SNASHU Posted June 3, 2011 Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 take a look at this guy and tell me if u like him or not.... [img]http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/3384/394253.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
catpurr Posted June 3, 2011 Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 The picture is good, if it wasn't for the writing on it. "Earth Spirit" isn't a type. DEF is way too high. You spelt "Ruine" wrong. You have a normal monster description on an effect monster. I don't want to sound mean but it isn't a very good card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iaashadow Posted June 3, 2011 Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 [quote name='catpurr' timestamp='1307101775' post='5250797'] The picture is good, if it wasn't for the writing on it. "Earth Spirit" isn't a type. DEF is way too high. You spelt "Ruine" wrong. You have a normal monster description on an effect monster. I don't want to sound mean but it isn't a very good card. [/quote] I have to agree here 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SNASHU Posted June 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 thanx for being honest i will fix him and he was made to be purely for defence not attack THANX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ss2phil Posted June 3, 2011 Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 2/10 and I'm generous, cause you made vital errors on this one (Writing a card lore in the card text of an effect monster and inventing a type without first saying it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 3, 2011 Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 it doesn't have the characteristics of the spirit cards too much def power and the description isn't even that of an effect card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SNASHU Posted June 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 OKAAAAAAA so this was a stuff then wat about these 2 [img]http://img863.imageshack.us/img863/3384/394253.jpg[/img] [img]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/3384/394253.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted June 4, 2011 Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 OBJECTIVE: Cyber Dragon is [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Cyber_Dragon"]already a card[/url]. Magic and Spell are the same thing. Gemini is a special kind of monster with a very specific effect; you just want "EFFECT". The lore should be "This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards." Nitro Dio has a yellow border. That's the Normal Monster border. You want the Effect Monster border (orange-brown). The lore should be "This card cannot be Special Summoned. During the third End Phase after this card was Summoned, if your opponent controls two or more monsters, this card gains 2500 ATK and 1000 DEF." SUBJECTIVE: The Cyber Dragon card is overpowered. Even though it's Level 9, [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Red-Eyes_Darkness_Metal_Dragon"]Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon[/url] can get it out for free, and it's immune to Spells and Traps. Consider giving it immunity only to Spells and Traps that target it. Nitro Dio Dragon's effect is not useful. Its ATK is already as high as it needs to be, and raising its DEF is pointless because you rarely see anything with more than 3000. If you made it a Dragon (you should; Divine-Beast is fairly exclusive) it could be Tribute Summoned easily with [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Totem_Dragon"]Totem Dragon[/url]. For what kind of Deck are these cards intended? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rooster Posted June 4, 2011 Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 Your cards suck breh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SNASHU Posted June 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 OKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA so i suck apparently so im just goin to stop is that wat ur sain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted June 4, 2011 Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 [quote name='catpurr' timestamp='1307101775' post='5250797'] You spelt "Ruine" wrong. [/quote] [font="Tahoma"][b]You spelt "Ruin" wrong awesome Card Grammar advice there bro. Also, who knows maybe he was trying to be creative with the name? Snashu no you don't suck at making cards you're just making a few beginner mistakes don't give up and quit. Send me a PM I'll be happy to give you some help and advice on card making.[/b][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niv-Mizzet Posted June 4, 2011 Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 At least they're not attachments... But seriously, dude, if you learn how to write proper OCG, you show promise as a card maker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SNASHU Posted June 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 thanx guys i need work mabey i was bein to extream.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loiden Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 listen to the other people. .7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 I'd be glad to help you if you need anything. I see hundreds of cards daily that I have to put my own little review on. If you need any assistance, anything at all, I would be glad to help. I suggest you get in contact with the Newb Defense League, and Card Maker Academy II. They are both clubs who would be happy to help you out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted June 25, 2011 Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 D: mmmkay? -0.0/10 Read the rules before you post dude... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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