level" on the Yu-Gi-Oh Wiki; Levels are assigned based on ATK value. Effects and DEF usually don't affect it. For your OCG errors and general ignorance of proper English, I must give a 5/10. Just keep trying, you'll get it with time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheezeman224 Posted June 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 haha ok thx i need a bit more practice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unforgiven Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 All I have to say is that Fire is right, because The Hidden Leaf Village is in the Land of Fire. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scott21900 Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 naruto is wind because his chakra nature is wind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Dark one~ Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 about 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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